~~"U Na Jafa Kijiye"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on January 19, 2010, 10:23:03 AM
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Kar ke shamil zindagi me, na juda kijiye,
Na kar paye wafa na sahi, u na jafa kijiye..

Apne hi tumhare bann baithe dushman to,
Aab kisse kijiye gila, kis-kis ko saja dijiye..

Manga na kabhi kuch aur uss khuda se,
Bass yahi kaha, jo de badua use meri dua dijiye,

Duniyadaari na seekhi, na aa paayi kabhi,
Mohabbat ke khariddaar hai, thodi adaa kijiye,

Hai agar gunaah mohabbat, aab ke dour me,
Maaf mat kijiye, maariye mujhko, jala dijiye,

Rakhoge dil me to bahut yaad aayenge,
Rakhiye jehan me shally, aur pal me bhula dijiye..

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2010, 10:29:05 AM »
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bahut hi badhiya likha hai shally

chahte ho hume dil se to kabhi bata di jiye
yu na akele rasm-e-muhabbat ada kijiye
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2010, 10:36:47 AM »
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Bahut hi achhi ghazal hai Shally ji. Bahut khoob, Shandaar.
Quote from: k.shael on January 19, 2010, 10:23:03 AM
Kar ke shamil zindagi me, na juda kijiye,
Na kar paye wafa na sahi, u na jafa kijiye..

Apne hi tumhare bann baithe dushman to,
Aab kisse kijiye gila, kis-kis ko saja dijiye..

Manga na kabhi kuch aur uss khuda se,
Bass yahi kaha, jo de badua use meri dua dijiye,

Duniyadaari na seekhi, na aa paayi kabhi,
Mohabbat ke khariddaar hai, thodi adaa kijiye,

Hai agar gunaah mohabbat, aab ke dour me,
Maaf mat kijiye, maariye mujhko, jala dijiye,

Rakhoge dil me to bahut yaad aayenge,
Rakhiye jehan me shally, aur pal me bhula dijiye..

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2010, 10:56:08 AM »
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Wah wah Shally ji and Samnoj ji very touching gazal.lovely creation.excellent Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2010, 11:19:34 AM »
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Wah Wah!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Shally

Har Ek Sher Lajawaab!!! Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2010, 06:16:03 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause     Excellent
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2010, 08:19:10 AM »
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Kehte Hai Ki Sirf Kehne Ko Hi Muhabbat Nahi kehte Hai..
Kuch Log Khamoshi Se Bhi Inteha Se Guzar Jate Hai!
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«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2010, 01:12:15 PM »
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Nice Creation Shally Ji And Nice Line Samnoj JI AND DD JI
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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2010, 06:43:43 AM »
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Shukriya !!
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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2010, 12:40:10 PM »
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Bahoot Hi Touching Gazal Likhi Shallyji
Dad Kabool Kijiye
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Nice Reply Kash ji & D_Dji
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2010, 10:06:15 AM »
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Waah Wah Bahut Khoob Likhi Hai Shally Jee
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2010, 06:57:04 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Shally... Bahut Hi Gaharaaye Ke sath Alfaazon Ko Piroya hai aapne Apni Gazal Me.. Behad Khubsoorat Gazal Hai Dear... Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #12 on: June 24, 2010, 10:27:15 AM »
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bahut ache kaash

ker ke shaamil zindaghi me juda ker diya
dil se dil mile bhi na the ki wida ker diya

zindaghi khushiyon ki amanat hoti thi kabhi
ab khafa hoker saans lena bhi saza ker diya

wafa ki khatir mer mitne ko tyaar the hum
bawafa ko bewafa kah ker ruswa ker diya
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«Reply #13 on: June 24, 2010, 10:31:35 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on January 19, 2010, 10:23:03 AM
Kar ke shamil zindagi me, na juda kijiye,
Na kar paye wafa na sahi, u na jafa kijiye..

Apne hi tumhare bann baithe dushman to,
Aab kisse kijiye gila, kis-kis ko saja dijiye..

Manga na kabhi kuch aur uss khuda se,
Bass yahi kaha, jo de badua use meri dua dijiye,

Duniyadaari na seekhi, na aa paayi kabhi,
Mohabbat ke khariddaar hai, thodi adaa kijiye,

Hai agar gunaah mohabbat, aab ke dour me,
Maaf mat kijiye, maariye mujhko, jala dijiye,

Rakhoge dil me to bahut yaad aayenge,
Rakhiye jehan me shally, aur pal me bhula dijiye..

Shally.
Good one Shally Ji
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«Reply #14 on: June 24, 2010, 10:33:01 AM »
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Quote from: samnoj on June 24, 2010, 10:27:15 AM
bahut ache kaash

ker ke shaamil zindaghi me juda ker diya
dil se dil mile bhi na the ki wida ker diya

zindaghi khushiyon ki amanat hoti thi kabhi
ab khafa hoker saans lena bhi saza ker diya

wafa ki khatir mer mitne ko tyaar the hum
bawafa ko bewafa kah ker ruswa ker diya

Nice one Sam Ji
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