Tum aate ho pass

by suman59 on October 29, 2012, 02:15:45 AM
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Tum aate ho pass bahut accha lagta hai
Mit jaate santras bahut accha lagta hai

Jeevan ke patjhar se jujha bas teri
Aankhon ka madhumas bahut accha lagta hai

Tum aisi ho nadi ki jisko pee kar ke
badh jaati hai pyas bahut accha lagta hai

Tumne sangarshon mein mera saath diya hai
Jeevan aaya raas bahut accha lagta hai

Meri raah taka karte ho tum aksar
Mujhko yeh ahsaas bahut acha lagta hai

Saath hamara rahe salamat bas
Ho chahe banvaas bahut accha lagta hai



तुम  आते  हो  पास  बहुत  अच्छा  लगता  है
मिट  जाते  संत्रास  बहुत  अच्छा  लगता  है

जीवन  के  पतझर  से  जूझा,  बस  तेरी
आँखों  का  मधुमास  बहुत  अच्छा  लगता  है

तुम  ऐसी  हो  नदी   कि   जिसको  पी  कर  के
बढ़  जाती  है  प्यास  बहुत  अच्छा  लगता  है

तुमने संघर्षों   में  मेरा  साथ  दिया  है
जीवन  आया  रास  बहुत  अच्छा  लगता  है

मेरी  राह  तका  करते  हो  तुम  अक्सर
मुझको  यह  अहसास   बहुत  अच्छा   लगता  है

साथ  हमारा  रहे  सलामत  बस
हो  चाहे  बनवास  बहुत  अच्छा  लगता  है
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2012, 02:40:38 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2012, 03:48:18 AM »
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aapkaa post karnaa badaa achhaa lagtaa hai
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2012, 08:17:31 AM »
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  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause................AND SO ON.


ARZ KIYA EHSAAS BAHUT ACHCHHA LAGTA HAI,
HABD AAPKE KHAAS, BAHUT AACHCHHA LAGTA HAI.


THANKS FOR THIS VERY BEAUTIFUL COMPOSITION,
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2012, 09:35:28 AM »
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 icon_flower Beautiful
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2012, 01:57:05 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
excellent
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2012, 02:29:46 AM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause
shukriya nandbahu jee
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2012, 11:56:30 PM »
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Suman ji aapki ye rachna bahot umda aur unche darje ki hai. Sare lafz motiyon ki tarah piroye hain jo dil ke jazbaat ka behtreen muzahira karte hain.. Bahot badhai aaur daad meri taraf se pesh hai.
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2012, 03:38:24 PM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause

tks nandbahu jee
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2012, 03:41:11 PM »
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aapkaa post karnaa badaa achhaa lagtaa hai

aapka accha laga padkar hame bhi bada accha laga...
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«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2012, 03:41:46 PM »
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  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause................AND SO ON.


ARZ KIYA EHSAAS BAHUT ACHCHHA LAGTA HAI,
HABD AAPKE KHAAS, BAHUT AACHCHHA LAGTA HAI.


THANKS FOR THIS VERY BEAUTIFUL COMPOSITION,

thank you anand jee
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«Reply #11 on: October 31, 2012, 03:42:09 PM »
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icon_flower Beautiful

thank you sonu jee
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«Reply #12 on: October 31, 2012, 03:42:44 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
excellent

thank you aqsh jee
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«Reply #13 on: October 31, 2012, 03:43:29 PM »
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Suman ji aapki ye rachna bahot umda aur unche darje ki hai. Sare lafz motiyon ki tarah piroye hain jo dil ke jazbaat ka behtreen muzahira karte hain.. Bahot badhai aaur daad meri taraf se pesh hai.

aapka bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz Ashna jee
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«Reply #14 on: November 03, 2012, 05:55:19 PM »
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wah wah wah wah wah wah
aur kya likhuN
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