TUMHAARI TARAF DAM-BA-DUM DEKHTE HAIN (Waquif Ansari)

by waquif ansari on September 24, 2009, 09:50:44 AM
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Talat
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«Reply #15 on: February 11, 2010, 01:26:23 PM »
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Hello Waquif ji,
Aapne bohot hi umda ghazal likhi hai....

I have written 2 shers.....

suna hai aangan, dar-o-deewar mein hai udaasi
hum apne ghar mein jaise ek maatam dekhte hai

aalam-e-taqreer main ghum ka fasana to nahin tha
dasht-e-tanhaai mein badla huwa mausam dekhte hai!


Very nice Bharat
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malli
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«Reply #16 on: February 11, 2010, 01:38:32 PM »
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Na duniya na duniya ke gham dekhte haiN
Tumhaari taraf dam-ba-dam dekhte haiN

Kisi ko ziyaada na kam dekhte haiN
Jo jaisa hai waisa hi hum dekhte haiN

Kuchh aise bhi haiN daur-e-haazir ke insaaN
Jo duniya ko zere-qadam dekhte haiN

Halaakoo jise log kahte the kal tak
Use aajkal mohtaram dekhte haiN

Sadi ki shuruaat achchhi nahiN hai
Bahar-su qayaamat raqam dekhte haiN

Wo jis par koi jurm saabit nahiN hai
Usi shakhs ka sar qalam dekhte haiN

UnhiN ke usuloN pe chalna hai “Waquif”
BuzurgoN ke naqshe-qadam dekhte haiN

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wonderful Ansari Sb  Thumbs UP
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malli
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«Reply #17 on: February 11, 2010, 01:40:45 PM »
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Hello Waquif ji,
Aapne bohot hi umda ghazal likhi hai....

I have written 2 shers.....

suna hai aangan, dar-o-deewar mein hai udaasi
hum apne ghar mein jaise ek maatam dekhte hai

aalam-e-taqreer main ghum ka fasana to nahin tha
dasht-e-tanhaai mein badla huwa mausam dekhte hai!


Bahut acche Bharat ji  Thumbs UP
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Bharat
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«Reply #18 on: February 15, 2010, 06:21:35 PM »
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Talat,
Thanks for the appreciation.
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Bharat
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«Reply #19 on: February 15, 2010, 06:22:25 PM »
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Malli,
Sher pasand karne ke liye shukriya!
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waquif ansari
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«Reply #20 on: February 16, 2010, 02:37:25 PM »
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bahoooooot khoob janab.....dad kabool ho....
Bahut bahut shukriya Janab bekarar ji, isi tarah hauslaafzaai karte rahiye.
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«Reply #21 on: February 16, 2010, 02:39:15 PM »
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Janaab Waquif Ansari Sahab aapki ghazaleN meter mein nahin PARAMETER mein hoti hai iski tareef ke liye alfaaz mere pas to nahin hain bas yahi kahna chahunga ki ghazal define karne ke baad ise mishal ke taur per pesh kar dena chahiye. Aaj aapki ghazleN dekh dalunga, kuchh to seekh milegi..
janab drpandey ji. Aapki haseen khayalaat aur qadr-daani ka bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #22 on: February 16, 2010, 02:41:08 PM »
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Waqai Mein Ek Behtareen Ghazal Hai Waqiuf Bhai
Bahut Kuch Sikh Deti Hai...
Sach Men Hum Tareef Ke Kabil Nahi Hain

Khair

Khush Rahiye Janab....

~Shihab~


Shihab ji! Aapki qadr-daani ka bahut bahut shukriya. Isi tarah hausla-afzaai farmaate rahiye.
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«Reply #23 on: February 16, 2010, 02:42:57 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Dear Khwaish ji! Aapne meri ghazal ko saraha, iske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya. Isi tarah hausla-afzaayee karte rahiye.
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«Reply #24 on: February 16, 2010, 02:47:06 PM »
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Hello Waquif ji,
Aapne bohot hi umda ghazal likhi hai....

I have written 2 shers.....

suna hai aangan, dar-o-deewar mein hai udaasi
hum apne ghar mein jaise ek maatam dekhte hai

aalam-e-taqreer main ghum ka fasana to nahin tha
dasht-e-tanhaai mein badla huwa mausam dekhte hai!

Dear Bharat Ji! Aapki haseen alfaazoN ka bahut bahut shukriya aur sath hi do ashaar ka bhi shukriya ada karna chahta hooN.
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«Reply #25 on: February 16, 2010, 02:50:59 PM »
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Wonderful Ansari Sb  Thumbs UP
Malli ji! Aapki daad-o-tahseen ka bahut bahut shukriya.
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Bharat
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«Reply #26 on: February 18, 2010, 06:38:03 PM »
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Dear Bharat Ji! Aapki haseen alfaazoN ka bahut bahut shukriya aur sath hi do ashaar ka bhi shukriya ada karna chahta hooN.

Waquif ji,
Sher pasand karne ke liye shukriya...
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #27 on: March 03, 2010, 09:34:00 AM »
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Bahut khoob Ansari Saheb bahut khoob
SARVESH RASTOGI
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