Tuney kya cheez banaaya hain, insaan banaanewale

by livingbytheday on June 27, 2012, 02:08:00 PM
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Pal mein ho jate hain apne, paraaye, zamaane wale
Tuney kya cheez banaaya hain, insaan banaanewale

Tera kya hain tu lout ke nahi aaye shaayad
Mujhko azad hi karta ja apna banaanewale

Jub bhi uth tey hain, toofan utha dete hain
zakhm mit nahin paate hain puraanewale

Khaali raahon mein nigaahein dhundhti hain kise
Loutkar atey kahaan, ek raat bitaanewale

Koun kehta hain ki dard ki awaaj nahi hoti
Uth ta hai dard toh daba dete hain dabaanewale

Baasi sapney hain takiye pe masal jaatey hain
Hum nahi khawab neendo mein sajaanewale

Imtehaan leta hain khuda bhi saachey bando ka
Aksar chuuk  jaatey hain teer nishaanewaale

Unse umeed na rakh, jinke liye jalaa hain “Deepak”
Bujhtey hi chodkar chal denge jalaanewale
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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2012, 02:12:26 PM »
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bahut behatreen peshkash deepak dili daad qubool farmaaye baut bahut mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2012, 04:14:35 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
BAHUT KHUBSURAT KALAAM HAI , DEEPAK JI.
BAHUT BAHUT BADHAAI LEIN. 1 RAU BHI.
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2012, 04:15:02 PM »
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simply great..! taarif ke liye shabd kam padh gaye  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2012, 04:26:19 PM »
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Behtareen Deepak bhai, bahut hi khoob. Maza aa gaya padh kar.
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«Reply #5 on: June 27, 2012, 05:15:46 PM »
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salute u deepak ji.............bahut umda bahut hi lajawab kalaam........ dhero daad aur mubarakbaad........ Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2012, 03:34:37 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 27, 2012, 02:12:26 PM
bahut behatreen peshkash deepak dili daad qubool farmaaye baut bahut mubaarakbaad

thank you sir for your kind words
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2012, 03:35:34 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 27, 2012, 04:14:35 PM
Applause Applause Applause
BAHUT KHUBSURAT KALAAM HAI , DEEPAK JI.
BAHUT BAHUT BADHAAI LEIN. 1 RAU BHI.

sir, izzat aur housla dene ke liyeh bahut shukriyaa
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2012, 03:36:29 AM »
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Quote from: jazbaat on June 27, 2012, 04:15:02 PM
simply great..! taarif ke liye shabd kam padh gaye  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause

aapne itna keh diya, bahut shukriyaa
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2012, 03:37:19 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on June 27, 2012, 04:26:19 PM
Behtareen Deepak bhai, bahut hi khoob. Maza aa gaya padh kar.

iftakhar bhai bahut bahut shukriyaa
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2012, 03:38:52 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 27, 2012, 05:15:46 PM
salute u deepak ji.............bahut umda bahut hi lajawab kalaam........ dhero daad aur mubarakbaad........ Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thank you for kind words soudagar ji, dil se shukriyaa
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2012, 06:52:37 PM »
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Somehow i missed it Deepak jee.
Shaandaar ghajal..Bahut khoob
kya kahne..Vaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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«Reply #12 on: July 06, 2012, 02:41:02 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 04, 2012, 06:52:37 PM
Somehow i missed it Deepak jee.
Shaandaar ghajal..Bahut khoob
kya kahne..Vaaaaaaaaaaaaaah


Sir, aap logo ki yeh inayat bahut encourage karti hain, accha likhe ke liye aur yahan aate rehne ke liye, i thank you for your kind words
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