Teri Firaooniyat ka Dar Nahi hai ( Qadeertoopchi)

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Chupane sar ko garche Ghar nahi hai
Kissi ke dar pe mera sar nahi hai

Khuda ka ghar hai subko sub milega
ameer e shahr ka daftar nahi hai

Abhi moosa sifat hai khaum apni
teri firaooniyat ka dar nahi hai

sabhi rishtun ko maine aazmaaya
Faqat ik maa’n ke dil me shar nahi hai

Diya hai zakhm Usne phir zubaan se
Agarche haat me khanjar nahi hai

Qadeer ab kyun na hum ko daibetis ho
Paseene se labadah tar nahi hai

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2014, 01:09:30 PM »
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बहुत खूब....

Diya hai zakhm Usne phir zubaan se
Agarche haat me khanjar nahi hai


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«Reply #2 on: April 29, 2014, 01:40:13 PM »
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waah waah waah waah waah waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2014, 02:31:58 PM »
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waah waah waah waah waah waah waah


Mahutram Saini Sahab ..aadab ..

Apka Khat mila , Faqr o massarat ka baais bana ...Matle ke misra-e-oola ke mutaliq aapki baat khabile qubool hai ....Wahan lafz KO ka Mahal hai ..misra yun parhen ..( Bhale Sar ko chupane Ghar nahi ) ........ya phir ( Agar sar ko chupane ghar nahi hai )

Dua go

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«Reply #4 on: April 29, 2014, 02:34:34 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on April 29, 2014, 01:09:30 PM
बहुत खूब....

Diya hai zakhm Usne phir zubaan se
Agarche haat me khanjar nahi hai


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«Reply #5 on: April 29, 2014, 02:44:29 PM »
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Bohat Bohat Khub Qadeer Ji!

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«Reply #6 on: April 29, 2014, 03:22:27 PM »
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Abhi moosa sifat hai khaum apni
teri firaooniyat ka dar nahi hai

sabhi rishtun ko maine aazmaaya
Faqat ik maa’n ke dil me shar nahi hai

Diya hai zakhm Usne phir zubaan se
Agarche haat me khanjar nahi hai

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«Reply #7 on: April 29, 2014, 04:49:16 PM »
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Bahut achhe ashaar kahe hain , Qadeer saheb . Lekin Saini saheb ko di gai  aapki wazahat durust nahi hai kyunki chhupane ki baat chhup nahi rahi hai.   
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2014, 05:27:00 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 29, 2014, 04:49:16 PM
Bahut achhe ashaar kahe hain , Qadeer saheb . Lekin Saini saheb ko di gai  aapki wazahat durust nahi hai kyunki chhupane ki baat chhup nahi rahi hai.  

Mahutram Maujooda misre me Lafze KO maujood hai... Ab mujhe koi Aur chiz nazar nahi aati ..Kya hi acha ho ke Aap Kholkar kahen ke aapka aitraz kya hai ..Mai filhal Office me hun Abhi apka message Parha ....Aap kahna kya chahte hain ...Lafz chupaane ki baat agar aap kar rahe hain to mahutram Wo apni jagah bilkul durst hai ...Misre ko yun parhe'n aap ( Bhale sar ko chupane , ghar nahi hai ) Aap be takkaluf ho kar likhen jo likhna hai ..taake mai Aapki rahenumaee me misra thik kar sakon ....aur isme koi bura maane wali baat nahi chunke qadeer ka kalam bhi kalam-e-insaani hai kalam-e-ilahi nahi ke har ghalati se paak ho ..han magar jahan tak ilm aur fun ki barikiyun ki baat hai to mahutram usse seekhne me koi sharm nahi ..Aap batayen ke apka aitraz kya hai ...

