Tum naheen ho to hamaaraa yahaan honaa kaisaa?

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Chashm bey-aab hain! Aansoo naheen!! Ronaa kaisaa?
Tum naheen ho to hamaaraa yahaan honaa kaisaa?

Rahaa hoon saath tumhaarey gaye zamaanoun sey;
Tifl hoon, haath anaasir kaa khilounaa kaisaa?

Zindagee beetatii rahee, kabhi judaa na rahey;
Ye judaa aastaan-e-khaak pai sonaa kaisaa?

Tund baad-e-samoom, baad-e-bahaaroun-see lagee;
Saath thaa, saath they, ab alhadah konaa kaisaa?

Ham ney har lamhey saath reig key toofaan jheyley;
Dour-e-baaraan hai sarey farsh bichhonaa kaisaa?

Jo hamaaraa hai, tumhaaraa bhi wahee hai, mahboob!
Ham eik jism hain: kyaa aamdah, khonaa kaisaa?

Azal sey ham rahey hain ham-aagosh ham-suhbat;
Gair kee paalkee, pardeysh kaa gonaa kaisaa?

‘Abd’, yeh zindagee hai, bojh naheen hai koyee;
Dour-e-parwaaz rooh-e-baad kaa dhhonaa kaisaa?

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«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2009, 03:08:05 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoobsoorat bahoot umda abd ji...
behtreen.... Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 20, 2009, 04:38:55 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2009, 04:59:35 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd Saheb ji.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2009, 05:18:34 PM »
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WAH BUNDELI JI, WAH... VERY VERY NICE

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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2009, 10:44:21 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2009, 02:25:52 AM »
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very beautiful abdji.....

tum nahin ho to hamaaraa yahan honaa kaisa,
bin tere zindagi,jeena kaisa.
jo hamaaraa hain,wo tumaaraa bhi to maalik hai,
ham ek hi to hai,kya paaya hai,phir khonaa kaisa.
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2009, 02:29:00 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 21, 2009, 02:25:52 AM
very beautiful abdji.....

tum nahin ho to hamaaraa yahan honaa kaisa,
bin tere zindagi,jeena kaisa.
jo hamaaraa hain,wo tumaaraa bhi to maalik hai,
ham ek hi to hai,kya paaya hai,phir khonaa kaisa.
Nice one Cara
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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2009, 02:32:45 AM »
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Chashm bey-aab hain! Aansoo naheen!! Ronaa kaisaa?
Tum naheen ho to hamaaraa yahaan honaa kaisaa?

Rahaa hoon saath tumhaarey gaye zamaanoun sey;
Tifl hoon, haath anaasir kaa khilounaa kaisaa?

Zindagee beetatii rahee, kabhi judaa na rahey;
Ye judaa aastaan-e-khaak pai sonaa kaisaa?

Tund baad-e-samoom, baad-e-bahaaroun-see lagee;
Saath thaa, saath they, ab alhadah konaa kaisaa?

Ham ney har lamhey saath reig key toofaan jheyley;
Dour-e-baaraan hai sarey farsh bichhonaa kaisaa?

Jo hamaaraa hai, tumhaaraa bhi wahee hai, mahboob!
Ham eik jism hain: kyaa aamdah, khonaa kaisaa?

Azal sey ham rahey hain ham-aagosh ham-suhbat;
Gair kee paalkee, pardeysh kaa gonaa kaisaa?

‘Abd’, yeh zindagee hai, bojh naheen hai koyee;
Dour-e-parwaaz rooh-e-baad kaa dhhonaa kaisaa?

                                    - abd bundeli

Bahut umda likha hai aapne ABD ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2009, 05:20:29 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 20, 2009, 03:04:53 PM
Chashm bey-aab hain! Aansoo naheen!! Ronaa kaisaa?
Tum naheen ho to hamaaraa yahaan honaa kaisaa?

Rahaa hoon saath tumhaarey gaye zamaanoun sey;
Tifl hoon, haath anaasir kaa khilounaa kaisaa?

