tufan aaya hai..ghazal..jeet jainam

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  Ye kaisa ghanghor tufaan aaya hai.
Mari kashti ko bich me  dubaya hai.

Pal  bhar main sab  kuch tod  gaya.
Kiyon   eyesa   qahar  barsaya   hai.

Zindagi to pahle se hi  nashaad thi.
Bacha hua chen bhi lotne aaya hai.

Eysey   girey  ki  sambhal  na  paye.
Jo mila usne thokar mar giraya hai.

Woh  zalim  yaad  rahe  sari  umar.
Isliye zakhmo ko  kuredta  aaya hai.

Dil e naadan  galti kar betha ishq ki.
Usey  chah kar  bohat pachtaya hai.

Koi keh dena usey gulab le aane ko.
Uske  dilbar ka  akhri waqt aaya hai   .
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2014, 08:52:01 PM »
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   Ye kaisa ghanghor tufaan aaya hai.
Mari kashti ko bich me  dubaya hai.

Pal  bhar main sab  kuch tod  gaya.
Kiyon   eyesa   qahar  barsaya   hai.

Zindagi to pahle se hi  nashaad thi.
Bacha hua chen bhi lotne aaya hai.

Eysey   girey  ki  sambhal  na  paye.
Jo mila usne thokar mar giraya hai.

Woh  zalim  yaad  rahe  sari  umar.
Isliye zakhmo ko  kuredta  aaya hai.

Dil e naadan  galti kar betha ishq ki.
Usey  chah kar  bohat pachtaya hai.

Koi keh dena usey gulab le aane ko.
Uske  dilbar ka  akhri waqt aaya hai   .

bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai Jeet Sahib, dheron daad Rau ke saath.
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2014, 11:32:49 PM »
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Shukriya ravi sir ji
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Bohat bohat shukriya surinder sir ji mera husla badhne ke liye
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«Reply #6 on: November 21, 2014, 02:30:53 AM »
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Shukriya saini sir ji
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bahut hi ghamgin aur rulane waali lines likhi hai aapne....dil ka dard bakhubi byaan kiya....
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Shukriya nikhaar ji
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