UFF TERI YE ADAA....////................................////....IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on June 20, 2013, 07:44:38 AM
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«Reply #30 on: June 23, 2013, 02:56:36 PM »
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Iftekhar Sahab Salam Alaikum ,,

Ghazal ka sahi rang apki is ghazal me numaya'n hai ,, kya hi khumaar alod ghazal hai ...jiska eak eak sher apne khaleeq ki kamiyabi raqs kar raha hai aur qari se apni dad khud wasool kar raha hai ,, aisi nayab o nadir kalam per mai apko dad ki deghchi ke saat mubarakbad ka donga bhi pesh karta hun ...... zindabad ,,,,,

maqte ko dekh len ..bhr se kharij hai ... lafz Amn hai aman nahi ...ye FAAL ke wazn per 21 na ke FAOO ke wazn ( 12 ) aapne isko 12 banda hai jo ghalat hai .....ye meri rai hai aap kissi bhi mahir-e-fun se pooch sakte hain ....eak baar dad hazir hai aapki is shandaar ghazal ke huzoor ..

dua go
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«Reply #31 on: June 24, 2013, 09:26:14 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on June 20, 2013, 04:06:30 PM

Sahal saheb tah-e-dil se shukriya hausla afzaai ka.
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«Reply #32 on: June 24, 2013, 09:27:04 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on June 20, 2013, 05:58:35 PM
excellent,sir
Bahut bahut shukriya MB jee.
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«Reply #33 on: June 24, 2013, 09:28:03 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on June 20, 2013, 09:21:55 PM
angel11 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Laaiba jee, bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #34 on: June 24, 2013, 09:52:25 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 20, 2013, 10:39:23 PM
khubsurat ghazal kahi hai iftakhar sahib ,khas taur se matla aur maqta bahut achha hai.Mubarak baad.
Bahut bahut shukriya Hasan saheb hausla afzaai ka.
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«Reply #35 on: June 24, 2013, 09:53:47 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on June 21, 2013, 12:25:59 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause
Aadil saheb, bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #36 on: June 25, 2013, 02:36:08 AM »
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Quote from: zarraa on June 21, 2013, 12:43:47 AM
Wwwwaaaahhhhhhh .... laajawaab ...... Ghazab ki khoobsurati aur bala ki rawaanee hai apke qalaam mein ..... Apko dher saaree daad Iftakhar ji
Zarra jee, tah-e-dil se shukriya zarra nawaazi ka.
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«Reply #37 on: June 25, 2013, 02:36:55 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on June 21, 2013, 02:41:59 AM
ek rau bus.........!
Mohtarma, tah-e-dil se shukriya zarra nawaazi ka.
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«Reply #38 on: June 25, 2013, 03:41:14 AM »
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Quote from: @Kaash on June 21, 2013, 03:48:10 AM
waah! bahut khoob!
Shukriya janaab.
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«Reply #39 on: June 26, 2013, 09:09:53 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 21, 2013, 07:44:13 AM
Uffff  aapke  likhne  ka  andaaz ,outstanding Ahmed  ji .hats  off Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Mohtarma, tah-e-dil se shukriya zarra nawaazi ka.
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«Reply #40 on: June 27, 2013, 03:32:39 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on June 22, 2013, 01:32:06 AM
kasam se bahut dinoN baad koi gair muraddaf ghazal itni pasand aayi hai mujhe, saaheb ek rau to banta hai, par abhi hai nahiN to wait kijiye... waise qaafiye meN baaNkpan aur daf-atan ke istemaal ke liye bhi bas wah... ahcha laga aapki ye taazi ghazal padh kar saaheb... Usual Smile
Janaab, bahut bahut shukriya zarra nawaazi ka.
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«Reply #41 on: June 27, 2013, 03:44:27 AM »
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kuch smaj nhi aya,saf saf lines me likha kro
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«Reply #42 on: June 28, 2013, 02:29:23 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on June 22, 2013, 02:50:20 AM
Lab tere shabnami  mad bhare haiN nayan
Rukh tera chaaNd sa  sandaleeN hai badan

Gir rahi haiN  sanam  mujh  pe ab bijliyaaN
Uff  teri   ye   adaa    uff    tera  baaNkpan

Hai mujhe   sab   pata    aye   meri dilruba
Dil meiN haaN hai tere lab pe naa zaahiran     *Zaahiran: dikhaawe ka

Raat mehfil  meiN   kal   yuN  hua ittefaaq
Wo  mere    rubaroo    ho   gaye  daf-atan      *Daf-atan: achaanak se

Ishq  ye   paak   hai    ishq   be  daagh hai
Ayk hi  jaan  wo    haiN    bhale  do badan

Hai sanam   tere    aane    se  rangeeN fiza
Gul lage  jhoomne  khil   utha  hai chaman

Har sher bahut khoobsurat iftakhar bhai
dil khush ho gaya..

Mukesh bhai, tah-e-dil se shukriya hausla afzaai ka.
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«Reply #43 on: June 29, 2013, 12:15:38 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 23, 2013, 02:56:36 PM
Iftekhar Sahab Salam Alaikum ,,

Ghazal ka sahi rang apki is ghazal me numaya'n hai ,, kya hi khumaar alod ghazal hai ...jiska eak eak sher apne khaleeq ki kamiyabi raqs kar raha hai aur qari se apni dad khud wasool kar raha hai ,, aisi nayab o nadir kalam per mai apko dad ki deghchi ke saat mubarakbad ka donga bhi pesh karta hun ...... zindabad ,,,,,

maqte ko dekh len ..bhr se kharij hai ... lafz Amn hai aman nahi ...ye FAAL ke wazn per 21 na ke FAOO ke wazn ( 12 ) aapne isko 12 banda hai jo ghalat hai .....ye meri rai hai aap kissi bhi mahir-e-fun se pooch sakte hain ....eak baar dad hazir hai aapki is shandaar ghazal ke huzoor ..

dua go
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Qadeer saheb, bahut bahut shukriya zarra nawaazi ka.
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«Reply #44 on: June 29, 2013, 12:17:08 AM »
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Quote from: MinakshiGil on June 27, 2013, 03:44:27 AM
kuch smaj nhi aya,saf saf lines me likha kro
Mohtarma, yahaaN sabhi ko samajh aa gaya, bas aapki samajh meiN nahiN aaya, sorry I can't help, I don't find any thing to correct.
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