"ulajh rahe hain sambhal rhe hain"

by aaina on March 24, 2009, 10:34:23 AM
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ulajh rhe hain kabhi sambhal rhe hain
zindagi ke paicho khum nikl rhe hain

ye garmi e ehsaas e ishq hai daikho
wo shamma ke manind pighal rhe hain

abhi guftugoo kuch pardo mai hai
lafz behekne ko machal rhe hain

ye aaghaz mohabbat ke nakhre hai yaaro
wo behlaa rhe hain hum behel rhe hain

unhe ye naaz ke hum kalaam hain unse
hame ye khushi raqeeb jal rhe hain

agr wo kehne mai jijhak rhe hain aslam
to samjh lo ke sitaare badal rhe hain
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«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2009, 10:42:10 AM »
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wah wha kya khoob likha hai Aaina.
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«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2009, 10:46:10 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 24, 2009, 10:42:10 AM
wah wha kya khoob likha hai Aaina.

bhut bhut skukriya sophi ji......ke aapne pasnd ki...........is izzat afzaaii ka bhut bhut shukriya.
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«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2009, 11:06:02 AM »
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Excellent work, Aaina Ji !
Keep Writing.
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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2009, 12:10:29 PM »
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Quote from: karndhar on March 24, 2009, 11:06:02 AM
Excellent work, Aaina Ji !
Keep Writing.

shukriya karndhar ji.................
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«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2009, 08:22:11 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 24, 2009, 10:34:23 AM
ulajh rhe hain kabhi sambhal rhe hain
zindagi ke paicho khum nikl rhe hain

ye garmi e ehsaas e ishq hai daikho
wo shamma ke manind pighal rhe hain

abhi guftugoo kuch pardo mai hai
lafz behekne ko machal rhe hain

ye aaghaz mohabbat ke nakhre hai yaaro
wo behlaa rhe hain hum behel rhe hain

unhe ye naaz ke hum kalaam hain unse
hame ye khushi raqeeb jal rhe hain

agr wo kehne mai jijhak rhe hain aslam
to samjh lo ke sitaare badal rhe hain

Bohot hi khoobsurat likha hai....bohot achcha laga padh ke Aslam Ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2009, 08:34:17 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 24, 2009, 08:22:11 PM
Bohot hi khoobsurat likha hai....bohot achcha laga padh ke Aslam Ji

bhut bhut shukriya celmira ji............
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2009, 04:55:11 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Aslamji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2009, 10:38:26 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on June 02, 2009, 01:57:27 PM
bahot khoob likha hai aapne Aslam ji  Applause Applause

thnxx so much kaash
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Quote from: khwaish on June 02, 2009, 04:55:11 PM
Bahut Khoob Aslamji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bhut bhut skhukriya khwaish
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2009, 02:17:49 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne Aslam ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2009, 02:26:28 AM »
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Exilant aaina ji or bahut khoob aslam ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2009, 02:42:07 AM »
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LAJAWAB ALFAZ HAI AAPKE ASLAM JI
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2009, 07:44:52 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 13, 2009, 02:17:49 AM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Aslam ji.. Usual Smile

thnxxxxx so much roja
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2009, 07:46:21 AM »
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Quote from: Jiya33 on June 13, 2009, 02:26:28 AM
Exilant aaina ji or bahut khoob aslam ji

thnxxxxx jiya ji aaina aur aslam dono ki taaraf se aapka bhut bhut shukriya
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