Tumhe hum kho nahi sakte.............................................Aqsh

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बहोत खूब
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«Reply #17 on: March 11, 2013, 06:41:47 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Suman ji.....!!!

Quote from: suman59 on March 11, 2013, 03:50:08 PM
wah aapne bahut acha likha hai
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Woow bahut khoob Aqsh ji .dardse bhari khoobsurat peshkash ,Kapil ji aapne bhi khoob saath diya.superb. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: March 11, 2013, 07:21:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Madhu ji.....!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 11, 2013, 07:18:12 PM
Woow bahut khoob Aqsh ji .dardse bhari khoobsurat peshkash ,Kapil ji aapne bhi khoob saath diya.superb. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: March 11, 2013, 07:48:03 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on March 11, 2013, 01:29:51 PM
Samunder si haiN yeh aankheN, magar hum ro nahiN sakte
Saje hai jo meri palkhon pe, moti kho nahiN sakte

Bata kyun yaad teri, raat din pal pal satati hai
Diya hai dard tune yun, ki ab hum so nahiN sakte

Bhale kitna hi chahooN maiN, sitaare todh laaooN maiN
Magar dil jaanta hai tum, hamare ho nahiN sakte

Chupaana bhi nahiN aata, dikhaana bhi nahin aata
Lage hai daag dil par jo, unheiN hum dho nahiN sakte

Bhula de jeete ji tumko, nahiN yeh hai nahiN mumkin
Zaroorat zindagi ki ho, tumhe hum kho nahiN sakte



Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Aqshji..

So Sweet & Simple...

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«Reply #22 on: March 11, 2013, 08:57:06 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on March 11, 2013, 01:29:51 PM
Samunder si haiN yeh aankheN, magar hum ro nahiN sakte
Saje hai jo meri palkhon pe, moti kho nahiN sakte

Bata kyun yaad teri, raat din pal pal satati hai
Diya hai dard tune yun, ki ab hum so nahiN sakte

Bhale kitna hi chahooN maiN, sitaare todh laaooN maiN
Magar dil jaanta hai tum, hamare ho nahiN sakte

Chupaana bhi nahiN aata, dikhaana bhi nahin aata
Lage hai daag dil par jo, unheiN hum dho nahiN sakte

Bhula de jeete ji tumko, nahiN yeh hai nahiN mumkin
Zaroorat zindagi ki ho, tumhe hum kho nahiN sakte


Bahut Khub Aqsh Ji ... Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

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«Reply #23 on: March 11, 2013, 09:14:41 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 11, 2013, 02:42:17 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah wah kyaa kehne Aqsh ji... bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne...!!!


aankhon se motiyon ko yun naa lutaao tum
ek baar bas mere liye zaraa muskuraao tum

tum mere the, mere ho, mere hi rahoge tum
dilki apni baat koi mujhse naa chhipaao tum

gawaah mohabbat ke yeh jalte chiraag hain
yun apne aansuon se naa in ko bujhaao tum

palbhar ki doori hai, fir apnaa saath hai
lamhaa lamhaa yun humse duur naa jaao tum

meraa intzaar karo, mujh pe aetbaar karo
meri zindagi ho, zaraa mere paas aao tum

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waah waah waah kya khoob likha hai aapne hriday ji. sach mein padhkar bahut achcha laga. aapki hazir jawabi ka sahi main koi jawab nahi. behad khoob behad umda.bahut bahut shukriya is khoobsurat jawab ka.

Padhkar tumhari ghazal dil ko behlaane lage hai hum
Ek tumhari khaatir dekho phir muskuraane lage hai hum

Jalte hue chiraagon ko apni mohabbat se roshan kar ke
Tumhare dil mein apna aashiyaana banaane lage hai hum
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«Reply #24 on: March 11, 2013, 09:20:28 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on March 11, 2013, 01:29:51 PM
Samunder si haiN yeh aankheN, magar hum ro nahiN sakte
Saje hai jo meri palkhon pe, moti kho nahiN sakte
wah wah bahut khoob.........!
Bata kyun yaad teri, raat din pal pal satati hai
Diya hai dard tune yun, ki ab hum so nahiN sakte
nice.......!
Bhale kitna hi chahooN maiN, sitaare todh laaooN maiN
Magar dil jaanta hai tum, hamare ho nahiN sakte
kyon aisa kyon sochti ho. zaroor hoga agar dil se chhah hai to icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Chupaana bhi nahiN aata, dikhaana bhi nahin aata
Lage hai daag dil par jo, unheiN hum dho nahiN sakte
good..........!
Bhula de jeete ji tumko, nahiN yeh hai nahiN mumkin
Zaroorat zindagi ki ho, tumhe hum kho nahiN sakte
bahut khoob........!
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«Reply #25 on: March 11, 2013, 09:28:07 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 11, 2013, 02:47:54 PM
Applause
thank you hasan ji
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«Reply #26 on: March 11, 2013, 09:28:30 PM »
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Quote from: poonamA on March 11, 2013, 03:19:14 PM
bahot sunder aqsh
thnx poonama ji
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«Reply #27 on: March 11, 2013, 09:31:59 PM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on March 11, 2013, 03:45:37 PM
Very Nice!!

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thnx shireen ji so much
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«Reply #28 on: March 11, 2013, 09:32:32 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on March 11, 2013, 03:48:02 PM
Wah kya baat hai bahut bahut khoob.
thank you sooo much suman ji
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Quote from: hemantparakh on March 11, 2013, 04:06:15 PM
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thnx hemant ji
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