Ulafat-E-Suroor ( Gazal )

by samarkasif on August 16, 2009, 06:26:51 PM
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Bahut aawaz humne di unko
Lekin fir kisi ne pukara nahi

Larajti hai aankhe milne ko unse
Par khidki se karta koi ishara nahi

Chale jaate hai ik baar duniya se jo
Fir laut kar wo aate dubara nahi

Fasi hai kashti bhanwar me is kadar
Ke dikhta kahin door tak kinara nahi

Milegi manzil hume bhi kabhi to "KASHIF"
ke gardish me hota hamesha sitara nahi.
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2009, 07:32:28 PM »
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Quote from: samarkasif on August 16, 2009, 06:26:51 PM
Bahut aawaz humne di unko
Lekin fir kisi ne pukara nahi

Larajti hai aankhe milne ko unse
Par khidki se karta koi ishara nahi

Chale jaate hai ik baar duniya se jo
Fir laut kar wo aate dubara nahi

Fasi hai kashti bhanwar me is kadar
Ke dikhta kahin door tak kinara nahi

Milegi manzil hume bhi kabhi to "KASHIF"
ke gardish me hota hamesha sitara nahi.
bahut achche kasif ji,purane andaj naye tewar ke sath likhe hain bahut umda,thora harfo ki adaygi mein kaam baaqui hai,jaise larjte hont hai aakhein lajati hain ya fir tarasti hain,
baharhaal ghazal ek metre ko follow kar rahi hai ,badi achchi baat hai,
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2009, 07:38:44 PM »
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Quote from: samarkasif on August 16, 2009, 06:26:51 PM
Bahut aawaz humne di unko
Lekin fir kisi ne pukara nahi

Larajti hai aankhe milne ko unse
Par khidki se karta koi ishara nahi

Chale jaate hai ik baar duniya se jo
Fir laut kar wo aate dubara nahi

Fasi hai kashti bhanwar me is kadar
Ke dikhta kahin door tak kinara nahi

Milegi manzil hume bhi kabhi to "KASHIF"
ke gardish me hota hamesha sitara nahi.


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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2009, 11:47:25 PM »
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wah wah kaya baat hai samarkasif ji...

magar apki yah gazal, Gazal section mai jayada chi rahegi... Yaha khumar-e-ishaq ki bajaye..

Moving this Gazal in Gazal section.
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