TERI MUSKAAN KE AAGE - GHAZAL - SARVESH RASTOGI

by SARVESH RASTOGI on June 28, 2009, 04:58:39 PM
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नजाकत नाज़ खोती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे
क़यामत मात होती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

झनकती झाँझरों के स्वर हमें कैसे रिझाएंगे
की हर झंकार रोती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

खनकती चूड़ियों का चीखना वाकई मुनासिब है
जो नज़रंदाज़ होती हैं तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

उदय से अस्त तक मुस्कान तेरी कौंध जाती है
हर इक रफ़्तार छोटी है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

अरे अब मौत का भी डर हमें कैसे डराएगा
कहाँ कोई चुनौती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

करे परहेज़ क्यों कोई शिकस्तों से कि आखिर में
फतह भी मात होती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

अभी भी पूछते हो हम खुदा से मांगते क्या हैं
भला कोई मनौती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

अरे सर्वेश अब खोटे खरे का भेद कैसे हो
बुझा हर एक मोती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

सर्वेश रस्तोगी
sarveshrastogi1960@yahoo.co.uk
Phone 9810391523
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2009, 05:03:19 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut Khoob Sarveshji...

Itna Pyaari Aur Khoobsurat Nazm mein Kya kahen!!!

Hum to bas Thaaliyan Hi maar Sakte Hai Iss Kalam Ke Aage Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2009, 05:13:03 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat...khoob jachaav kiya hai aapne apni ghazal mein.
andaaz aapka vaakai umda hai, janaab.aapko haardik badhai...aapne ek anmol rachna ko janam diya!
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2009, 05:27:44 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
wah rastogi ji kya hi khoob upmaon se sajaya hai aapne rachna ko...behad umda  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2009, 10:55:15 PM »
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Wah Wah Sarvesh Ji, Bahut khoobsurat Peshkash hai! Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 11:23:06 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 28, 2009, 04:58:39 PM
नजाकत नाज़ खोती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे
क़यामत मात होती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

झनकती झाँझरों के स्वर हमें कैसे रिझाएंगे
की हर झंकार रोती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

उदय से अस्त तक मुस्कान तेरी कौंध जाती है
हर इक रफ़्तार छोटी है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

अरे अब मौत का भी डर हमें कैसे डराएगा
कहाँ कोई चुनौती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

करे परहेज़ क्यों कोई शिकस्तों से कि आखिर में
फतह भी मात होती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

अरे सर्वेश अब खोटे खरे का भेद कैसे हो
बुझा हर एक मोती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

सर्वेश रस्तोगी
sarveshrastogi1960@yahoo.co.uk
Phone 9810391523

Bohot khoob bohot hi khoob rastogi ji kamaal hi kardiya aapne, main to gungunane laga hun ke "Kisi ki jaan jaati hai kisi ko sharm aati hai, koi aansoo bahata hai to koi muskurata hai" dono ka ek hi wazan hai is liye besakhta ye geet yaad aagaya....bohot umda likha hai janaab. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2009, 01:04:27 AM »
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GOOD CREATION सर्वेश रस्तोगी JI
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2009, 05:39:19 AM »
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Wah wah Sarvesh ji bahut hi acha likha aapne,beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2009, 08:36:06 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 28, 2009, 05:03:19 PM
Bahut bahut bahut Khoob Sarveshji...

Itna Pyaari Aur Khoobsurat Nazm mein Kya kahen!!!

Hum to bas Thaaliyan Hi maar Sakte Hai Iss Kalam Ke Aage Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tahe dil se shukriya Khwaish Ji
Badi Meharbani
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2009, 08:43:17 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on June 28, 2009, 05:13:03 PM
bahut khoobsurat...khoob jachaav kiya hai aapne apni ghazal mein.
andaaz aapka vaakai umda hai, janaab.aapko haardik badhai...aapne ek anmol rachna ko janam diya!

Bahut bahut shukriya Prateek Ji
Shayad pahli baar aapki tabajjo hamari taraf hui, thanks a lot
Ghazal section me meri bahut si ghazals mil jaengi jo aapko wakai pasand aaengi.  Time mile to dekhiye.
Himmate badhate rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2009, 09:00:25 AM »
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Bahut Bahut khoob Sarvesh Ji, Taarif ke siwa ham kahe bhi to kya..

Behtreen likhte hai aap.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.
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Quote from: bekarar on June 28, 2009, 05:27:44 PM
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wah rastogi ji kya hi khoob upmaon se sajaya hai aapne rachna ko...behad umda  Applause

Bahut bahut Shukriya Bekarar Ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 29, 2009, 11:34:03 AM »
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Bohot hi pyaari si ghazal hai Sarvesh Ji, bohot khoob !
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«Reply #13 on: June 29, 2009, 03:40:03 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on June 28, 2009, 10:55:15 PM
Wah Wah Sarvesh Ji, Bahut khoobsurat Peshkash hai! Applause

Bahut shukriya Deepati Ji
I am grateful
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«Reply #14 on: June 29, 2009, 04:09:13 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 28, 2009, 11:23:06 PM
Bohot khoob bohot hi khoob rastogi ji kamaal hi kardiya aapne, main to gungunane laga hun ke "Kisi ki jaan jaati hai kisi ko sharm aati hai, koi aansoo bahata hai to koi muskurata hai" dono ka ek hi wazan hai is liye besakhta ye geet yaad aagaya....bohot umda likha hai janaab. Usual Smile

Bahut bahut shukriya Sayyid Saheb
Bada khubsurat geet yaad dila diya aapne
Dil khol kar di gai daad ka tahe dil se shukriya
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