Zindagee beetatii rahee, kabhi judaa na rahey;
Ye judaa aastaan-e-khaak pai sonaa kaisaa?

Tund baad-e-samoom, baad-e-bahaaroun-see lagee;
Saath thaa, saath they, ab alhadah konaa kaisaa?

Ham ney har lamhey saath reig key toofaan jheyley;
Dour-e-baaraan hai sarey farsh bichhonaa kaisaa?

Jo hamaaraa hai, tumhaaraa bhi wahee hai, mahboob!
Ham eik jism hain: kyaa aamdah, khonaa kaisaa?

Azal sey ham rahey hain ham-aagosh ham-suhbat;
Gair kee paalkee, pardeysh kaa gonaa kaisaa?

‘Abd’, yeh zindagee hai, bojh naheen hai koyee;
Dour-e-parwaaz rooh-e-baad kaa dhhonaa kaisaa?

                                    - abd bundeli


Abd Ji ,


Bahut hii Khoobsurat Nazam hai!

 Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #10 on: January 21, 2009, 09:16:22 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 20, 2009, 03:08:05 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoobsoorat bahoot umda abd ji...
behtreen.... Applause Applause
Thanks you a lot, bekarar ji!
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Quote from: Pooja on January 20, 2009, 04:38:55 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob Abd ji
Thanks Pooja ji! I'm happy you liked it!
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Quote from: khwaish on January 20, 2009, 04:59:35 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd Saheb ji.. Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 20, 2009, 05:18:34 PM
WAH BUNDELI JI, WAH... VERY VERY NICE
JASBIR SINGH
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
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Bahut umda likha hai aapne ABD ji  Applause Applause

Quote from: Deepati on January 21, 2009, 05:20:29 AM
Abd Ji ,
Bahut hii Khoobsurat Nazam hai!
 Applause Applause Applause

Deepati
Aap sabhi 'mahaanubhaawoun' ko meyrey 'saadar dhanyawaad!
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«Reply #13 on: January 21, 2009, 09:34:32 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 21, 2009, 02:25:52 AM
very beautiful abdji.....
tum nahin ho to hamaaraa yahan honaa kaisa,
bin tere zindagi,jeena kaisa.
jo hamaaraa hain,wo tumaaraa bhi to maalik hai,
ham ek hi to hai,kya paaya hai,phir khonaa kaisa.
Dhanyawaad, cara ji!
Woh yadi khoyegaa nahin, paayengey kyaa log?
Hongey asafal kaarya sab; wyarth sakal udyog!

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«Reply #14 on: January 21, 2009, 09:52:16 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 20, 2009, 03:04:53 PM
Chashm bey-aab hain! Aansoo naheen!! Ronaa kaisaa?
Tum naheen ho to hamaaraa yahaan honaa kaisaa?

Rahaa hoon saath tumhaarey gaye zamaanoun sey;
Tifl hoon, haath anaasir kaa khilounaa kaisaa?

Zindagee beetatii rahee, kabhi judaa na rahey;
Ye judaa aastaan-e-khaak pai sonaa kaisaa?

Tund baad-e-samoom, baad-e-bahaaroun-see lagee;
Saath thaa, saath they, ab alhadah konaa kaisaa?

Ham ney har lamhey saath reig key toofaan jheyley;
Dour-e-baaraan hai sarey farsh bichhonaa kaisaa?

Jo hamaaraa hai, tumhaaraa bhi wahee hai, mahboob!
Ham eik jism hain: kyaa aamdah, khonaa kaisaa?

Azal sey ham rahey hain ham-aagosh ham-suhbat;
Gair kee paalkee, pardeysh kaa gonaa kaisaa?

‘Abd’, yeh zindagee hai, bojh naheen hai koyee;
Dour-e-parwaaz rooh-e-baad kaa dhhonaa kaisaa?

                                    - abd bundeli


Wah Wah Kya kahene apki ghazaloon ke har lafz miyari aur har sher wazandar allah apke kalamoo ko izzath bakshe abd ji !!

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