To Tum soch paate main Kya Ban gaya hu...

Ek aur Nazm pesh-e-khidmat hai...
Hope you 'll like it.
{the first like is taken from Udaan. Rest all is mine}


Lahro.n se aage agar dekh paate to tum jaan jaate main kya sochta hu........
Sitaaro.n se aage ummide.n nikalti, to tum jaan paate main kya chaahta hu......

Paanv gade hai Jamiino me lekin,
Nigahe.n Jami hai Falak par Hamari,
parindo.n ke ghar me Basera jo hota, To tum dekh paate main jo dekhta hu......

Duao.n me paane ka Jazbaa jo hota,
Mohammad Namaazo.n me khud aake milte,
Khuda ko jo sajdo.n me mahsuus karte, to tumko bhi milta jo main maangta hu.....

Dil me mohabbat ka ehsaas hota,
Saanso. ko Ghazalo.n ki Taaliim hoti,
Dil me ibaadat jo Lafjo.n Ki hoti, to Tum bhi Samajhte Main Kya likh raha hu....

Dhadkan me Sholo.n ki taamiir hoti,
Aankho.n me jazbo. ki taabiir hoti,
Sitaaro.n ko chhune ke sapne jo hote,To Tum soch paate main Kya Ban gaya hu.......

Dhadkti jo Dhadkan Gariibo.n ki khaatir,
Nawajish ki Bhi tum me taaqat jo hoti,
Samajhte jo tum YaaRa dukh dard sabka, To tum jaan jaate main kya Kar raha hu......!!

shukriya killbill ji....

thanks nirala ji. aap jaise kuch dosto ki houslafzai ki wajah se hi likhne ka housla bana rahta hai. shukriya...

janab vipul kumar ji!
Nazm mein ramziyat paida karna kamaal ka fun mana jata hai jo aapke is nazm mein chahaarsoo nazar aa raha hai. tayoor e fikr ki ooNchi uRaan rakhne waali aap jaisi shakhsiyat apne ehsaasaat o jazbaat ko fikri pairaaye mein dhaalne ka fun khoob jaanti hai, inhi fikr ki bulandiyon ko lafzon mein is tarah se pirona k woh aik alag duniya mein le jaaye yahi shayar ko doosre sho'ara se alag shanaakht ata karti hai. aap apni tahreeron se alag pahchaan banaate chale jayenge, mujhe ye yaqeen kaamil hai. Apni is purlutf kaifiyat se muzaiyan nazm par meri jaanib se hazaron daad qubul kijiye.

(waquif ansari)

Bahut BAhut Shukriya Wauif ji.
Aate rahiye.
Khush rahiye.....

Shukriya dost. Mujhe bahut khushi hui ki aapne mujhe sach me is kabil samjha.
Lekin padhana to thoda mushkil rahega.
Par jo dil se kuch sikhna chahte hai, mujhe unki madad karne me khushi hoti hai.
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To agar aap sach me kuch sikhna chahte hai to pahle to is site par 'register' kar le. Jis se aap mujhse dubara baat kar sake.........
Shukriya.