Teri kahani likhoon................................Aqsh

by aqsh on December 17, 2012, 06:30:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 17, 2012, 11:12:00 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 17, 2012, 08:52:05 AM
Applause
  nice !!
thnx hasan jee
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«Reply #16 on: December 17, 2012, 11:13:09 AM »
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Quote from: nishi gahlaut on December 17, 2012, 11:06:43 AM
very nice...
thnx nishi jee
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«Reply #17 on: December 17, 2012, 12:00:27 PM »
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Sochti hooN mai, teri kahaani likhooN
Sab kuch apne, dil ki zubaani likhooN

Teri chahat ko, apni amaanat samjhooN
Teri mohabbat ko, apni zindagaani likhooN

Wabasta hai tujhse, jis tarah meri dhadkane
Us pyaar ko, chadhti jawaani likhooN

Rom rom meiN, basi hai jo teri kushboo
Us mehek ki, mouje rawaani likhooN

LaboN se, shokh tabassum churaakar
"Ashq" ki har ek nadaani likhooN


waaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: December 17, 2012, 12:18:11 PM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab!



WaaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke waaH bahut khoob jee bahut khoob...
Badi hi pyaari kalaam kahi hai jee.. Kia khoob ahsaas O khayaal
aur kia umdaa rawaani rahi aapke kalaam ki... Usual Smile


Bahut khoob jee ... Bade hi umdaa ashaar rahe sabhi...
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye....

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Quote from: aqsh on December 17, 2012, 06:30:00 AM
Sochti hooN mai, teri kahaani likhooN
Sab kuch apne, dil ki zubaani likhooN

WaaH bahut khoob..


Teri chahat ko, apni amaanat samjhooN
Teri mohabbat ko, apni zindagaani likhooN

WaaH jee waah bahut khoob


Wabasta hai tujhse, jis tarah meri dhadkane
Us pyaar ko, chadhti jawaani likhooN

WaaH kia kahne waaH bada hi umdaa sher kaha hai jee
daad daad daad... Usual Smile


Rom rom meiN, basi hai jo teri kushboo
Us mehek ki, mouje rawaani likhooN

Bahut khoob...


LaboN se, shokh tabassum churaakar
"Ashq" ki har ek nadaani likhooN

WaaH Maqta bhi behad khoob raha daad...




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«Reply #19 on: December 17, 2012, 12:38:18 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on December 17, 2012, 12:00:27 PM


waaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause
thank you soooo much adil jee
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«Reply #20 on: December 17, 2012, 12:38:44 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 17, 2012, 12:18:11 PM
Aqsh Jee Aadaab!



WaaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke waaH bahut khoob jee bahut khoob...
Badi hi pyaari kalaam kahi hai jee.. Kia khoob ahsaas O khayaal
aur kia umdaa rawaani rahi aapke kalaam ki... Usual Smile


Bahut khoob jee ... Bade hi umdaa ashaar rahe sabhi...
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye....

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




shukriya aapka bahut bahut parwaaz jee
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«Reply #21 on: December 17, 2012, 05:47:43 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai.....
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«Reply #22 on: December 17, 2012, 07:17:24 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji....!!!!
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«Reply #23 on: December 18, 2012, 05:12:07 AM »
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Quote from: Ritesh Modi on December 17, 2012, 05:47:43 PM
Wah kya baat hai.....
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 17, 2012, 07:17:24 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji....!!!!


thank you soooooo much hriday jee
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«Reply #25 on: December 18, 2012, 07:54:09 AM »
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lajavab peshkash
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 18, 2012, 07:54:09 AM
lajavab peshkash
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«Reply #27 on: December 18, 2012, 12:17:42 PM »
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Nice creation aqsh ji.
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«Reply #28 on: December 18, 2012, 01:05:31 PM »
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Zabardast gazal.
Har sher shaandaar hai.
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«Reply #29 on: December 18, 2012, 01:11:59 PM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on December 18, 2012, 12:17:42 PM
Nice creation aqsh ji.
thank you riyaz ashna jee
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