Tumhe hum kho nahi sakte.............................................Aqsh

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«Reply #30 on: March 11, 2013, 09:34:09 PM »
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Woow bahut khoob Aqsh ji .dardse bhari khoobsurat peshkash ,Kapil ji aapne bhi khoob saath diya.superb. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thank you sooooooo much madhuwesh ji
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«Reply #31 on: March 11, 2013, 09:34:34 PM »
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niceeeeee
thnx ravindera ji
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«Reply #32 on: March 11, 2013, 09:35:08 PM »
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wah wah
thnx nandji
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«Reply #33 on: March 11, 2013, 09:35:38 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Aqshji..

So Sweet & Simple...

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thank you soooooooooo much khwaish ji.
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«Reply #34 on: March 11, 2013, 09:36:13 PM »
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Bahut Khub Aqsh Ji ... Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab
thnx shihab ji
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«Reply #35 on: March 11, 2013, 09:37:36 PM »
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thnx sheba ji so much.
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«Reply #36 on: March 11, 2013, 09:59:31 PM »
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waah waah waah kya khoob likha hai aapne hriday ji. sach mein padhkar bahut achcha laga. aapki hazir jawabi ka sahi main koi jawab nahi. behad khoob behad umda.bahut bahut shukriya is khoobsurat jawab ka.

Padhkar tumhari ghazal dil ko behlaane lage hai hum
Ek tumhari khaatir dekho phir muskuraane lage hai hum

Jalte hue chiraagon ko apni mohabbat se roshan kar ke
Tumhare dil mein apna aashiyaana banaane lage hai hum



bahut khoob jawaab likha hai aapne.... and bahut bahut shukriyaa meraa likha pasand karne ke liye......!!!

kabhi tum sach lagte ho, kabhi koi haseen khwaab lagte ho
kabhi dard ke kaaran, to kabhi tum khilte gulaab lagte ho

ab bhi samajh nahi paayaa main thik se ki tum kyaa cheez ho
kabhi meri zarurat, to kabhi cheez tum koi kharaab lagte ho...
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«Reply #37 on: March 21, 2013, 02:13:38 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!Excellent Aqsh jee, bahut bahut khoob. Matla shaandaar kaha hai, sabhi ash'aar achhe haiN. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN meri taraf se.
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«Reply #38 on: March 22, 2013, 02:31:48 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!Excellent Aqsh jee, bahut bahut khoob. Matla shaandaar kaha hai, sabhi ash'aar achhe haiN. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN meri taraf se.
aapka bahut bahut bahut shukriya iftakhar ji rau aur housla afzai ke liye.
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«Reply #39 on: March 22, 2013, 02:40:09 PM »
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bohut khub aqsh ji waaah bohut umda
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«Reply #40 on: March 22, 2013, 02:42:15 PM »
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bohut khub aqsh ji waaah bohut umda
thank you sooooooo much sahill ji
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