Toofaan kay atay hi kinara ker gaya

by Farhan Sohail on March 01, 2013, 12:10:58 AM
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Sahara de ke be-sahara ker gaya
Toofaan kay atay hi kinara ker gaya


chand keh ker wo bulata tha mujhay
ab aik Toota saa Sitara ker gaya

Muhabbat ne uski Khaar mujh ko ker deya
be-Ghar se ghar, pher awara ker gaya                sad11


Sanbhaal k chalnay ka irada tha mera
Janay Kahan Ghalti Dubara ker gaya

Jis ne b socha hai muhabbat ek "Nafah"          "Profit"
woh hi yahan Apna Khasaara ker gaya              "Loss"



Naaz tha Khush-Bakhti pe "Farhan" ko
Usay bhi Kismat ka wo Mara ker gaya




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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2013, 02:24:23 AM »
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boht khub farhan sahab
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2013, 05:07:17 AM »
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Buht Shukreya aap ki Nazar e inayat ka. ek choti se koshish ki hai aap k dil main jagah bana sakoon,

agr yehi aap doston ki chahat rahi tu kon jaa paye ga iss mehfil ko chor k,,



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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2013, 12:14:28 PM »
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nice . keep iy up
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Waah waah waah. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2013, 05:03:22 PM »
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Sahara de ke be-sahara ker gaya
Toofaan kay atay hi kinara ker gaya


chand keh ker wo bulata tha mujhay
ab aik Toota saa Sitara ker gaya

Muhabbat ne uski Khaar mujh ko ker deya
be-Ghar se ghar, pher awara ker gaya                sad11


Sanbhaal k chalnay ka irada tha mera
Janay Kahan Ghalti Dubara ker gaya

Jis ne b socha hai muhabbat ek "Nafah"          "Profit"
woh hi yahan Apna Khasaara ker gaya              "Loss"



Naaz tha Khush-Bakhti pe "Farhan" ko
Usay bhi Kismat ka wo Mara ker gaya




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Waah Waah waah...

Bahut Bahut Khooob Farhan Ji..

Bahut Hi Achi Ghazal..

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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2013, 05:04:56 PM »
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wah wah bahut badiya likha hai aapne. bahut bahut daad
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2013, 06:16:08 PM »
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buht buht shukreyaaa aap sab doston ka meri aik choti se koshish ko pasand kernay ka ,,,,,,,
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«Reply #11 on: March 01, 2013, 06:30:08 PM »
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Toofaan kay atay hi kinara ker gaya

Kya baat hai Farhaan jee
bahut accha nibhaya hai aapne..
khoob bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2013, 12:16:23 AM »
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Thanks MKV g
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bahut khoob
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