Tujhse Bahut UmeedeiN HaiN "Khwahish"

by khwaish on April 20, 2013, 10:21:35 PM
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Teri Yaadein Bhi Mere Bachpan Ke Khilono Ki Tarah Hain
Jab Bhi Tanha Hota Hoon Bas Inhe Lekar Baith Jaata Hoon


Har Kadam Har Aahat par Tera Intezaar Hai
Kaise naa Kahun Ke Mujhe Tujhse Pyaar Hai

Teri Saadgi Ne Mujhe Teri Orre Kheencha
Tere kabze meN Ab Dil Mera Giraftaar Hai

Teri Yaadein Humesha Mere Saath Rehti Hain
Khud Par Bhi Kahaa Rehta Mujhe Ikhtiyaar Hai

Suuna Hai Mohabbat MeN Dard Bahut Hota Hai
Khata Ki Hai To Koi Gila Nahi..Hum Khatawaar Hai

Naa Jaane Kitne Jalve Hai Tere Har JalvoN Mein
Tera Husn,Teri Ada..Sab karte Mujhe Bekaraar Hai

Tum Ho Aaj Saath To Ek Sukoon Sa Hai Ehh Humdum
Varna Kahaa Thamtee Kabhi Zindagi Ki Raftaar Hai

Teri Mohabbat Ke Siva Kuch Bhi Nahi Chaahiye Mujhe
Tujhse Bahut UmeedeN HaiN,"Khwahish" Umeedvaar Hai


          ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2013, 10:50:49 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on April 20, 2013, 10:21:35 PM
Teri Yaadein Bhi Mere Bachpan Ke Khilono Ki Tarah Hain
Jab Bhi Tanha Hota Hoon Bas Inhe Lekar Baith Jaata Hoon


Har Kadam Har Aahat par Tera Intezaar Hai
Kaise naa Kahun Ke Mujhe Tujhse Pyaar Hai

Teri Saadgi Ne Mujhe Teri Orre Kheencha
Tere kabze meN Ab Dil Mera Giraftaar Hai

Teri Yaadein Humesha Mere Saath Rehti Hain
Khud Par Bhi Kahaa Rehta Mujhe Ikhtiyaar Hai

Suuna Hai Mohabbat MeN Dard Bahut Hota Hai
Khata Ki Hai To Koi Gila Nahi..Hum Khatawaar Hai

Naa Jaane Kitne Jalve Hai Tere Har JalvoN Mein
Tera Husn,Teri Ada..Sab karte Mujhe Bekaraar Hai

Tum Ho Aaj Saath To Ek Sukoon Sa Hai Ehh Humdum
Varna Kahaa Thamtee Kabhi Zindagi Ki Raftaar Hai

Teri Mohabbat Ke Siva Kuch Bhi Nahi Chaahiye Mujhe
Tujhse Bahut UmeedeN HaiN,"Khwahish" Umeedvaar Hai


          ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~

waah lajawab kalaam ,....dil choo lene wale asshar rahe khwaish ji,.......yeh sher bohat pasand aaye
so bohat bohat bohat c daad,..............
Teri Yaadein Humesha Mere Saath Rehti Hain Khud Par Bhi Kahaa Rehta Mujhe Ikhtiyaar Hai Suuna Hai Mohabbat MeN Dard Bahut Hota Hai Khata Ki Hai To Koi Gila Nahi..Hum Khatawaar Hai
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2013, 11:15:53 PM »
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Kya kahoon is khoobsurat kalam par kittuji. har ek sher khoob hai. kiski tareef karoon aur kise chhod doon. dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh ghazal.aapka intro sher toh bas maar hi daala hai. dil se mubarakbad qubool kijiye.
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2013, 12:06:29 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2013, 12:30:15 AM »
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Good.
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2013, 12:54:14 AM »
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Khoobsurat peshkash khwaish jee
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2013, 01:08:59 AM »
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nice ghazal, khwahish ji. bahut Mubarak.
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«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2013, 04:01:50 AM »
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Beautiful Ghazal Khwaish Jee!!! Har Ek Ashaar Mohabbat mein duba huaa tha, Pad kar bohat hi mazaa aaya.

