Teri Firaooniyat ka Dar Nahi hai ( Qadeertoopchi) -Panna 2:Ghazals

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«Reply #15 on: April 29, 2014, 07:24:26 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 29, 2014, 07:13:07 PM

Qadeer saheb shukriya . aap sahi samjhe , mera aitraz KO ke seeghe ko lekar hi thha aur yahi shayed Saini sb ka raha hoga. Aap ne doosri tarmeem behtar ki hai . Lekin zubaan mein qabahat baherhaal moujood hai. Yeh baat zuroor hai ki Bahr ki majbooriyon ki wajah se yeh istemaal bhi ho sakta hai , kabhi kabhi hota hai ,aur ise ghalat nahi thahraya jasakta .....Yeh bhi waazeh kar doon ki aam taur se main tanqeed karne se gurez karta hoon ,aur sirf apni tanqeed ka, jahan zuroori samajhta hoon, jawab dene ki koshish karta hoon . Yahan bhi chunki aapne Saini sb ko jawab dekar baat aage chalaai , maine bhi apni raai dedi.Ise hargiz ghalat na samjhein . Main muazrat khwah hoon.

Mahutram Aap mazrat karke mujhe sharmindah kar rahe hain ....Aap ilm umr fun sub me mujh se bade hain ..aur mai zaati taur per aap logon ka bada ahetram karta hun ...chunke shairi mazhab ki tarhan hai jisme maslhat nahi chalti aap logon ka aitraz jayez tha....Jahan tak ap maujoda surat me lafz garche ki baat kar rahe hain tu ye ghalat ul aam hai ...ye agarche garche dono hi tarhan boola jaata hai ....( Aap mauzrat na karen chunke ( Rabbi zidni ilman )hum sub ke liye hai ...Apko ghazal pasand aaee ye jaankar khushi ..Allah apko do jahan ki barkaton se malamal rakhe taweel umr se nawaze ..

Taalib e ilm

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Re: Teri Firaooniyat ka Dar Nahi hai ( Qadeertoopchi)

«Reply #16 on: April 29, 2014, 08:02:09 PM »

Lajawab peshkash janab qadeer saab...mastttttttttttttttt lagi aapki yeh ghazal... waise toh sabhi ashaar behad khoob hai... par neeche paste kiya hua sher bahut pasand aaya... dil ki gehraiyon se daad qubool kijiyega..

sabhi rishtun ko maine aazmaaya
Faqat ik maa’n ke dil me shar nahi hai


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Re: Teri Firaooniyat ka Dar Nahi hai ( Qadeertoopchi)

«Reply #17 on: April 30, 2014, 12:06:46 AM »

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 29, 2014, 12:47:41 PM

Chupane sar ko garche Ghar nahi hai
Kissi ke dar pe mera sar nahi hai

Khuda ka ghar hai subko sub milega
ameer e shahr ka daftar nahi hai

Abhi moosa sifat hai khaum apni
teri firaooniyat ka dar nahi hai

sabhi rishtun ko maine aazmaaya
Faqat ik maa’n ke dil me shar nahi hai

Diya hai zakhm Usne phir zubaan se
Agarche haat me khanjar nahi hai

Qadeer ab kyun na hum ko daibetis ho
Paseene se labadah tar nahi hai

Qadeertoopchi

very nice,sir


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: Teri Firaooniyat ka Dar Nahi hai ( Qadeertoopchi)

«Reply #18 on: April 30, 2014, 01:24:59 AM »

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 29, 2014, 12:47:41 PM

Kya bat hai,,,,,,Bahut Khoob.


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Re: Teri Firaooniyat ka Dar Nahi hai ( Qadeertoopchi)

«Reply #19 on: May 01, 2014, 09:34:10 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on April 29, 2014, 08:02:09 PM

Mahutrama ...Apke husn-e-zaan ko salam ....Apki pakiza nazron ka kamal hai warna to hamari bisaat hi kya hai ...Apko ghazal pasand aaee ye meri liye faqr ki baat hai ..Allah apko umre hawwa ata kare..

Dua go

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