THODI NATKHAT KUCHH AASHIQANA HAI ......................... HASAN

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Thodi  natkhat , kuchh  aashiqana  hai  ,
Meri    fitrat    hi   shaa'erana  hai


Maikada  -  Maikada   teri    AankheiN  ,
Un  pe    PalkoN   ka   Shaamyana  hai


Thhe  wo  kal  mere  pyaar  mein  paagal  ,
Abb    RaqeeboN    se   dostaana    hai


Zindagi   gham   ka    daa'emi   maskan  ,
KhushyoN   ka   sirf   aana - jaana  hai


Sirf   Saiyaad  ka  hi   khauff   naheeN  ,
Barq   ki   zadd    pe    Aashyana   hai


Muskura   kar    badhaata    hai   mohre  ,
Uski   har    chaal    shaatirana   hai


Chal  'Hasan'  apne  ghar  ko  laut  chaleiN  ,
Uth   gaya   yaaN   se  Aab-o-Daana   hai
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2013, 05:01:23 PM »
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Thodi  natkhat , kuchh  aashiqana  hai  ,
Meri    fitrat    hi   shaa'erana  hai


Maikada  -  Maikada   teri    AankheiN  ,
Un  pe    PalkoN   ka   Shaamyana  hai


Thhe  wo  kal  mere  pyaar  mein  paagal  ,
Abb    RaqeeboN    se   dostaana    hai


Zindagi   gham   ka    daa'emi   maskan  ,
KhushyoN   ka   sirf   aana - jaana  hai


Sirf   Saiyaad  ka  hi   khauff   naheeN  ,
Barq   ki   zadd    pe    Aashyana   hai


Muskura   kar    badhaata    hai   mohre  ,
Uski   har    chaal    shaatirana   hai


Chal  'Hasan'  apne  ghar  ko  laut  chaleiN  ,
Uth   gaya   yaaN   se  Aab-o-Daana   hai

especially, rau in your 5th sher nice ghazal,sir
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2013, 05:12:00 PM »
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Thodi  natkhat , kuchh  aashiqana  hai  ,
Meri    fitrat    hi   shaa'erana  hai


Maikada  -  Maikada   teri    AankheiN  ,
Un  pe    PalkoN   ka   Shaamyana  hai


Thhe  wo  kal  mere  pyaar  mein  paagal  ,
Abb    RaqeeboN    se   dostaana    hai


Zindagi   gham   ka    daa'emi   maskan  ,
KhushyoN   ka   sirf   aana - jaana  hai


Sirf   Saiyaad  ka  hi   khauff   naheeN  ,
Barq   ki   zadd    pe    Aashyana   hai


Muskura   kar    badhaata    hai   mohre  ,
Uski   har    chaal    shaatirana   hai


Chal  'Hasan'  apne  ghar  ko  laut  chaleiN  ,
Uth   gaya   yaaN   se  Aab-o-Daana   hai


Wah,Wah,Wah Hasan Sahab,
Bahut ki pyaari aur emotional ghazal kahi hai aapne.Padkar dil khush ho gaya janab.Meri badhai qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2013, 05:12:44 PM »
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waa waa waa,............bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hasan ji,.....bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2013, 05:52:30 PM »
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Maikada  -  Maikada   teri    AankheiN  ,
Un  pe    PalkoN   ka   Shaamyana  hai


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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2013, 06:05:31 PM »
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badiya ji  happy3
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2013, 07:22:47 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB.. DHERO DAAD.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2013, 07:28:12 PM »
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bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal rahi hasan ji. sabhi ashaar bahut bahut bahut khoob rahe. padhkar dil khush hua. aapko dil se mubarak ho..
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2013, 08:59:02 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2013, 11:00:44 PM »
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Waah waah waah Hasan saheb, bahut khoob, bahut hi pyaari ghazal kahi hai aapne, 2nd aur 3rd she'r khususann bahut pasand aaye.
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2013, 01:41:57 AM »
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Wah Wah!!! Bohat hi khub!!! Bohat aachi ghazal likhi hai aap ne..!!

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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2013, 01:49:57 AM »
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Aadaab sir
wah wah wah ..kya baat hai
har sher..kya kahne..
matle se maqte tak..laajvaab

Zindagi   gham   ka    daa'emi   maskan  ,
KhushyoN   ka   sirf   aana - jaana  hai

Sirf   Saiyaad  ka  hi   khauff   naheeN  ,
Barq   ki   zadd    pe    Aashyana   hai

is behr me aapka javaab naheen

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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2013, 01:51:36 AM »
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Thodi  natkhat , kuchh  aashiqana  hai  ,
Meri    fitrat    hi   shaa'erana  hai


Maikada  -  Maikada   teri    AankheiN  ,
Un  pe    PalkoN   ka   Shaamyana  hai


Thhe  wo  kal  mere  pyaar  mein  paagal  ,
Abb    RaqeeboN    se   dostaana    hai


Zindagi   gham   ka    daa'emi   maskan  ,
KhushyoN   ka   sirf   aana - jaana  hai


Sirf   Saiyaad  ka  hi   khauff   naheeN  ,
Barq   ki   zadd    pe    Aashyana   hai


Muskura   kar    badhaata    hai   mohre  ,
Uski   har    chaal    shaatirana   hai


Chal  'Hasan'  apne  ghar  ko  laut  chaleiN  ,
Uth   gaya   yaaN   se  Aab-o-Daana   hai


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 21, 2013, 12:15:22 PM »
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especially, rau in your 5th sher nice ghazal,sir
Shukriya aur adaab , MB saheb
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«Reply #14 on: May 21, 2013, 01:22:52 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Hasan Sahab,
Bahut ki pyaari aur emotional ghazal kahi hai aapne.Padkar dil khush ho gaya janab.Meri badhai qabool kijiye.
Sudhir ji , hausla afzai k liye bahut shukriya, duaaein .
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