Tu Taish Ya Khuda Ki Hai....!!

by ghayal_shayar on December 26, 2012, 02:04:58 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 28, 2012, 03:45:50 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on December 26, 2012, 03:01:42 PM
nice,sir


shukriya janaab, n a request, that please dnt call me sir, it seems awkward.... Usual Smile thank u for ur support, hope to have the same appriciation from ur end, in the future too...
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«Reply #16 on: December 28, 2012, 08:03:03 PM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on December 26, 2012, 03:03:20 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

shireen ji is hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukiya, umeed karta huN ki aap age bhi yuNhi saath nibhaati rheNgi...!!
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«Reply #17 on: December 29, 2012, 03:33:15 PM »
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Quote from: prashad on December 26, 2012, 04:30:57 PM
bahut khoob

Prashad saahab, tareef ka shukriya, bas yunhi saath dete raheN aap...
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«Reply #18 on: December 29, 2012, 05:54:05 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on December 26, 2012, 02:04:58 PM

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Ae dil bata tu aaj jo, itna udaash hai,
Vo shaqs kaun hai, ke yuNhi aas-paas hai.

AankhoN me minnateN huiN, hothoN pe pyaas hai,
Pehna ye aaj tumne kyun mera libaas hai.

Karta yahaaN jo ishq hai, uski to haar hai,
Main hooN ki koi aur hai jo bad hawaas hai.

Ab intezaar ki ho chuki intehaaN, suno,
Waqt-e-visaal* ta'e jo hua dus pachaas hai.

*dekhne ka waqt, time for meeting

Khousboo gulaab ki to nasha hai sharaab sa,
Tu 'taish' ya khuda ki hai, kiski kayaas* hai.

*kalpana, Imagination.
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Taish sahab, ek bahut khoobsoorat kalaam likha hai aapne. Matlaa bahut hi shaandaar hai.

Doosre misre me'n 'kyuN' lafz ka ist'amaal theek nahi'n hai aur misre ko behr se bahar kar raha hai.

Ise chhod kar kahi'n koi behr ki pareshaani nahi'n hai.

Waqt-e-visaal wala sher bhi bahut naya sa adaa kiya hai. Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #19 on: January 01, 2013, 12:28:45 PM »
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shukriya mukesh sir, thanku ji...
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«Reply #20 on: January 02, 2013, 06:49:07 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 26, 2012, 07:05:16 PM
Lucky Jee Aadab!


Khushi huyi janab yeH jaankar ke aap bher meiN likhane ki achchi
practice kar rahe haiN... Humne toH jaise hi sdc chhodi waise hi
bher aur kafiye se jaise rishta tod diyaa tha...

Zidd Sahaab ne jitna sikhaya tha use hi yaad karke aage ke kadam rakhte rahe...

Aapki last bher baNd kalaam behad khoob rahi thi..
Chaliye is kalaam par nazar dalte haiN... Usual Smile





Taish sahaab is umda kalaam par huamri hazaaroN daad O mubbarak
bad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile

yahaan nazar farmaane ka shukriya saahab, aur kyuN ki gadbad se main bhi ittefaq rakhta huN, darasal me use aise likhna sahi rahega "Pehna jo aaj tumne ye kiskaa libaas hai" aage bhi yuNhi apni nazar banaaye rahiye saahab.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: January 04, 2013, 06:54:23 PM »
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Quote from: haan on December 26, 2012, 07:52:15 PM
BAHUT KHOOB KALAAM KAHA HAI AAPNE  ....BAHUT  C  DAAD

rehaan saahab daad ka shukriya, jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko kalaam pasand aaya... umeed karta hun ki aage v aapka saath yuNhi bana rahegaa...
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«Reply #22 on: January 05, 2013, 05:21:58 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on December 26, 2012, 02:04:58 PM

Beh'r 221 2121 1221 212



Ae dil bata tu aaj jo, itna udaash hai,
Vo shaqs kaun hai, ke yuNhi aas-paas hai.

AankhoN me minnateN huiN, hothoN pe pyaas hai,
Pehna ye aaj tumne kyun mera libaas hai.

Karta yahaaN jo ishq hai, uski to haar hai,
Main hooN ki koi aur hai jo bad hawaas hai.

Ab intezaar ki ho chuki intehaaN, suno,
Waqt-e-visaal* ta'e jo hua dus pachaas hai.

*dekhne ka waqt, time for meeting

Khousboo gulaab ki to nasha hai sharaab sa,
Tu 'taish' ya khuda ki hai, kiski kayaas* hai.

*kalpana, Imagination.
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bahut khoob 2nd sher zayada pasand aaya
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«Reply #23 on: January 05, 2013, 12:26:22 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on December 26, 2012, 02:04:58 PM

Beh'r 221 2121 1221 212



Ae dil bata tu aaj jo, itna udaash hai,
Vo shaqs kaun hai, ke yuNhi aas-paas hai.

AankhoN me minnateN huiN, hothoN pe pyaas hai,
Pehna ye aaj tumne kyun mera libaas hai.

Karta yahaaN jo ishq hai, uski to haar hai,
Main hooN ki koi aur hai jo bad hawaas hai.

Ab intezaar ki ho chuki intehaaN, suno,
Waqt-e-visaal* ta'e jo hua dus pachaas hai.

*dekhne ka waqt, time for meeting

Khousboo gulaab ki to nasha hai sharaab sa,
Tu 'taish' ya khuda ki hai, kiski kayaas* hai.

*kalpana, Imagination.
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osssummmmmm gazal taish ji.... aapki ye koshish kaamyaab rahi..
yunhi likhte rahen khush rahen
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«Reply #24 on: January 06, 2013, 08:23:38 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on December 27, 2012, 12:46:19 AM
boht khub taish ji

saahill saahab, tareef ka shukriya, umeed karta huN, aapka saath aage v yuNhi bana rahegaa...
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«Reply #25 on: January 19, 2013, 03:50:13 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on December 27, 2012, 02:15:16 AM
bohut khoob taish jee daad qubool kareN
aarish bhai jaan, jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko kalaam pasand aaya, umeed karta hun aage v aapka saath yuNhi bana rahegaa...!!
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«Reply #26 on: January 19, 2013, 06:46:12 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 27, 2012, 05:32:05 AM
bahut khoob

bahukhandi saahab, tareef aur saath ka bahut bahut shukriya saahab...
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«Reply #27 on: February 02, 2013, 09:22:21 AM »
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Ritesh ji, tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya saahab...!! yunHi aage v saath dete raheN...
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«Reply #28 on: February 02, 2013, 09:23:29 AM »
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Quote from: satish-Aman on December 27, 2012, 07:45:49 AM
Bahut Badiya sir...

satish ji saath aur tareef dono ka bahut bahut shukriya, bas yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheN....
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«Reply #29 on: February 02, 2013, 09:24:52 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on December 27, 2012, 03:13:44 PM
waah waah, bahut hi khoobsurat, bahut hi acchi ghazal, wah
saath aur hausla badhaane ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukraguzaar hun saahab, yuNhi saath dete raheN...
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