tere pyar mein marta hi raha [ghajal ]

by saahill on January 23, 2011, 05:14:48 AM
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dil ke pehlu mein main aakar khud se shikwa  karta raha
kyun lagaya khud dil tudvaaya pyar mein tere marta raha ,
dil ke pehlu mein main aakar khud se shikwa karta raha ........

chahton ka tha jo manzar shayad usko bhool nai paaoun ...2
yaad rakhne ke liye main to khud ko hi bhoolta raha ....

sehra mein tha to pyasa nahin tha koi mujhe yeh samjhaye ....2
saagar mein rehkar  bhi main to pyaasa khud hi tarphta raha ,

phoolon ka ek aashyan tha jo maine banaaya tere liye ...2
kaanton ki sez pe main to akela karwatien bas badalta raha

raahon mein teri maine to apni nazron ko bichaaya tha ...2
isliye main khawabon ko unke[ nazron se] ghar se beghar karta raha



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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2011, 05:24:50 AM »
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mast hai ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2011, 05:26:35 AM »
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good 1 saahil ji...keep writing...
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2011, 05:28:21 AM »
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thx nirala ji and anu ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2011, 05:53:58 AM »
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dil ke pehlu mein main aakar khud se shikwa  karta raha
kyun lagaya khud dil tudvaaya pyar mein tere marta raha ,
dil ke pehlu mein main aakar khud se shikwa karta raha ........

chahton ka tha jo manzar shayad usko bhool nai paaoun ...2
yaad rakhne ke liye main to khud ko hi bhoolta raha ....

sehra mein tha to pyasa nahin tha koi mujhe yeh samjhaye ....2
saagar mein rehkar  bhi main to pyaasa khud hi tarphta raha ,

phoolon ka ek aashyan tha jo maine banaaya tere liye ...2
kaanton ki sez pe main to akela karwatien bas badalta raha

raahon mein teri maine to apni nazron ko bichaaya tha ...2
isliye main khawabon ko unke[ nazron se] ghar se beghar karta raha


Bahut Khoob ... saahill Ji !

Sabhi ashaar ke ehsaas bahut umdaa se adaa kiye hai aapne ... ! ek acchi peshkash rahi ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... !

aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2011, 05:55:37 AM »
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thz anshu ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2011, 06:42:39 PM »
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Bahut Khub Sahil JI
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2011, 01:53:40 AM »
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Thx 2 all frend
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