Tinka-Tinka Jod Kar Ek Parinde Ne Apna Basera basa Liya "Khwaish"

by khwaish on June 01, 2010, 01:37:52 PM
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"Hauslo Par Aanch Aa Jaaye To Thakraana Zaroori Hai
Agar Zinda Ho To Zinda Nazar Aana Zaroori Hai"

Kal Ek dost Ne Mujhe Yeh sher Sunaya Tha,Naa Jaane Kyon Mujhe Yeh Sher khaas Taur Par Bahut pasand Aaya,Yeh sher Ko yuhi Baar-Baar Yaad Kar Raha Tha Ke Zehan Mein Yeh Baat Aayi Ke Kyon Na Iss Rhythm Par Kuch Aur Likha Jaaye..
Kuch Aur Likhne Ki Himmat Kar Raha Hoon..
Umeed Karta Hoon Aap sab Humesha Ki Tarah iss Baar Bhi Mera Saath Denge..Shukriya

Hauslo Par Aanch Aa Jaaye To Thakraana Zaroori Hai
Agar Zinda Hoon To Zinda Nazar Aana Zaroori Hai

Kabhi khud Ko bhi Auro Ki Jageh Par rakhkar dekh,
Dard Dil mein Rakh Kar Bhi Labon Par Muskurana Zaroori Hai

Khuda Par Aitbaar Ho To Dil Se Ho,
Khuda Par Yakeen Dilane ke Liye Kya Khuda Ka Nazar Aana Zaroori Hai

Jo Khwaab Haqeeqat Ke Rang Mein Naa Dhal Sake Naa Sahi!!!
Zindagi Ki Sachai Jaane Ke Liye Kuch Khwaabo Ka Toot Jaana Zaroori hai

Bichadne ke Baad Kahi Mil Jaaye To Aankhon Se Aankhein Mila Lena Zaroor!!!
Ashko Ko Chupane Ke liye Kya Nazron Ko jhuka Lena Zaroori Hai

Maana Humne Ke Zindagi kabhi Tujh Par Meherbaan naa Hui
Par baar-Baar Yeh Baat Batlaana Kya Zaroori hai

Tinka-Tinka Jod Kar Ek parinde Ne Apna Basera Basa Hi liya
Par Kambakt Ussi Waqt Iss Tez Hawa Ko Aana Zaroori Hai

"Khwaish" Auron Ki Khushi Mein Bhi kabhi Khud Khush Rehna Seekhle
Kabhi Kisi Ke Liye Khud ko Bhi Loota Dena Zaroori Hai

Jin Rishto mein Pyaar ki Koi Mehak Nahi Phir Unn Rishto ka Koi wajood Bhi Nahi
Par Phir bhi Kya Inn Rishto Ko Nibhaate Jaana Zaroori Hai

Kabhi Mann Ki Aankhon Se Bhi khud Ko Dekho,
Jaise Chaaho Waise Hi Aaene mein Khud Ka Nazar Aana Kya Zaroori Hai

"Khwaish" Aaj Ki Zindagi Jeena Seekho!!!!
Kya Guzre Hue Daur Ko Yaad Kar Aansuu Bahana Zaroori Hai...

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2010, 02:13:25 PM »
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waah Waah Waah, Bohat Achchi Koshish Ki Hai Aapne Khwaish Bhai,.

Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2010, 02:35:47 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI        KHWAISH JI.....

ZINDAGI MEIN HAQIKAT KA SAAMNA KARNA ZAROORI HAI..
JIS TARAH ZINDAGI KI RAHA MEIN KHUSHI KO APNANA
USI TARAH GUM KO GALE LAGANA BHI ZAROORI HAI
KADMON KO TOH DAGMAGANA HI HAI ZINDAGI KI RAHA MEIN
DAGMAGATE KADMON KO SAMBHALNA ZAROORI HAI
SAPNE DEKHNA KOI BURI BAAT NAHIN
PAR HAR SAPNE SACH HONA KYA ZAROORI HAI
OONCHAYI CHOONA KOI GALAT KAAM NAHIN
MAGAR APNE HAAL MEIN KHUSH RAHENA BHI ZAROORI HAI
TINKA-TINKA JOD KAR EK PARINDE NE APNA BASERA BASA LIYA
AGAR MAALIK KO NA MANJUR HAI TOH USKA GIRNA ZAROORI HAI....

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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2010, 06:52:32 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Khwaish ji... bahut sahi baat kahi hai aapne... bahut hi khoobsurti se likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2010, 07:33:37 PM »
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Main jabse Yo pe member bana hoon, kafi parra hai...Ap wakei mere fav shayar main se ho...Ap dil choo lete ho har baar...yun hi likte rahiyega dost...Bahaut khoob...Dusra aur teesra shaer dil ko bahaut zada pasand aya...
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2010, 08:29:28 PM »
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Wah wah wah Khwaish ji,bahut pasand aayi aapke kavita,excellent creation.hamesha ki tarah bahut sachai,aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.keep up the good work. icon_salut Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2010, 09:50:22 PM »
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khwaish ji "khayaal bahot achha hai. bahot khoob
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2010, 04:37:11 AM »
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   Khwaish ji,bahut khoobsurat zazbaat pesh kiy hai aapne. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2010, 05:50:44 AM »
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Wah Khwaish ji kya hi khoob likha hai aapne. Bahot achha laga padhkar. Bahot shandaar aur achhe khayalaat.
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2010, 07:11:56 AM »
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Khawish Sahab Bahoth qoob Dad qubool Karen ,, Daur a hazir ke sab se bade shayar janab Waseem Barelvi sahab ka ye matla kaun bhol sakta hai ,, is sher ke phailao me acha qayalath pesh kiye hain apne .. iss ghazal ka eak aur sher jo mujhe behad pasand hai ..

Usse Saliqa hi nahi mahesos karne ka !!
Jo kaheta hai khuda hai to nazar ana zarori hai !!

-----------------------Waseem barelvi sahab---------------

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