Tum Se Too, Kahne Lage...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' / तुम से तू, कहने लगे...सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

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«Reply #15 on: December 04, 2011, 04:53:41 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya. Aapne pyara sa ek she'r
bhi kaha hai jawab men tahe dil se
shukraguzaar hoon.

Aakhir Lucknowi andaz bhi to barqaraar
rakhna hai hamen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

 
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«Reply #16 on: December 04, 2011, 07:24:08 AM »
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Respected Arun Mishra Ji,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya. Aage sneh banaaye rakhen.

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«Reply #17 on: December 04, 2011, 12:38:39 PM »
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ParwaaZ Ji,

Aadaab,

Hausala aafzai ka shukriya.

Ek khoobsoorat she'r share karne ke
liye aabhaar.

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«Reply #18 on: December 05, 2011, 04:40:50 AM »
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sksaini4 ji,

Saini Sahab jawab dene aur hausala
aafzai ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Aap jaise logon ke aashirvaad swaroop
comments padkar aur achchha kahne ko
jee karta hai.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #19 on: February 04, 2012, 04:53:52 PM »
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Wah shukla ji nice creation.
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«Reply #20 on: February 04, 2012, 05:56:30 PM »
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m speechless..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: February 05, 2012, 07:19:17 AM »
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Riyaz Sahab,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut
bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #22 on: February 05, 2012, 02:49:20 PM »
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Nikhaar Ji,

Jawab dene aur hausala aafzai
ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #23 on: March 27, 2012, 10:31:52 AM »
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आप से तुम, तुम से तू , कहने लगे
छू के मुझको, मुझको छू, कहने लगे
kya khoob kahne lage..........!
पहले अपनी जान कहते थे मुझे
अब वो जाने-आरज़ू कहने लगे
laqab badal badal kar jaane kya kya kahne lage Applause Applause Applause
दिल से दिल जब मिल गए, सब मिल गया
हो गए हम सुर्ख़रू कहने लगे
good.......!
है हमे तुमसे मुहब्बत, वो भी अब
हाथ उठाकर क़िबला-रू कहने लगे
akhir mehnat rang le aaye janaab ki icon_flower icon_flower
इश्क़ में ये दिल की महवीयत 'रक़ीब'
ख़ामुशी को गुफ़्तगू कहने लगे

 wah wah this is what ultimate result Laughing hard Laughing hard

                 --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

aap se tum, tum se too, kahne lage
chhoo ke mujhko, mujhko chhoo, kahne lage

pahle apni jaan kahte the mujhe
ab wo jaane-aarzoo kahne lage

dil se dil jab mil gaye, sab mil gaya
ho gaye hum surkhroo, kahne lage

hai hameN tumse mohabbat, woH bhi ab
haath uthakar qiblaa-roo, kahne lage

ishq meN ye dil kee mahveeyat 'Raqeeb'
khamushee ko guftgoo, kahne lage

                --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'




bahut khoob satish ji............!

  aap jaise shayero.n ne YOINDIA ko chaar chaand laga diya hai.
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«Reply #24 on: March 27, 2012, 10:36:23 AM »
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 Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #25 on: April 26, 2012, 07:05:24 AM »
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Sheba Ji,

Hausala afzai ka bahu bahut shukriya

Taakheer kr liye muaafee chaahoonga.

Raqeeb
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«Reply #26 on: May 03, 2012, 07:45:52 PM »
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Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley

Hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya....Amit Ji.....Raqeeb
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