UJAALAA HO GAYAA ..................................SAINI

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Ishq   kaa  mausam  niraalaa  ho  gayaa.
Husn   kaa  jalvaa  dubaalaa  ho  gayaa.

Is   jafaaoN   se   bhare  sansaar  meN.
Ab   vafaaoN   kaa   uthaalaa  ho gayaa.

Ishq   kee   manzil  adhooree  rah  gai.
Pair  meN  naasoor  chhaalaa  ho  hayaa.

Husn   kaa   ghar  aashikoN  ke  vaaste.
Ishq   kee  ek  paathshaalaa  ho  gayaa.

Aabe-ishrat  pe maiN ab to kyaa likhooN.
Teree   aankhoN  pe  maqaalaa  ho gayaa.

Munh chhupaa kar sab andhereN chal diye.
Teree   aahat   se   ujaalaa  ho  gayaa.

Aaj  ‘saini’ ke  liye   teraa  ye  ishq.
Aabe-qausar   kaa   piyaalaa  ho  gayaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


इश्क़  का  मौसम  निराला हो गया ।
हुस्न  का  जल्वा  दुबाला  हो गया ॥

इस  जफ़ाओं  से  भरे  संसार  में ।
अब  वफाओं  का  उठाला  हो गया ॥

इश्क़  की  मंजिल  अधूरी  रह गई ।
पैर   में  नासूर  छाला  हो  गया ॥

हुस्न  का  घर  आशिकों  के वास्ते ।
इश्क़  की  इक  पाठशाला  हो गया ॥

आबे-इशरत पे मैं अब तो क्या लिखूं ।
तेरी  आँखों  पे  मक़ाला  हो  गया ॥

मुंह छुपा करसब अन्धेरें  चल दिए ।
तेरी   आहट  से  उजाला हो गया ॥

आज'सैनी'के  लिए  तेरा ये इश्क़ ।
आबे-क़ौसर  का  पियाला हो गया ॥

डाo सुरेन्द्र सैनी  



nice ,sir but few qafia are unusual- nowadays it has been a trend that poets are using slang in their compositions as qafia which in fact very easy to convey message to local people in this sequence -MR MUNAWAAR RANA are quite famous because of his such practicing making his ghazal very popular among common people
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Aabe-ishrat  pe maiN ab to kyaa likhooN.
Teree   aankhoN  pe  maqaalaa  ho gayaa.

Munh chhupaa kar sab andhereN chal diye.
Teree   aahat   se   ujaalaa  ho  gayaa.

Aaj  ‘saini’ ke  liye   teraa  ye  ishq.
Aabe-qausar   kaa   piyaalaa  ho  gayaa.

Bahut badhiya Sir..
aur teesra sher bhi..behatreen
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