tumko haq hai........

Tumko haq hai k tum malaal karo
apni hasti ka kuch khayaal kara..

( mahutrama sana sahibah ...aapke israr per hazir hun ...matla khoob hai ..taham maine jo mahsos kia wo likh raha hun ...matle ke dono hi misre  kisi se mukhatib ho kar kahe gaye hain ..jo ke achi baat hai ..taham dono hi misre wazahat talab hain ...pahle misre me lafz malal nakra hai ...amoman kisi shai ke khone ya kissi se haarne yaa kissi haadse ka malal kia jaata hai ...doosre misre me lafz e hasti ka khayal istemaal karke lafz e  malal ki jo shiddat bayan karne ki koshish ki gaaee hai wo laaiq e sitaaish to  hai magar qa"ari pe wazeh nahi ...matle yun bhi ho sakta hai ..

Haadson ka na yun malaal karo
gar hai himmat to khuch kamal karo

isme koi shak nahi ke meri tajweez har aib se paak ho ...aur aapka muttafiq hona bhi zarori nahi

kuch to mujh par bhi rahm dikhlao,
yun na nazron se tum halaal karo..


rahm dikhalaya nahi jaata kiya jaata hai ....sher yun bhi ho sakta hai ..

rahm hum per bhi ho kabhi jaana
sirf nazron se mat halaal karo

phir bhi lafz halaal khaliq ko munh chira raha hai ...phir qafiya  bhi ek majboori hai ..aap dekh len ..

jantey ho sabhi jawab jo tum ,
ban ke anjaan mat sawaal karo..

Pahla misra agar mai kahta to yun kahta zaroori nahi ke sahi ho

Tum ko maloom hain jawab sabhi
ban ke anjaan mat sawal karo

mujhpe to jurm sabhi aayed hain.
tum jo chahey karo kamaal karo..

ye sher meri samajh nahi aaya ...isme koi do rah nahi ke meri kam ilmi hai ...

hamko milta hai ye jawab  'sana'
chup bhi ho jaao !! Mat sawaal karo..

matla agarche acha hai ..taham isko doobara soonchne me koi harj nahi ...


daad behad o hisab aapki is shandaar ghazal ke huzoor ...

dua go

qadeertoopchi

waaaah waaaah behad umda

Shukriya !!!!