teri khushboo fizaon mein

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yeh kaisi hulchul si hui hai ghataaon mein .
Lagta hai teri khushboo hai aaj fizaaon mein .

Rangat e noor hai aj aasman mein kuch alag sa .
Tere chehre ka jadoo aj bikhra jaise hawaon mein .

Na chahat aur koi is dil ne ki hai tab se .
Manga hai jab se khuda se tujhe duaon mein

kaise na dil ko khote hum dekhkar tujhko .
Bas mein na raha dekha jo  teri nigahon mein.
 
Ghazab ki shokhiyan hain tere andaze husan ki .
Mohabat ka hai  ishara teri har adhaon mein
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2012, 02:18:20 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2012, 02:54:53 PM »
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Very good.
Par meri ak opinion h.
Aapne andaze husn jo likha h.
Use andaaz-ae-husn likhe to behtar hoga.
Wese bhut khoob likha h aapne
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thx shahzada ji
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lo mere aane se pehle hi tumko pata chal gaya tongue3
lovely composition saahil..keep it up
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Quote from: saahill on April 25, 2012, 02:13:00 PM
yeh kaisi hulchul si hui hai ghataaon mein .
Lagta hai teri khushboo hai aaj fizaaon mein .

Rangat e noor hai aj aasman mein kuch alag sa .
Tere chehre ka jadoo aj bikhra jaise hawaon mein .

Na chahat aur koi is dil ne ki hai tab se .
Manga hai jab se khuda se tujhe duaon mein

kaise na dil ko khote hum dekhkar tujhko .
Bas mein na raha dekha jo  teri nigahon mein.
 
Ghazab ki shokhiyan hain tere andaze husan ki .
Mohabat ka hai  ishara teri har adhaon mein



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