Tujhe maykhaane se Dozakh ki buu aatee hai: sunte hain?

by abdbundeli on February 29, 2016, 02:26:07 PM
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Usee se aashnaa hun, jo shafaq-see hai, zareenaa hai!
Mujhe to dukhtar-e-angoor ke saaye mein jeenaa hai!!

Ahad thaa unkaa, pahunchaayenge le jaakar kinaare wo:
Magar ab dekhtaa hun, pot kaa patwaar jheenaa hai!

Dikhaa kar khwaab Jannat ke, hamaareen chheen leen khushiyaan;
Miyaan waaiz, yahaan may hai, mohobbat hai, haseenaa hai!

Tujhe maykhaane se Dozakh ki buu aatee hai: sunte hain?
Are ahmaq, wo khushboo hai; gulaaboun kaa paseenaa hai!

Bahut naayaab hai yah shai; bhalaa toubaa karen ham kyoun?
Hamaare jigar-o-dil fayyaaz hain; mazboot seenaa hai!

Mujhe do maykadaa; unko mubaarak ho bahut Jannat;
‘Abd’, kaalee ghataa hai, aur Saawan kaa maheenaa hai!

(An excerpt from the first gazal of my book ‘Rain Shabnami’)
-   Abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: February 29, 2016, 09:29:54 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2016, 08:02:34 AM »
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sunnay me ghalti hogai apse buu maykhaane se nahin balkiiii  BangHead
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, dost!
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kyaa baat hai waah waah

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Dr. Sb'!
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Quote from: Rustum Rangila on March 01, 2016, 07:05:49 AM
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Rangila ji!
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Quote from: Mast Khalander on March 01, 2016, 08:02:34 AM
sunnay me ghalti hogai apse buu maykhaane se nahin balkiiii  BangHead

To err is human! You got it right! Thanks!
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wah waah

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, dost!
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