TODDO NA DIL KISEE KA ................MKV

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Deedaar hona hai abhee uska kareeb se
Usko bhee ho gayee hai muhabbat gareeb se

Aaoo  na,  ammi jaan gayee haiN khareed ko
Andaaj haiN hujoor ke lagte ajeeb se

Shayad hi de sakuN mai khushee mujhse door rah
Kyo kar huaa hai ishq tujhe badnaseeb se

Din raat meree yaad me khoyee huee hai vo
Chaahat bhi aisi milti hai kitne  naseeb  se

Toddo na dil kisee ka bhee seekha ‘mukesh’ ne
Har dam voh phir bhi darta hai apne raqeeb se
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2012, 11:11:58 AM »
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waah waah bahut sunder laajwaab khush raho
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2012, 11:46:37 AM »
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khoob kaha Mukesh Ji,  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2012, 11:55:09 AM »
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Deedaar hona hai abhee uska kareeb se
Usko bhee ho gayee hai muhabbat gareeb se

Aaoo  na,  ammi jaan gayee haiN khareed ko
Andaaj haiN hujoor ke lagte ajeeb se

Shayad hi de sakuN mai khushee mujhse door rah
Kyo kar huaa hai ishq tujhe badnaseeb se

Din raat meree yaad me khoyee huee hai vo
chaahat bhi aisi milti hai kitne  naseeb  se

Toddo na dil kisee ka bhee seekha ‘mukesh’ ne
Har dam voh phir bhi darta hai apne raqeeb se


Bahut khub bahut umda peskash Mukesh ji dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad qabool kariye......ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2012, 12:00:09 PM »
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Wah Wah Mukesh Ji Bahut Umda Likha Hai Janab Daad Hazir HAi Kabul Kijyega Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2012, 12:39:07 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Beautiful,Beauiful,Beautiful.
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2012, 12:39:34 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Mukesh ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2012, 12:40:24 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob mkv ji.. Usual Smile

Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 03, 2012, 01:31:01 PM »
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wahhh ji wah
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«Reply #9 on: August 03, 2012, 01:32:34 PM »
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wahhh ji wah
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«Reply #10 on: August 03, 2012, 09:18:01 PM »
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Deedaar hona hai abhee uska kareeb se
Usko bhee ho gayee hai muhabbat gareeb se

Aaoo  na,  ammi jaan gayee haiN khareed ko
Andaaj haiN hujoor ke lagte ajeeb se Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Shayad hi de sakuN mai khushee mujhse door rah
Kyo kar huaa hai ishq tujhe badnaseeb se

Din raat meree yaad me khoyee huee hai vo
Chaahat bhi aisi milti hai kitne  naseeb  se

Toddo na dil kisee ka bhee seekha ‘mukesh’ ne
Har dam voh phir bhi darta hai apne raqeeb se



naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice-mkv
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«Reply #11 on: August 04, 2012, 01:25:54 AM »
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Deedaar hona hai abhee uska kareeb se
Usko bhee ho gayee hai muhabbat gareeb se

Aaoo  na,  ammi jaan gayee haiN khareed ko
Andaaj haiN hujoor ke lagte ajeeb se

Shayad hi de sakuN mai khushee mujhse door rah
Kyo kar huaa hai ishq tujhe badnaseeb se

Din raat meree yaad me khoyee huee hai vo
Chaahat bhi aisi milti hai kitne  naseeb  se

Toddo na dil kisee ka bhee seekha ‘mukesh’ ne
Har dam voh phir bhi darta hai apne raqeeb se

Mukesh Jee , kamaal kar diya, kya umda ghazal kahi hai, matala aur makhta to lajwab rahe, Aapki shayri me kuch nayii cheez nazar aane lagi hai, jo dekhkar bohut achcha lagta hai, aap samajh gaye honge meN kis cheez ki baat kar raha hun, aise hi likhte rahiye,khuda aapko bohut kamyaabi ata farmaye,....meri dili mubarakbad qubool kareN....
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«Reply #12 on: August 04, 2012, 03:39:51 AM »
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waah waah, bahut khoob, shandaar ghazal
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«Reply #13 on: August 04, 2012, 03:55:32 AM »
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waah bahut khoob sir
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«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2012, 06:42:02 AM »
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waah waah bahut sunder laajwaab khush raho
Thanks Sir
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