Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

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Gar housla hota, gam saare bhula dete
Nam aankhoN se bhi, hum muskuraa dete

Hota meherbaaN jo, hawa ka rukh kabhi
Ham ret par bhi, tumhara naam sajaa dete

Kaash ke tum padh paate, meri khamoshiyaaN
Apni tarah, tumko bhi hum rulaa dete

AshkoN ne meri, aankhoN ko ghar kar liya
Warna hum, poora samandar bahaa dete

UmmedieN wafa jo hoti hame, tumse kabhi
Guzarte paloN ko rokkar, tumko sadaa dete
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2012, 06:20:55 AM »
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Gar housla hota, gam saare bhula dete
Nam aankhoN se bhi, hum muskuraa dete  Applause

Hoti meherbaaN jo, hawa ki rukh kabhi
Ham ret par bhi, tumhara naam sajaa dete Applause

bahut pyaare ehsaasoN se sajee is khoobsurat ghazal ki jitni taareef kee jaaye kam hai.
bas aise hi likhti rahiye.
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2012, 06:23:08 AM »
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AshkoN ne meri, aankhoN ko ghar kar liya
Warna hum, poora samandar bahaa dete'
  
kya baat hai aqsh sahiba, ...bahut khoobsoorat ehsaas hain..daad-o-mubaarakbaad qubool kijiye!
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2012, 06:38:11 AM »
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No Word For This Cration...
superb
mind blowing
awesome
Lovely
just excellent Cration Didi Ji...Aur Aaj Ka Rau Bhi Didi Ji Ka


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«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2012, 06:39:17 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 12, 2012, 06:10:27 AM
Gar housla hota, gam saare bhula dete
Nam aankhoN se bhi, hum muskuraa dete

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Hoti meherbaaN jo, hawa ki rukh kabhi
Ham ret par bhi, tumhara naam sajaa dete

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kaash ke tum padh paate, meri khamoshiyaaN
Apni tarah, tumko bhi hum rulaa dete

WAAH WAAAH WAAH  Applause Applause Applause Applause KYA BAAT HAI
AshkoN ne meri, aankhoN ko ghar kar liya
Warna hum, poora samandar bahaa dete

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UmmedieN wafa jo hoti hame, tumse kabhi
Guzarte paloN ko rokkar, tumko sadaa dete[
 Applause Applause Applause/b]

WAH WAH AQSH JI KYA KAMAAL KA LIKHA HAI,,HAR ASHAAR MEIN EK EK EHSAAS HAI LAGATA HAI,,, Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2012, 10:37:44 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 12, 2012, 06:20:55 AM
Gar housla hota, gam saare bhula dete
Nam aankhoN se bhi, hum muskuraa dete  Applause

Hoti meherbaaN jo, hawa ki rukh kabhi
Ham ret par bhi, tumhara naam sajaa dete Applause

bahut pyaare ehsaasoN se sajee is khoobsurat ghazal ki jitni taareef kee jaaye kam hai.
bas aise hi likhti rahiye.



thank you so so soooooooo much mukesh jee
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«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2012, 10:38:18 AM »
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Quote from: shara63 on December 12, 2012, 06:23:08 AM
AshkoN ne meri, aankhoN ko ghar kar liya
Warna hum, poora samandar bahaa dete'
   
kya baat hai aqsh sahiba, ...bahut khoobsoorat ehsaas hain..daad-o-mubaarakbaad qubool kijiye!


shukriya shara jee
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«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2012, 10:39:02 AM »
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Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on December 12, 2012, 06:38:11 AM
No Word For This Cration...
superb
mind blowing
awesome
Lovely
just excellent Cration Didi Ji...Aur Aaj Ka Rau Bhi Didi Ji Ka


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thnx kaushal and rau ke liye thnx once more
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2012, 10:39:35 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on December 12, 2012, 06:39:17 AM
WAH WAH AQSH JI KYA KAMAAL KA LIKHA HAI,,HAR ASHAAR MEIN EK EK EHSAAS HAI LAGATA HAI,,, Applause Applause Applause
thank you so much sahal jee
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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2012, 12:39:16 PM »
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superb excellent keep it up
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«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2012, 02:16:34 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 12, 2012, 12:39:16 PM
superb excellent keep it up
thnx saini sir
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«Reply #11 on: December 12, 2012, 02:23:29 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: December 12, 2012, 02:49:28 PM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on December 12, 2012, 02:23:29 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thnx anmol jee
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«Reply #13 on: December 12, 2012, 02:58:17 PM »
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Bahut khoob aqsh jee, bahut achhi lagi ye ghazal.
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«Reply #14 on: December 12, 2012, 03:28:53 PM »
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SuperB creation. Aaj ki gazal bahut mast hai. Aaj aapne wakai bahut achchaa likhaa hai. Mubaarakbaad kabool karo boss with ++1
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