Udaas raat nigaahon mein teher gayi jaise

by livingbytheday on May 07, 2012, 02:03:00 PM
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Udaas raat nigaahon mein teher gayi jaise
Zindagi bin jiye gujar gayi jaise

Sab kuch tabaah hokar bikhra hain ird gird
Dariyaa koi aabaadi mein utar gayi jaise

Chuudiyaan pehni ki nahi todni padi
Kaam kisi ki badh_dua kar gayi jaise

Aankhon mein qaid reh gayi hasrat adhuree si
Jeene ke intezaar mein wo mar gayi jaise

Shabnam ke boondon jaisa iqraar unka “Deepak”
Qismat bas ek pal mein sawar gayi jaise

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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2012, 04:54:17 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2012, 07:25:54 PM »
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Aadaab Janab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... kafi khoob ahsaas O
khayaal kahe hai janab...Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile
HaaN daryaa word masculine hai so utar gayi meiN
nahi aayeNga ... ? zarra gaur kar lijiye.. Usual Smile


Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2012, 11:49:23 AM »
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waah waah

shukriyaa sir
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2012, 11:55:28 AM »
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Aadaab Janab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... kafi khoob ahsaas O
khayaal kahe hai janab...Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile
HaaN daryaa word masculine hai so utar gayi meiN
nahi aayeNga ... ? zarra gaur kar lijiye.. Usual Smile


Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



shukriyaa for the correction
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2012, 01:24:12 PM »
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Bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2012, 04:17:05 PM »
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Bahut khoob

thank you
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