Tere badoulat hain zindagi meri, Mere sanso ko karz tera hain

by livingbytheday on July 06, 2012, 03:39:49 PM
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Tere badoulat hain zindagi meri, Mere sanso ko karz tera hain
Main uss apne ko dhundhta hu jise, Log kehte hain sirf mera hain
 
Kaise keh du ki ub nahi hu, tanha tanha mai iss zamane mein
Jise rakhta hu zindagi ki tarah, wo hi kehta nahi wo mera hain

Yeh sach hain ki teri sohbat mein, maine rishton ke maayne samjhe
Mujhe jitna yaqeen hain khud pe, Ussey jyada yaqeen tera hain

Mere haathon ki in lakiron ko, Tumse milne ki ek zidd si hain
meri sub manzilon ki hudh tu hain, tu hi har raat ka savera hain

suna hain sham ko yeh tanhayee, toote dil ka shikaar karti hain
apni yaadon ke deep de jao, raah mein duur tak andhera hain

ub toh parthar ke mol biktey hain, koi iski keemat kya dega
sona ke jewar chhod dil le gaya, kitna nadaan yeh lootera hain

Subah kaano mein bolti koyal, Sham parvat ke geet suntey tey
Tere jaate badal gaya sab kuch, sar pe kaale badalon ka ghera hain

ek wo mera chupa hua hain kahin, saare in ajnabi se chehro mein
Main uss apne ko dhundhta hu jise, Log kehte hain sirf mera hain
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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2012, 03:46:41 PM »
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bahut badhiya...... bahut hi umda qalaam
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2012, 04:00:23 PM »
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Usse jyada yakeen tera hai..
bhai vaah..ye ash'aar..kya kahna...dil loot le gaya..
bahut umda ghajal..vaah vaah vaah
aate rahiye, likhte rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2012, 04:49:44 PM »
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bahut achha likha hai livingbythedayji
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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2012, 05:32:35 PM »
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Deepak Jee Aadaab!


janab bahut khoob aur umdaa khayaaloN ko piroya hai aapne...
Sabhi ahsaas O khyaal behad khoob lage hume... Usual Smile

Aur ashaar bhi kafi achche rahe... Humari dheroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 

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«Reply #5 on: July 07, 2012, 12:40:39 AM »
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waah waah bahhut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2012, 01:21:30 AM »
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very good , achche khayalat hain   Applause    Applause    Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2012, 02:10:38 AM »
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bahut badhiya...... bahut hi umda qalaam


thank you sir
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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2012, 02:12:28 AM »
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Usse jyada yakeen tera hai..
bhai vaah..ye ash'aar..kya kahna...dil loot le gaya..
bahut umda ghajal..vaah vaah vaah
aate rahiye, likhte rahiye

thank you sir ji, aap logo ki yeh encouragement mujhe accha likhne ki jimmedaari deti hain, thank you so much for kind words sir
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2012, 02:24:30 AM »
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living dost mast likha hai tumne.

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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2012, 02:53:03 PM »
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bahut achha likha hai livingbythedayji

thank you so much
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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2012, 02:54:11 PM »
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Deepak Jee Aadaab!


janab bahut khoob aur umdaa khayaaloN ko piroya hai aapne...
Sabhi ahsaas O khyaal behad khoob lage hume... Usual Smile

Aur ashaar bhi kafi achche rahe... Humari dheroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 



thank you so much
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«Reply #12 on: July 07, 2012, 02:54:52 PM »
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waah waah bahhut khoob

thank you sir
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«Reply #13 on: July 07, 2012, 02:56:08 PM »
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very good , achche khayalat hain   Applause    Applause    Applause


thank you
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«Reply #14 on: July 07, 2012, 02:57:37 PM »
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living dost mast likha hai tumne.

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