TUMHAARI TARAF DAM-BA-DUM DEKHTE HAIN (Waquif Ansari)

by waquif ansari on September 24, 2009, 09:50:44 AM
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Na duniya na duniya ke gham dekhte haiN
Tumhaari taraf dam-ba-dam dekhte haiN

Kisi ko ziyaada na kam dekhte haiN
Jo jaisa hai waisa hi hum dekhte haiN

Kuchh aise bhi haiN daur-e-haazir ke insaaN
Jo duniya ko zere-qadam dekhte haiN

Halaakoo jise log kahte the kal tak
Use aajkal mohtaram dekhte haiN

Sadi ki shuruaat achchhi nahiN hai
Bahar-su qayaamat raqam dekhte haiN

Wo jis par koi jurm saabit nahiN hai
Usi shakhs ka sar qalam dekhte haiN

UnhiN ke usuloN pe chalna hai “Waquif”
BuzurgoN ke naqshe-qadam dekhte haiN
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2009, 09:56:19 AM »
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Subhan Allah Subhan Allah,.
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2009, 09:59:14 AM »
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My Dear Azeem Ji! Thank you for your valuable comments and heartiest Eid Greetings. I also reciprocate the same to all of you with a lot of nostalgia and love.
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«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2009, 10:11:19 AM »
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My Dear Azeem Ji! Thank you for your valuable comments and heartiest Eid Greetings. I also reciprocate the same to all of you with a lot of nostalgia and love.

Thank U,.

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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2009, 10:32:42 AM »
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Beautiful and very meaningful......Excellent work Waquif Sahab   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2009, 06:14:57 AM »
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Wah wah Ansari ji,really touching gazal ,mindblowing creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause :clap:bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2010, 04:24:46 AM »
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Waquif Sahab Ye Ghazal Sachhai se ru-b-ru karati hai Awesome!!
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2010, 09:19:42 AM »
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Subhan Allah Subhan Allah,.
Janab Azeem Saheb! Aapki hausla-afzaai ka behad shukriya.
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2010, 09:21:27 AM »
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Beautiful and very meaningful......Excellent work Waquif Sahab   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Dear Celmira Ji!Thank you for your praiseworthy words.
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2010, 09:22:12 AM »
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Wah wah Ansari ji,really touching gazal ,mindblowing creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause :clap:bahut khoob
Thank you very much madhuwesh ji. Shukriya.
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2010, 09:24:14 AM »
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Waquif Sahab Ye Ghazal Sachhai se ru-b-ru karati hai Awesome!!
Thank you very much for your valuable comments. Haalaat-e-haazira ki nazr ye ghazal hai. Aapne ise saraha, iska behat shukriya.
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2010, 09:35:46 AM »
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Na duniya na duniya ke gham dekhte haiN
Tumhaari taraf dam-ba-dam dekhte haiN

Kisi ko ziyaada na kam dekhte haiN
Jo jaisa hai waisa hi hum dekhte haiN

Kuchh aise bhi haiN daur-e-haazir ke insaaN
Jo duniya ko zere-qadam dekhte haiN

Halaakoo jise log kahte the kal tak
Use aajkal mohtaram dekhte haiN

Sadi ki shuruaat achchhi nahiN hai
Bahar-su qayaamat raqam dekhte haiN

Wo jis par koi jurm saabit nahiN hai
Usi shakhs ka sar qalam dekhte haiN

UnhiN ke usuloN pe chalna hai “Waquif”
BuzurgoN ke naqshe-qadam dekhte haiN

bahoooooot khoob janab.....dad kabool ho....
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2010, 07:36:35 PM »
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Na duniya na duniya ke gham dekhte haiN
Tumhaari taraf dam-ba-dam dekhte haiN

Kisi ko ziyaada na kam dekhte haiN
Jo jaisa hai waisa hi hum dekhte haiN

Kuchh aise bhi haiN daur-e-haazir ke insaaN
Jo duniya ko zere-qadam dekhte haiN

Halaakoo jise log kahte the kal tak
Use aajkal mohtaram dekhte haiN

Sadi ki shuruaat achchhi nahiN hai
Bahar-su qayaamat raqam dekhte haiN

Wo jis par koi jurm saabit nahiN hai
Usi shakhs ka sar qalam dekhte haiN

UnhiN ke usuloN pe chalna hai “Waquif”
BuzurgoN ke naqshe-qadam dekhte haiN

Janaab Waquif Ansari Sahab aapki ghazaleN meter mein nahin PARAMETER mein hoti hai iski tareef ke liye alfaaz mere pas to nahin hain bas yahi kahna chahunga ki ghazal define karne ke baad ise mishal ke taur per pesh kar dena chahiye. Aaj aapki ghazleN dekh dalunga, kuchh to seekh milegi..
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«Reply #13 on: February 09, 2010, 02:03:03 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: February 10, 2010, 04:50:36 PM »
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Hello Waquif ji,
Aapne bohot hi umda ghazal likhi hai....

I have written 2 shers.....

suna hai aangan, dar-o-deewar mein hai udaasi
hum apne ghar mein jaise ek maatam dekhte hai

aalam-e-taqreer main ghum ka fasana to nahin tha
dasht-e-tanhaai mein badla huwa mausam dekhte hai!
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