Tu jo keh de toh yeh halaat badal jaayenge

by livingbytheday on February 14, 2013, 05:37:49 PM
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Tu jo keh de toh yeh halaat badal jaayenge
Mere khawab bhi tere paas hi pal jaayenge

Bahut ujaala hai tere waadon  mein dar lagta hai
Yeh kisi din ki tarah shaam ko dhal jayenge

Waqt ke shaakh se pat_to ke girne ka sabak
naye ittefaaq puraane yaadon ko nigal jaayenge

mere kadmo ko mil jaaye koi maqsad ka safar
aawaara raastey mumkin hai sambhal jaayenge

Saaye mere humdum, bas ujaale tak hai
andhere hotey hi yeh saaf nikal jaayenge

Dil e betaab, pathar mein dhadkta hai “Deepak”
humko le le koi baahon mein pighal jaayenge
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2013, 06:13:28 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2013, 06:23:35 PM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on February 14, 2013, 05:37:49 PM
Tu jo keh de toh yeh halaat badal jaayenge
Mere khawab bhi tere paas hi pal jaayenge
na babaa mere hi khawaab itne hain ki kya bataao.n main ne doosro.n ke khawaab paane ka chreche nahin khola hai ji
Bahut ujaala hai tere waadon  mein dar lagta hai
Yeh kisi din ki tarah shaam ko dhal jayenge
haan waade pe yaqeen mat karna. main khud se bhi kisi kaam ka wada nahin karti icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Waqt ke shaakh se pat_to ke girne ka sabak
naye ittefaaq puraane yaadon ko nigal jaayenge
tabdili laaazim hai janaab . warna boriyat ho jaaye gi icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
mere kadmo ko mil jaaye koi maqsad ka safar
aawaara raastey mumkin hai sambhal jaayenge
mujh se gar waabasta ho to chale aao. per bhaut kathin hai dagar panghat ki icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Saaye mere humdum, bas ujaale tak hai
andhere hotey hi yeh saaf nikal jaayenge
saaye ka nahin humsafar ka saath dekho to sahi hoga icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Dil e betaab, pathar mein dhadkta hai “Deepak”
humko le le koi baahon mein pighal jaayenge
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bahut khoob............!
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2013, 07:23:59 PM »
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Deepak Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH bahut khoob janab bahut khoob, bade hi khoobsurat aur
umdaa lafzoN meiN gehre ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai... Usual Smile

Waqai umdaa shayri ki hai janab... sabhi ashaar beshak gazab ke aur
behad umdaa rahe... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


Quote from: livingbytheday on February 14, 2013, 05:37:49 PM
Tu jo keh de toh yeh halaat badal jaayenge
Mere khawab bhi tere paas hi pal jaayenge

Kia baat hai janab bada achcha matla kaha hai bahut khoob...
                   

Bahut ujaala hai tere waadon  mein dar lagta hai
Yeh kisi din ki tarah shaam ko dhal jayenge

WaaH waaH waaH kia kahne jee waaH behad khoob aur umdaa sher
kaha hai daad daad daad... Usual Smile                   

Waqt ke shaakh se pat_to ke girne ka sabak
naye ittefaaq puraane yaadon ko nigal jaayenge

Behad khoobsurat sher raha yeH bhi bahut khoob... Usual Smile                   

mere kadmo ko mil jaaye koi maqsad ka safar
aawaara raastey mumkin hai sambhal jaayenge

Kia kahne janab dilshaad kar diyaa... bada khoob sher kaha hai
daad daad daad.. Usual Smile                   

Saaye mere humdum, bas ujaale tak hai
andhere hotey hi yeh saaf nikal jaayenge

Behad khoob jee behad khoob daad daad...                   

Dil e betaab, pathar mein dhadkta hai “Deepak”
humko le le koi baahon mein pighal jaayenge

WallaaH janab kia kahne " Dil e betaab patthar meiN dhadkta hai"
bahut khoob... sani bhi achcha raha.. daad daad daad.. Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2013, 07:30:45 PM »
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Waaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaah dil khush kar diyaa aapne
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2013, 01:49:55 AM »
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bahut khoob deepak ek rau qubool karen
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2013, 03:24:41 AM »
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Awesome composition
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on February 14, 2013, 06:13:28 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bhut khub

bahut shukriyaa
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Quote from: Sheba on February 14, 2013, 06:23:35 PM

bahut khoob............!

bahut bahut shukriyaa, aapne har sher ko saraaha, aapka shuqr gujaar hu, thank you
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 14, 2013, 07:23:59 PM
Deepak Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH bahut khoob janab bahut khoob, bade hi khoobsurat aur
umdaa lafzoN meiN gehre ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai... Usual Smile

Waqai umdaa shayri ki hai janab... sabhi ashaar beshak gazab ke aur
behad umdaa rahe... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



bahut bahut shukriyaa
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«Reply #10 on: February 15, 2013, 06:50:09 AM »
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Waqt ke shaakh se pat_to ke girne ka sabak
naye ittefaaq puraane yaadon ko nigal jaayenge
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mere kadmo ko mil jaaye koi maqsad ka safar
aawaara raastey mumkin hai sambhal jaayenge
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Saaye mere humdum, bas ujaale tak hai
andhere hotey hi yeh saaf nikal jaayenge
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Dil e betaab, pathar mein dhadkta hai “Deepak”
humko le le koi baahon mein pighal jaayenge
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«Reply #11 on: February 15, 2013, 12:41:43 PM »
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Bahut khoob Deepak jee
sabhee ashaar..behad khoob rahe..
mubarakbaad
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on February 14, 2013, 07:30:45 PM
Waaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaah dil khush kar diyaa aapne

shukriyaa sir
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 15, 2013, 01:49:55 AM
bahut khoob deepak ek rau qubool karen

sir aapko yeh ghazal pasand aayee, bas mere liyeh yehi badi baat hai, thank you
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«Reply #14 on: February 15, 2013, 03:54:21 PM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on February 14, 2013, 05:37:49 PM
Tu jo keh de toh yeh halaat badal jaayenge
Mere khawab bhi tere paas hi pal jaayenge

Bahut ujaala hai tere waadon  mein dar lagta hai
Yeh kisi din ki tarah shaam ko dhal jayenge

Waqt ke shaakh se pat_to ke girne ka sabak
naye ittefaaq puraane yaadon ko nigal jaayenge

mere kadmo ko mil jaaye koi maqsad ka safar
aawaara raastey mumkin hai sambhal jaayenge

Saaye mere humdum, bas ujaale tak hai
andhere hotey hi yeh saaf nikal jaayenge

Dil e betaab, pathar mein dhadkta hai “Deepak”
humko le le koi baahon mein pighal jaayenge


So Nice ...........
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