Tu Taish Ya Khuda Ki Hai....!!

by ghayal_shayar on December 26, 2012, 02:04:58 PM
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«Reply #30 on: February 02, 2013, 09:27:25 AM »
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Taish sahab, ek bahut khoobsoorat kalaam likha hai aapne. Matlaa bahut hi shaandaar hai.

Doosre misre me'n 'kyuN' lafz ka ist'amaal theek nahi'n hai aur misre ko behr se bahar kar raha hai.

Ise chhod kar kahi'n koi behr ki pareshaani nahi'n hai.

Waqt-e-visaal wala sher bhi bahut naya sa adaa kiya hai. Bahut khoob.


aapki tareef maayne rakhti hai anjaan saahab, jaan kar il ko chain pada ki aapko ghazal pasand aayi, umeed karta hun aage v aapka saath yuNhi milta rahegaa....
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«Reply #31 on: February 02, 2013, 09:28:36 AM »
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bahut khoob 2nd sher zayada pasand aaya

adil saahab, tareef ka shukraguzaar huN, bas yuNhi apni nazar banaaye rakheN...
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«Reply #32 on: February 02, 2013, 09:29:58 AM »
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osssummmmmm gazal taish ji.... aapki ye koshish kaamyaab rahi..
yunhi likhte rahen khush rahen




aahna ji, pehli baar mukhatib huN aapse, khushi hui jaan kar ki aapko kalaam pasand aaya, umeed karta huN aapka saath aage bhi isi qadar milta rahegaa....
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