Tum Se Too, Kahne Lage...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' / तुम से तू, कहने लगे...सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

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आप से तुम, तुम से तू , कहने लगे
छू के मुझको, मुझको छू, कहने लगे

पहले अपनी जान कहते थे मुझे
अब वो जाने-आरज़ू कहने लगे

दिल से दिल जब मिल गए, सब मिल गया
हो गए हम सुर्ख़रू कहने लगे

है हमे तुमसे मुहब्बत, वो भी अब
हाथ उठाकर क़िबला-रू कहने लगे

इश्क़ में ये दिल की महवीयत 'रक़ीब'
ख़ामुशी को गुफ़्तगू कहने लगे

                 --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

aap se tum, tum se too, kahne lage
chhoo ke mujhko, mujhko chhoo, kahne lage

pahle apni jaan kahte the mujhe
ab wo jaane-aarzoo kahne lage

dil se dil jab mil gaye, sab mil gaya
ho gaye hum surkhroo, kahne lage

hai hameN tumse mohabbat, woH bhi ab
haath uthakar qiblaa-roo, kahne lage

ishq meN ye dil kee mahveeyat 'Raqeeb'
khamushee ko guftgoo, kahne lage

                --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2011, 12:04:27 PM »
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Aadaab Satish Sir
Kya Matla pesh kiya hai, hajaaro daad haajir hai.
Har aashar kayaamat dha raha hai..
Der se hi sahi lekin ek khoobsurat peshkash.. apke chahne vaale kab se iska intejar kar rahe the..
DAAD DAAD DAAD D................................................ D
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2011, 12:11:03 PM »
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Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping SmileyMASHA ALAAH BAHUT HI NAYAB PESHKASH HAI ...YUN HI BAZM KO ROSHAN RAKHIYE AUR LIKHTE RAHIYE /////KHUDA HAFIZ
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2011, 01:22:06 PM »
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Bazm mein 'Shukla' ghazal aise padho
Tum ko her ek Khush-guloo Kahne lage

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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2011, 01:27:06 PM »
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BEhtreen Gazal Satish Ji
Mubarak ho Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 30, 2011, 02:51:12 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 30, 2011, 11:38:36 AM
आप से तुम, तुम से तू , कहने लगे
छू के मुझको, मुझको छू, कहने लगे

पहले अपनी जान कहते थे मुझे
अब वो जाने-आरज़ू कहने लगे

दिल से दिल जब मिल गए, सब मिल गया
हो गए हम सुर्ख़रू कहने लगे

है हमे तुमसे मुहब्बत, वो भी अब
हाथ उठाकर क़िबला-रू कहने लगे

इश्क़ में ये दिल की महवीयत 'रक़ीब'
ख़ामुशी को गुफ़्तगू कहने लगे

                 --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

aap se tum, tum se too, kahne lage
chhoo ke mujhko, mujhko chhoo, kahne lage

pahle apni jaan kahte the mujhe
ab wo jaane-aarzoo kahne lage

dil se dil jab mil gaye, sab mil gaya
ho gaye hum surkhroo, kahne lage

hai hameN tumse mohabbat, woH bhi ab
haath uthakar qiblaa-roo, kahne lage

ishq meN ye dil kee mahveeyat 'Raqeeb'
khamushee ko guftgoo, kahne lage

                --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

wah wah--
mast ghazal lekar aaye janaab--
lag hi andaaz e bayan hai aapki

daad daad
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«Reply #6 on: November 30, 2011, 03:07:29 PM »
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Bahut khoob,Satish ji.Bahut pyaari ghazal hai.Khaas taur se matlay ki saadgi aur shokhi bahut jaanlewa hai.Daad kya doon ,bus yahi kahoonga -
 
          Padh ke teri yeh ghazal hum bhi tujhe
          Shaairi  ki  aabroo  kahne  lage
                                             - Hasan
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«Reply #7 on: November 30, 2011, 04:20:24 PM »
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"आप से तुम,  तुम से तू,  कहने लगे
 छू के मुझको, मुझको छू, कहने लगे"
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"है हमे तुमसे मुहब्बत,  वो भी अब
 हाथ उठाकर क़िबला-रू कहने लगे"
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

बहुत खूब, प्रिय सतीश जी | पहला शेर' वाक़ई दिल को छू लेने वाला है |
ढेरों शुभकामनायें |
-अरुण मिश्र. 

                 
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«Reply #8 on: November 30, 2011, 08:07:42 PM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab kia kahne aapke ahsaas O khayaal ke... waah jee waah
behad khub aur massom se andaaz e bayaaN meiN behad nazuk
se ashaar kahe haiN aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab.. puri gazal kabil e daad
hai.. Usual Smile

Shuruaati do ashaar padhkar aik sher zaheN meiN guNja so aapki
nazar kar raheN hai.. Usual Smile


Jab dekh ke chupte the ab dekhte haiN chupke
WoH daur e ladkpan tha, yeH daur e jawaani hai

Masha Allaah aapne aise hi nazuk se khayaaloN ki nazuki
barkaraar rakhi kalaam meiN behad achcha laga.. Usual Smile

Phir se aik baar daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
   


Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 30, 2011, 11:38:36 AM


aap se tum, tum se too, kahne lage
chhoo ke mujhko, mujhko chhoo, kahne lage

pahle apni jaan kahte the mujhe
ab wo jaane-aarzoo kahne lage

dil se dil jab mil gaye, sab mil gaya
ho gaye hum surkhroo, kahne lage

hai hameN tumse mohabbat, woH bhi ab
haath uthakar qiblaa-roo, kahne lage

ishq meN ye dil kee mahveeyat 'Raqeeb'
khamushee ko guftgoo, kahne lage

                --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #9 on: December 01, 2011, 03:44:26 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause :clap:satish ji vaise to har sher laajwaab hai.par matle ke chubulepan ne hamaaree jaan lelee. bahut shaandaar, beshqeemtee ashaar.mubaarakbaad.
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«Reply #10 on: December 02, 2011, 04:59:41 AM »
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mkv ji,

Jawab dene aur ghazal pasand
karne ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #11 on: December 02, 2011, 12:08:41 PM »
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Sunil Ji,

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut
shukriya janaab.

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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2011, 04:20:01 AM »
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Janab Sadiq Rizvi Sahab,

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

Aapne jo she'r men kaha hai
us par amal kee koshish karoonga
aage bhi isee tarah rahnumaaee
ka khwahishmand hoon.

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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2011, 06:59:58 AM »
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Sanjeev Ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur
Hausala aafzai ka bahut
bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2011, 08:47:33 AM »
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Sarfita Ji,

Bahut dino ke baad nazar-e-inaayat
huyee mere kalaam par..shukriya janab.

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