Tum hameN zahr pilaa do to maza aa jaaye

by Ghulam Haider on September 21, 2012, 01:17:21 AM
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Ahl e bazm aadaab !
MiSra' e TarH "Tum hameN zehr pilaa do to maza aa jaaye" par apni naa cheez si kaavish, aap aHbaab ki khidmat meN pesh kar rahaa hooN.



Rukh se parde ko haTaa do to maza aa jaaye.
Jalva e Husn dikhaa do to maza aa jaaye.


Apni masti bhari aankhoN se pilaa kar do jaam,
Ham ko mastaana banaa do to maza aa jaaye.



A’ashiq e zaar ki Haalat pe karam farmaao,
Dard e furqat ki davaa do to maza aa jaaye.


Lazzat e sozish e jaaN ishq meN kuchh ham ko mile,
Shama’ ulfat ki jalaa do to maza aa jaaye.


Apni zulfoN ka banaa kar na rakho Sirf aseer,
Jurm e ulfat pe sazaa do to maza aa jaaye.


Apne haathoN se moHabbat bhare andaaz ke saath,
Tum hameN zehr pilaa do to maza aa jaaye.


Hai Talabgaar e wafaa deke dil apnaa Haider,
Tum agar saath nibhaa do to maza aa jaaye.
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2012, 01:41:35 AM »
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haider sahab , aadab, kya umda ghazal kahi hai, har shair ghazal ka shair hai, mukammal aur riwayati ghazal kehte hain aap, is noiyyat ki shayri padhne ko milti hai to lagta hai ghazal abhi zinda hai apni poori aab o taab ke sath. Dheerooon daaaaad qubool kijiye.......
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2012, 01:50:49 AM »
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shri ghulam haidar ji

ab humein aarish bhai jaan ki tarah  itne achhe tarike se tareef karni to nahi aati ... hamare dil ko chhoo jaye humein bahut pasand aaye wahi hamare liye sab hai  hum itni bareeki se  kuch keh nahi paate

bas aapki yeh gazal padhi to bahut achha laga sirf ek bar nahi 1 ghante mein 7-8 bar padhi kyunki  padhne mein bada maza aa raha hai.. bahut hi lajawab aur khubsurat gazal..aapko hazaron daad aur mubarakbaad dete hai

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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2012, 03:32:19 AM »
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Bahut khubsurati se shabdon ko piroya hai....lajabab....
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2012, 03:34:31 AM »
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aap isee tarh mahfil ko guljaar banaa do to mazaa aa jaaye
bahut sunder ghazal hai dheron daad
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2012, 07:39:14 AM »
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BAhut Hi Sunder Rachna Haider Ji Bahut Khub
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2012, 10:58:46 AM »
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Haider Bhai ,,Salam Alaikum

Apke ma'yari kalamo'n se najane hum jaise kitni hi nauamoz mustafeed ho rahe hai'n aur Inshallah Hote rahenge...Ghazal ki tareef karna suraj ko diya dikhane jaisi baat hai ....Shahkaar ghazal ke liye aap hazarah dad qubool kare'n ....Ye koi nahi baat nahi ke humne apko parhke sher kahene sikhe'n ..Allah apko ek taweel umr se nawaze ....

Talib e ilm

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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2012, 01:52:36 PM »
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Adab ... bahut umda peshkash haider jee  Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2012, 01:58:16 PM »
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Bahut he sundar Gazal hai...bahut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2012, 03:48:44 PM »
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bahut khoob ,Haider saheb.Ghazal parh kar waqai maza aa gaya.bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #10 on: September 21, 2012, 07:21:21 PM »
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bahot hi numda ghazal.....bahot khoob, really very nice!
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«Reply #11 on: September 22, 2012, 10:28:58 AM »
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Haider Sahaab Aadaab!


Mashaa Allaah janab kia kahne aapke andaaz e
bayaaN ke behad umda gazal kahi hai janab...
Behad dilkash aur khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal
ko umdaa lafzoN meiN baNdha hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad dilkash rahe..
Is umda kavish par humari hazaaroN dili daad O
Mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: September 22, 2012, 12:39:59 PM »
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Quote from: Aarish on September 21, 2012, 01:41:35 AM
haider sahab , aadab, kya umda ghazal kahi hai, har shair ghazal ka shair hai, mukammal aur riwayati ghazal kehte hain aap, is noiyyat ki shayri padhne ko milti hai to lagta hai ghazal abhi zinda hai apni poori aab o taab ke sath. Dheerooon daaaaad qubool kijiye.......
MoHtaram Aarish ji aap ne jin alfaaZ se meri adnaa si kaavish ko saraaha hai us ke tashakkur ke liye mere paas alfaaZ nahiN haiN. Bas mukhtaSar ye hai ke aap dostoN ki himmat afzaaie se jahaN shauq e she'r goie paidaa hota hai wahiN z'immedaari ka iHsaas bhi hota hai. Dua'a kijiye ke mera shauq aap ke z'auq e a'ali ko mutaccir karta rahe aur nishaaT o farHat ki kaifiyyat bar qaraar rahe...
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«Reply #13 on: September 22, 2012, 12:52:09 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on September 21, 2012, 01:50:49 AM
shri ghulam haidar ji

ab humein aarish bhai jaan ki tarah  itne achhe tarike se tareef karni to nahi aati ... hamare dil ko chhoo jaye humein bahut pasand aaye wahi hamare liye sab hai  hum itni bareeki se  kuch keh nahi paate

bas aapki yeh gazal padhi to bahut achha laga sirf ek bar nahi 1 ghante mein 7-8 bar padhi kyunki  padhne mein bada maza aa raha hai.. bahut hi lajawab aur khubsurat gazal..aapko hazaron daad aur mubarakbaad dete hai

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Mere a'zeez, moHtaram Soudagar ji, aap ne baRe hi sundar Dhang se meri rachnaa par apne bhaavoN ko prakaT kiya hai. Mujhe bahut khushi huie ki aap ko meri ye rachnaa achchhi lagi. Kisi ki ta'reef meN do shabd bhi kaafi hote haiN, jabki aap ne to khul kar ta'reef ki hai. maiN aap ka aabhaari hooN. Allah aap ko hamesha khush rakhe.
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«Reply #14 on: September 22, 2012, 12:56:22 PM »
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Quote from: gaytri gupta on September 21, 2012, 03:32:19 AM
Bahut khubsurati se shabdon ko piroya hai....lajabab....

MoHtarama Gayitri gupta ji aap ne gaagar meN saagar waale andaaz se baat keh kar apne khoobSoorat khayaalaat ka iZhaar kiya hai. Aap ka shukr-guzaar hooN.
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