Bahut Ghaur o fikr karne ke baad Aapke daqeeq aitraz tak rasaee ho paaee hai agarche ap ye kahna chahte hain ke lafze CHUPAANE  ke baad lafze KO ka segha zaroori hai to misre ko yun parhe'n ...( Chupane sar ko garche ghar nahi hai)


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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2014, 06:10:16 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 29, 2014, 12:47:41 PM
Bhale sar ko chupane ghar nahi hai
Kissi ke dar pe mera sar nahi hai

Khuda ka ghar hai subko sub milega
ameer e shahr ka daftar nahi hai

Abhi moosa sifat hai khaum apni
teri firaooniyat ka dar nahi hai

sabhi rishtun ko maine aazmaaya
Faqat ik maa’n ke dil me shar nahi hai

Diya hai zakhm Usne phir zubaan se
Agarche haat me khanjar nahi hai

Qadeer ab kyun na hum ko daibetis ho
Paseene se labadah tar nahi hai

Qadeertoopchi



bhhale sar chhupaane ko ghar nahin hai.
kisee ke dar pe mera sar nahin hai.

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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2014, 06:13:28 PM »
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bhhale sar chhupaane ko ghar nahin hai.
kisee ke dar pe mera sar nahin hai.

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Mahutram Qalb sahab ...Apke andaze dad se fun per apki giraft ka andaza ho raha hai ...Shukriyah ke aapne is haqeer o faqeer ko taliyun se nawaze ...Allah apko khush rakhe ..

Dua go

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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on April 29, 2014, 02:44:29 PM
Bohat Bohat Khub Qadeer Ji!

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Mahutrama Shireen Hakkani Sahibah ...Apko ghazal pasand aaee jaankar acha laga ..

Dua go
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bhhale sar chhupaane ko ghar nahin hai.
kisee ke dar pe mera sar nahin hai.

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Lijiye Apki aara ke mutabiq misra badal diya hai ..
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Quote from: premdeep on April 29, 2014, 03:22:27 PM
Abhi moosa sifat hai khaum apni
teri firaooniyat ka dar nahi hai

sabhi rishtun ko maine aazmaaya
Faqat ik maa’n ke dil me shar nahi hai

Diya hai zakhm Usne phir zubaan se
Agarche haat me khanjar nahi hai

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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley excellent sir matla behad khoob raha


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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 29, 2014, 05:27:00 PM
Mahutram Maujooda misre me Lafze KO maujood hai... Ab mujhe koi Aur chiz nazar nahi aati ..Kya hi acha ho ke Aap Kholkar kahen ke aapka aitraz kya hai ..Mai filhal Office me hun Abhi apka message Parha ....Aap kahna kya chahte hain ...Lafz chupaane ki baat agar aap kar rahe hain to mahutram Wo apni jagah bilkul durst hai ...Misre ko yun parhe'n aap ( Bhale sar ko chupane , ghar nahi hai ) Aap be takkaluf ho kar likhen jo likhna hai ..taake mai Aapki rahenumaee me misra thik kar sakon ....aur isme koi bura maane wali baat nahi chunke qadeer ka kalam bhi kalam-e-insaani hai kalam-e-ilahi nahi ke har ghalati se paak ho ..han magar jahan tak ilm aur fun ki barikiyun ki baat hai to mahutram usse seekhne me koi sharm nahi ..Aap batayen ke apka aitraz kya hai ...

Bahut Ghaur o fikr karne ke baad Aapke daqeeq aitraz tak rasaee ho paaee hai agarche ap ye kahna chahte hain ke lafze CHUPAANE  ke baad lafze KO ka segha zaroori hai to misre ko yun parhe'n ...( Chupane sar ko garche ghar nahi hai)


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Qadeer saheb shukriya . aap sahi samjhe , mera aitraz KO ke seeghe ko lekar hi thha aur yahi shayed Saini sb ka raha hoga. Aap ne doosri tarmeem behtar ki hai . Lekin zubaan mein qabahat baherhaal moujood hai. Yeh baat zuroor hai ki Bahr ki majbooriyon ki wajah se yeh istemaal bhi ho sakta hai , kabhi kabhi hota hai ,aur ise ghalat nahi thahraya jasakta .....Yeh bhi waazeh kar doon ki aam taur se main tanqeed karne se gurez karta hoon ,aur sirf apni tanqeed ka, jahan zuroori samajhta hoon, jawab dene ki koshish karta hoon . Yahan bhi chunki   aapne Saini sb ko jawab dekar baat aage chalaai , maine bhi apni raai dedi.Ise hargiz ghalat na samjhein . Main muazrat khwah hoon.    
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