Teyrey suroor-e-husn mein qudrat key phool they!

by abdbundeli on March 20, 2012, 12:46:51 PM
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Anjaan chaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
Shab kee panaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?

Kyoun aik aastaan ki hee talab na thee hamain?
Talabon ki raah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?

Teyrey suroor-e-husn mein qudrat key phool they!
Chashm-e-gunaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?

Yuun to nazar mein aaye hain kitney hi khwaabgaah;
Dil kee salaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?

Aa aa key guzartey rahey hain aaftaab-o-maah;
Beytaab aah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?

Maanaa ki unkee dilnashin adaa hai sitamgar!
Har waah-waah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?

Kahtey hain log, meyraa sanam beyhijaab hai!
Apnon ki daah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?

Un ney diye hain jakhm, aur main hun jaannisaar:
Beybas karaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?

Kuchh bhee buraa nahin thaa rah-e-zeest mein, 'abd',
Meyree nigaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?

                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2012, 12:59:40 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on March 20, 2012, 12:46:51 PM
Anjaan chaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
Shab kee panaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
bahut khoob......! Applause Applause Applause
Kyoun aik aastaan ki hee talab na thee hamain?
Talabon ki raah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
wah wah................! Applause Applause Applause
Teyrey suroor-e-husn mein qudrat key phool they!
Chashm-e-gunaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
bahut khoob.........! Applause Applause Applause
Yuun to nazar mein aaye hain kitney hi khwaabgaah;
Dil kee salaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
 Laughing hard =))ye bhi khoob raha
Aa aa key guzartey rahey hain aaftaab-o-maah;
Beytaab aah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
bahut pyara sher Applause Applause Applause
Maanaa ki unkee dilnashin adaa hai sitamgar!
Har waah-waah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hardye to aap hi jaano
Kahtey hain log, meyraa sanam beyhijaab hai!
Apnon ki daah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Un ney diye hain jakhm, aur main hun jaannisaar:
Beybas karaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
nice..........!
Kuchh bhee buraa nahin thaa rah-e-zeest mein, 'abd',
Meyree nigaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
acha hai

                   - abd bundeli


sanjida aur dilfareb kalaam abd.........!
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2012, 01:12:57 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on March 20, 2012, 12:59:40 PM
sanjida aur dilfareb kalaam abd.........!

Aapney pooree gazal padhhney kee takleef gawaarah kee, aur har aik sher par apney  'comments' bhee diye! Shukriyah! shukraguzaar huun!
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2012, 01:50:02 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on March 20, 2012, 12:46:51 PM
Anjaan chaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
Shab kee panaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa? Applause Applause Applause Mystirious

Kyoun aik aastaan ki hee talab na thee hamain?
Talabon ki raah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?  Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP

Teyrey suroor-e-husn mein qudrat key phool they!
Chashm-e-gunaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Is it SO!

Yuun to nazar mein aaye hain kitney hi khwaabgaah;
Dil kee salaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Usual Smile

Aa aa key guzartey rahey hain aaftaab-o-maah;
Beytaab aah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley notworthy

Maanaa ki unkee dilnashin adaa hai sitamgar!
Har waah-waah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?  hello2 hello2 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kahtey hain log, meyraa sanam beyhijaab hai!
Apnon ki daah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Very Nice & True

Un ney diye hain jakhm, aur main hun jaannisaar:
Beybas karaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?   Thumbs UPThumbs UP Thumbs UP notworthy

Kuchh bhee buraa nahin thaa rah-e-zeest mein, 'abd',
Meyree nigaah deykhtee rahee hai jaaney kyaa?
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley 
                   - abd bundeli



Bahut hi pyari aur dariya ke thandi lahroN sa sukoon dene wali peskas hai Abd ji. Maine to ise ga ga ke padha bahut hi nayab aur lajwaap peskash hai ye apk bahut bahut daad aur mubarakbaad qabool farmayein.
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2012, 01:51:27 PM »
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bhai abd ji aaj aapkeee doosree shaan daar ghazal pdhee abhee to pahle waalee kaa hee nashaa haawee thaa khair aapne ek lambee rdeef lekar ghazal men khoobsoortee paidaa kee hai haalaaki maine kai ghazlon men doosre misre ko shuru hee qaafiye se kiyaa aur khatm radeef se.aap bahut achhaa kahte hain duaa kartaa hoon aapkaa qalam ek rawaanee lekar chaltaa rahe god bless you aap auron se bahut aage ho aur bahut aage jaaoge
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Quote from: pankajwfs on March 20, 2012, 01:50:02 PM

Bahut hi pyari aur dariya ke thandi lahroN sa sukoon dene wali peskas hai Abd ji. Maine to ise ga ga ke padha bahut hi nayab aur lajwaap peskash hai ye apk bahut bahut daad aur mubarakbaad qabool farmayein.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Pankaj bhai! Aapkey itney 'meethey' alfaaz khud hee bayaan kar rahey hain, ki, aapee aawaaz mein bhi uskee 'mithhaas' zaroor hee dilaaraayee ko roshan kartee huyee fazaa ko 'gudgudaa' deytee hogee! Kaash, main bhi aapko gaatey huye sun paataa!                                                                 
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 20, 2012, 01:51:27 PM
bhai abd ji aaj aapkeee doosree shaan daar ghazal pdhee abhee to pahle waalee kaa hee nashaa haawee thaa khair aapne ek lambee rdeef lekar ghazal men khoobsoortee paidaa kee hai haalaaki maine kai ghazlon men doosre misre ko shuru hee qaafiye se kiyaa aur khatm radeef se.aap bahut achhaa kahte hain duaa kartaa hoon aapkaa qalam ek rawaanee lekar chaltaa rahe god bless you aap auron se bahut aage ho aur bahut aage jaaoge

Dr. Sa'b aapkee duaa hai! Bahut-bahut shukriyah! WOH aapko 'sapariwaar' hameyshaa khush wa tandurust rakhey!
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2012, 05:05:46 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob likha hai aapne Abd ji...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2012, 07:52:47 PM »
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Bundeli sirji--
aapko hum sirf aur sirf thanq kahna chahenge aapki Ghazal ko post karne ke lie-- Usual Smile

aapki mukammal ghazal parhne ko mil jaye to bas dil jhoom uthta hai Usual Smile

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
god bless u
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 20, 2012, 05:05:46 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob likha hai aapne Abd ji...!!!

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Hriday' ji!
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Quote from: sarfira on March 20, 2012, 07:52:47 PM
Bundeli sirji--
aapko hum sirf aur sirf thanq kahna chahenge aapki Ghazal ko post karne ke lie-- Usual Smile

aapki mukammal ghazal parhne ko mil jaye to bas dil jhoom uthta hai Usual Smile

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
god bless u

Shukraguzaar huun bhai 'sarfira' ji!
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