Thukraa ke mujhko...............MKV

by mkv on July 26, 2012, 11:07:17 AM
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meri aakhoN meN samundar ki nishanee dekho
Sab chipaayeN haiN ye bahtaa huaa paanee dekho

Jaa chukee mujhko hai thukra ke muhabbat meri
Sabke hoNtho pe sajee meri  kahaanee dekho

Mai tadapta huN yahaN apni muhabbat ke liye
Kaise barbaad huyee  meree jawaanee dekho

Mai hamesha se dua karta raha sabke liye
Jakhma badle meN  mile aa ke nishaanee dekho
 
Dard seene me chupaayeN hue main phirta huN             
Ye kalam likh rahee hai aaj bayaanee dekho

poochta usse raha kyoN ho khafa kabse ‘mukesh’
chup rahee kuch n kaha aisi diwaanee dekho
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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2012, 11:10:39 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut sundar .. bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mukesh ji.... aapke andaaz-e-bayaani ka jawab nahi.,... simply awesome....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2012, 11:15:57 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 26, 2012, 11:07:17 AM
In aankho meN samundar ki nishanee dekho
Sab hai chipaa , bahtaa huaa paanee dekho

Thukraa ke mujhko  jaa chukee, muhabbat ab
Sabke hoNtho pe sajee, meri  kahaanee dekho

Mai tadapta, bechain  muhabbat ke liye
Barbaad kaise huyee  meree jawaanee dekho

Mere hontho se nikli dua sabke liye
Jakhma badle meN  paaye aa ke nishaanee dekho
 
Dard uthta , seene meN ,  chup raheN behtar            
Kaun apnaa, bas kalam ki bayaanee dekho

kyoN ho khafa,  ye ‘Mukesh’  ne  kitnaa puNcha
Magar chupchaap rahee hai, vo diwaanee dekho


Waah Waah Waah..

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Mukeshji....

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«Reply #3 on: July 26, 2012, 12:44:31 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 26, 2012, 11:07:17 AM
In aankho meN samundar ki nishanee dekho
Sab hai chipaa , bahtaa huaa paanee dekho

Thukraa ke mujhko  jaa chukee, muhabbat ab
Sabke hoNtho pe sajee, meri  kahaanee dekho

Mai tadapta, bechain  muhabbat ke liye
Barbaad kaise huyee  meree jawaanee dekho

Mere hontho se nikli dua sabke liye
Jakhma badle meN  paaye aa ke nishaanee dekho
 
Dard uthta , seene meN ,  chup raheN behtar             
Kaun apnaa, bas kalam ki bayaanee dekho

kyoN ho khafa,  ye ‘Mukesh’  ne  kitnaa puNcha
Magar chupchaap rahee hai, vo diwaanee dekho

wAH WAAH MUKESH JI KYA BAAT HAI..
> Mere hontho se nikli dua sabke liye
Jakhma badle meN  paaye aa ke nishaanee dekho..
bAHUT UMDA RAHA....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
dAAD AUR MUNBARAKBAAD QABOOL KARIYE..
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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2012, 12:46:22 PM »
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Wah Wah Mukesh Ji BAhut Khub  Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 26, 2012, 01:00:37 PM »
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wah wah wah  mkv ji... Usual Smile

aapka jawab nahi .. bahut bahut bahut khoob ghazal likhi hai aapne... Usual Smile

dhero daad daad daad... Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahe...
khush rahe... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2012, 01:28:47 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut bahut hi khub kaha aapne padhkar mann bagobagh ho  gya.....dhero daad aur dhero salaam
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2012, 01:29:23 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut bahut hi khub kaha aapne padhkar mann bagobagh ho  gya.....dhero daad aur dhero salaam
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2012, 01:30:42 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut bahut hi khub kaha aapne padhkar mann bagobagh ho  gya.....dhero daad aur dhero salaam
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2012, 02:56:39 PM »
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LAAJWAAB   BEHTREEN  KHOOBSOORAT  SHAANDAAR
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2012, 06:54:03 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 26, 2012, 11:07:17 AM
In aankho meN samundar ki nishanee dekho
Sab hai chipaa , bahtaa huaa paanee dekho

Thukraa ke mujhko  jaa chukee, muhabbat ab
Sabke hoNtho pe sajee, meri  kahaanee dekho

Mai tadapta, bechain  muhabbat ke liye
Barbaad kaise huyee  meree jawaanee dekho

Mere hontho se nikli dua sabke liye
Jakhma badle meN  paaye aa ke nishaanee dekho
 
Dard uthta , seene meN ,  chup raheN behtar             
Kaun apnaa, bas kalam ki bayaanee dekho

kyoN ho khafa,  ye ‘Mukesh’  ne  kitnaa puNcha
Magar chupchaap rahee hai, vo diwaanee dekho


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naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice.... ....mkv

  matle ka kya kahna.wah wah
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«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2012, 11:44:51 PM »
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Bahut khubsurat ghazal hai. Pyara matla . Waahhh ! +
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«Reply #12 on: July 27, 2012, 02:18:07 AM »
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MKV Lajwab Ghazal hai Dheerron Daaaad qubool kijiye
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«Reply #13 on: July 27, 2012, 07:36:16 AM »
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Bahut acche MKV
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 27, 2012, 05:23:52 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 26, 2012, 11:10:39 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut sundar .. bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mukesh ji.... aapke andaaz-e-bayaani ka jawab nahi.,... simply awesome....!!!
Shukriya Hriday jee
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