tha kaam rakeebo ka .....ghazal.........jeet jainam

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shikwa nahi tujhse koi ye  khel lakeero ka,
zamana ho gaya tera yaha na koi fakeero ka,

karke ibaadat tujhe pana tha armaan mera,
ye milna bichadna to sab khel takdeero ka,

bethe hai meykhane me peene ki khuwaish me,
majhdhaar me dubone ka tha kaam rakeebo ka,

zakhmo ko apne seete gaye aah na kar paye,
eysa jo waar kiya tune nazaro ke teero ka,

tere mangne se pahle teri khuwaish puri ki,
meri chahat se jiyada tujhe moh tha heero ka,

kon puchta hai haal aaj kal dilwaalo ka yaha,
jaha ho gaya charcha baragashta mehzabeeno ka,

nadaan e dil ne ishq ki dhoker khayi hai[jeet],
eysa nahi hota ger gulaam ho hota haseeno ka,

                   jj saini


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वाह.....वाह......वाह.......
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Quote from: jeet jainam on July 14, 2014, 04:14:36 PM




shikwa nahi tujhse koi ye  khel lakeero ka,
zamana ho gaya tera yaha na koi fakeero ka,

karke ibaadat tujhe pana tha armaan mera,
ye milna bichadna to sab khel takdeero ka,

bethe hai meykhane me peene ki khuwaish me,
majhdhaar me dubone ka tha kaam rakeebo ka,

zakhmo ko apne seete gaye aah na kar paye,
eysa jo waar kiya tune nazaro ke teero ka,

tere mangne se pahle teri khuwaish puri ki,
meri chahat se ziyada tujhe moh tha heero ka,

kon puchta hai haal aaj kal diwaalo ka yaha,
jaha ho gaya charcha baragashta mehjabeeno ka,

nadaan e dil ne ishq ki dhoker khayi hai[jeet],
eysa nahi hota ger gulaam ho hota haseeno ka,

                    jj saini




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shikwa nahi tujhse koi ye  khel lakeero ka,
zamana ho gaya tera yaha na koi fakeero ka,

karke ibaadat tujhe pana tha armaan mera,
ye milna bichadna to sab khel takdeero ka,

bethe hai meykhane me peene ki khuwaish me,
majhdhaar me dubone ka tha kaam rakeebo ka,

zakhmo ko apne seete gaye aah na kar paye,
eysa jo waar kiya tune nazaro ke teero ka,

tere mangne se pahle teri khuwaish puri ki,
meri chahat se jiyada tujhe moh tha heero ka,

kon puchta hai haal aaj kal diwaalo ka yaha,
jaha ho gaya charcha baragashta mehzabeeno ka,

nadaan e dil ne ishq ki dhoker khayi hai[jeet],
eysa nahi hota ger gulaam ho hota haseeno ka,

                   jj saini




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Jeet Jee Aadaab.. !

Waah janab waah kia kahne ... bade hi dilfareb ahsaas O khayaal ko khoob BayaaN kiyaa hai aapne ...
Badi achchi aur khoobsurat kalaam huyi hai ...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...

Likhte rahiye ... mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez ...
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waah waah waah bahut umdah Jeet Sahib, dheron daad.
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shukriya ParwaaZ sir ji ap sabka pyaar eyse hi milta raha to is ghazal se bhi behter likhne ki koshish karta rahunga
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shukriya surinder sir ji daaaaaaaaadd kabool
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