Yeh Ashaar Lajawaab rahe:

Har Kadam Har Aahat par Tera Intezaar Hai
Kaise naa Kahun Ke Mujhe Tujhse Pyaar Hai

eri Yaadein Humesha Mere Saath Rehti Hain
Khud Par Bhi Kahaa Rehta Mujhe Ikhtiyaar Hai



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«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2013, 02:13:03 PM »
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beautifully composed congts
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2013, 06:13:49 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on April 20, 2013, 10:21:35 PM
Teri Yaadein Bhi Mere Bachpan Ke Khilono Ki Tarah Hain
Jab Bhi Tanha Hota Hoon Bas Inhe Lekar Baith Jaata Hoon


Har Kadam Har Aahat par Tera Intezaar Hai
Kaise naa Kahun Ke Mujhe Tujhse Pyaar Hai
mujhe pata hai. aisa kai log kah chuke hain mujhe farq nahin padta Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Teri Saadgi Ne Mujhe Teri Orre Kheencha
Tere kabze meN Ab Dil Mera Giraftaar Hai
mujhe kabhi fashion parade mein jaate hue nahin dekha.warna saari ghalatfahmi door ho jaati Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Teri Yaadein Humesha Mere Saath Rehti Hain
Khud Par Bhi Kahaa Rehta Mujhe Ikhtiyaar Hai
haan pataa hai diwaano.n si haalat bana rakhi hai. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Suuna Hai Mohabbat MeN Dard Bahut Hota Hai
Khata Ki Hai To Koi Gila Nahi..Hum Khatawaar Hai
bahut kam hote hain jo apna jurm qabool karte hain . iss saafgoi ko dekte hue ye adaalat tumhein bari karti hai aur ye hidaayat deti hai ki aainda bhi aisi khataa kate raho Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Naa Jaane Kitne Jalve Hai Tere Har JalvoN Mein
Tera Husn,Teri Ada..Sab karte Mujhe Bekaraar Hai
abhi to heroine ki acting deki hai jab vapm ki acting dekho ge to hosh faakhta ho jaaein ge Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Tum Ho Aaj Saath To Ek Sukoon Sa Hai Ehh Humdum
Varna Kahaa Thamtee Kabhi Zindagi Ki Raftaar Hai
acha main itni effective speed breaker hoon. dekho kahin traffic wale mera istemaal na kar lein Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Teri Mohabbat Ke Siva Kuch Bhi Nahi Chaahiye Mujhe
Tujhse Bahut UmeedeN HaiN,"Khwahish" Umeedvaar Hai
sure, confirm, lock kar doo.n ----ye inaam tumhara hua
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          ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~


masaale daar, mazedaar..............!
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waah lajawab kalaam ,....dil choo lene wale asshar rahe khwaish ji,.......yeh sher bohat pasand aaye
so bohat bohat bohat c daad,..............
Teri Yaadein Humesha Mere Saath Rehti Hain Khud Par Bhi Kahaa Rehta Mujhe Ikhtiyaar Hai Suuna Hai Mohabbat MeN Dard Bahut Hota Hai Khata Ki Hai To Koi Gila Nahi..Hum Khatawaar Hai




Thankyou Sooooooooooooooo Much Laaiba Ji....

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Kya kahoon is khoobsurat kalam par kittuji. har ek sher khoob hai. kiski tareef karoon aur kise chhod doon. dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh ghazal.aapka intro sher toh bas maar hi daala hai. dil se mubarakbad qubool kijiye.


Thanks a Milllion Aqsh ji...

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooooo Much......

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Alfazon ko kya rukh diya hai
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Quote from: khwahish on April 20, 2013, 10:21:35 PM
Teri Yaadein Bhi Mere Bachpan Ke Khilono Ki Tarah Hain
Jab Bhi Tanha Hota Hoon Bas Inhe Lekar Baith Jaata Hoon


Har Kadam Har Aahat par Tera Intezaar Hai
Kaise naa Kahun Ke Mujhe Tujhse Pyaar Hai

Teri Saadgi Ne Mujhe Teri Orre Kheencha
Tere kabze meN Ab Dil Mera Giraftaar Hai

Teri Yaadein Humesha Mere Saath Rehti Hain
Khud Par Bhi Kahaa Rehta Mujhe Ikhtiyaar Hai

Suuna Hai Mohabbat MeN Dard Bahut Hota Hai
Khata Ki Hai To Koi Gila Nahi..Hum Khatawaar Hain

Naa Jaane Kitne Jalve Hai Tere Har JalvoN Mein
Tera Husn,Teri Ada..Sab karte Mujhe Bekaraar Hain

Tum Ho Aaj Saath To Ek Sukoon Sa Hai Ehh Humdum
Varna Kahaa Thamtee Kabhi Zindagi Ki Raftaar Hai

Teri Mohabbat Ke Siva Kuch Bhi Nahi Chaahiye Mujhe
Tujhse Bahut UmeedeN HaiN,"Khwahish" Umeedvaar Hai


          ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~


further reference to the YOINDIA FB PUBLICATION ,sir--- concepts are good
but if you could mind these errors as highlighted .you are such a big poet and this type of errrrrrrrrros.
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