thoda kam tha thoda jaada,,ghazal,,jeet jainam saini

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meri mohhobat  kaa  ehsaas  thoda kam  tha thoda jaada,
mere  alfaazo  main  dam  thoda  kam  tha  thora jaada,

ek pal bhi naa  dekha  usne  jate  huye   mujhe mudkar,
yuh dard e judaai kaa gam  thoda  kam  tha thoda jaada,

mehfil main aaye aansu naam khushi ka  bahana kah diye,
unn aansuon ka aaya sailaab thoda kam  tha thoda jaada,

khat  padhte huye  yaad  aa  gayee  woh   hijr ki raat,
uski waffaao,n ka woh silaa thoda kam tha  thoda jaada,

qafas e tanhai main  jab bhee  faste  rahe  akser  hum,
sangdil ki diwangi ka nasha thoda  kam tha thoda jaada,

yuh to jee raha tha tere bin jeet  par zindagi thi kaha,
tadapke ke jeene ka andaaz jo thoda kam tha thoda jaada,

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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2015, 06:09:36 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2015, 05:18:39 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2015, 03:18:59 AM »
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श्री जीत जी बहुत उम्दा पेशकश ढेर सारी दाद एक राऊ के साथ कबूल करे -आर के रस्तोगी
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«Reply #8 on: March 18, 2015, 04:25:28 AM »
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bohat bohat shukriya ram sir ji daaaaaaaaaaaadddddd or rau dil se kabool
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