TERI MUSKAAN KE AAGE - GHAZAL - SARVESH RASTOGI

by SARVESH RASTOGI on June 28, 2009, 04:58:39 PM
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«Reply #30 on: July 11, 2009, 04:21:16 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 09, 2009, 04:35:31 PM
Bahut bahut shukriya Talat Ji
Sorry for delay in acknowledgement
Aajkal kuchh time ki kami ho gai hai isliye nayee rachnaen bhi post nahin kar pa raha hun aur jawab dene me bhi deri ho rahi hai
Thanks a lot again
SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriya Sarvesh Ji, Aajkal to aap ki maujoodgi humare threads main hoti hi nahin hai. I hope hum bhi kuch aisa likh sakte jo aapko humari poems tak le aati.

Talat
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«Reply #31 on: July 12, 2009, 07:17:20 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 11, 2009, 04:08:05 PM
Bahut bahut shukriya Bundeli Saheb
Poetic Petrol se aisi daad paakar itni khushi hui ki lagta hai meri shayari ki gaadi me naya petrol bhar gaya ho.  Bahut shukriya.  Aur aapka sher bhi bada fit baitha hai, wah wah.
SARVESH RASTOGI
Thanks Rastogi ji for all your so sweet words! You're always welcome!
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«Reply #32 on: July 12, 2009, 09:41:16 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 11, 2009, 04:21:16 PM
Shukriya Sarvesh Ji, Aajkal to aap ki maujoodgi humare threads main hoti hi nahin hai. I hope hum bhi kuch aisa likh sakte jo aapko humari poems tak le aati.

Talat

Arre arrey ye kya kah diya aapne Talat Ji
Aapki ghazalen to bemisal hoti hain aur hame besabri se intazar rahta hai padhne ka.
Lekin aajkal thoda jimmedarion ka bojh badh gaya hai shayad isliye poora dhyan yo per nahin de pa raha hun.
You are always welcome Talat Ji, and thanks a lot.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #33 on: July 12, 2009, 09:48:10 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 11, 2009, 10:45:24 AM
Thanks a lot Roja Ji
I am really sorry for delay in acknowledgement
Jab ki aapne is ghazal ka reference dekar apna ek naya thread "Mere Aage" bhi start kar diya, I am grateful.  Badi khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne, Great.
All the Best
SARVESH RASTOGI

Welcome Sarvesh Rastogi ji..Aapne bahut accha likha aur aisa hi likhte rahiyega. 
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«Reply #34 on: July 13, 2009, 02:38:23 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 12, 2009, 09:48:10 AM
Welcome Sarvesh Rastogi ji..Aapne bahut accha likha aur aisa hi likhte rahiyega. 

So nice of you Roja Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #35 on: July 13, 2009, 02:44:15 PM »
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bohat hi khubsurat sarvesh ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #36 on: July 14, 2009, 02:50:17 PM »
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Quote from: Vikk on July 13, 2009, 02:44:15 PM
bohat hi khubsurat sarvesh ji Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bahut swagat hai aapka Vikk Ji hamari mehfil main.
Tarif ke liye Shukriya.  Shayad pahli baar hamare thread per aapka aana hua hai.  Agar ghazals ke shaukeen hain to ghazal section me meri darjanon ghazalen aapki tavajjo ki muntazir hain.  Mauka lage to padhiye aur apne khayal zaahir kariye.
Thanks and all the best
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #37 on: July 15, 2009, 04:23:09 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 12, 2009, 07:17:20 AM
Thanks Rastogi ji for all your so sweet words! You're always welcome!
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I am obliged Sir
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«Reply #38 on: July 18, 2009, 04:54:03 PM »
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Quote from: Nira on July 08, 2009, 04:52:27 PM
sarvesh ji

itniiiiiiiii pyaar bhari ghazal
subhanAllah har sher mukamaal hai
mazaa aagaye aaj aapko padhkar.
daad qabool kijiye.
nira

Bahut bahut shukriya Nira Ji
RASTA KYON RO DIYA ke title se bhi ek ghazal release ki hui hai, aapko zaroor pasand aayegi.
Thanks again
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«Reply #39 on: July 18, 2009, 05:12:12 PM »
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wah kya chalegi kisi ki,sarvesh ji --[teri ki muskaan ke aage.]

ki har taklifen kum ho jaati hain meri,
sanam,teri muskaan ke aage.
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«Reply #40 on: July 19, 2009, 12:12:55 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 18, 2009, 05:12:12 PM
wah kya chalegi kisi ki,sarvesh ji --[teri ki muskaan ke aage.]

ki har taklifen kum ho jaati hain meri,
sanam,teri muskaan ke aage.

Bahut bahut shukriya Cara Ji
Kadardani Meharbani Thanks
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«Reply #41 on: January 08, 2010, 06:19:34 AM »
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Aapne ghazal pasand ki
Bahut bahut shukriya
SK RASTOGI
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«Reply #42 on: January 08, 2010, 06:37:54 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 28, 2009, 04:58:39 PM
नजाकत नाज़ खोती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे
क़यामत मात होती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

झनकती झाँझरों के स्वर हमें कैसे रिझाएंगे
की हर झंकार रोती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

खनकती चूड़ियों का चीखना वाकई मुनासिब है
जो नज़रंदाज़ होती हैं तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

उदय से अस्त तक मुस्कान तेरी कौंध जाती है
हर इक रफ़्तार छोटी है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

अरे अब मौत का भी डर हमें कैसे डराएगा
कहाँ कोई चुनौती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

करे परहेज़ क्यों कोई शिकस्तों से कि आखिर में
फतह भी मात होती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

अभी भी पूछते हो हम खुदा से मांगते क्या हैं
भला कोई मनौती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

अरे सर्वेश अब खोटे खरे का भेद कैसे हो
बुझा हर एक मोती है तेरी मुस्कान के आगे

सर्वेश रस्तोगी
sarveshrastogi1960@yahoo.co.uk
Phone 9810391523

Bahut khoob Sarvesh Ji
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«Reply #43 on: January 08, 2010, 06:56:10 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 28, 2009, 04:58:39 PM

खनकती चूड़ियों का चीखना वाकई मुनासिब है
जो नज़रंदाज़ होती हैं तेरी मुस्कान के आगे


Janab Rastogi Sahab, Aapki ye ghazal bahut achhi aur meyari lagi. Bahut khoobsurat andaaz mein aapne ye ghazal kahi. Sankoch ke saath likh raha hun ke upar quoted sher thoda behr se bahar ho raha hai. Agar isme se aap (जो) ko hata dein to misra नज़रंदाज़ होती हैं तेरी मुस्कान के आगे behr mein ho jayega. Ummeed hai bura nahin manenge.
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«Reply #44 on: January 12, 2010, 10:42:42 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz Saheb
Aapne ghazal padhi aur itni tavajjo ke saath padhi
Your suggestion is welcome and I shall do the needful
Shukriya once again
SK RASTOGI
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