uljhtee gayi zindagi suljhaane se mare,,,ghazal,,,,jeet jainam saini

by jeet jainam on October 02, 2015, 06:26:34 PM
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orr uljhtee gayi zindagi suljhane se mare,
dard bhadta gaya khud ko samjhane se mare,

main jaan hee nahi paya tha kabhee gam ko,
aaj ehsaas hua dil key toot jaane se mare,

bhool jaau,n usko dil main sorish hua tha,
faqt ye dil kaha,n maana behlaane se mare,

dard din ba din haavi hotaa raha mujh par,
aankhain royi nahi khudko tadpane se mare,

main koee nahee uska jaate huye kah gayee,
lout kar kaise aatee firr bulaane se mare,

bohat huye zulm o sitam usey koee to batao,
shayad taras aajaye zakhm dikhaane se mare,

kab tak dabaye  rakhte dil gamo,n koh jeet,
jazbaat zahir ho hee gaye chupaane se mare,




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«Reply #1 on: October 02, 2015, 10:31:40 PM »
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bahut bahut umdah waah, dheron daad w/ RAU.
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2015, 03:40:17 AM »
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Bahot khoobsurat + Rau.
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2015, 05:41:23 PM »
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bohat shukriya surinder sir ji daaaaaadddd or rau dil se qabool
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bohat shukriya pooja ji rau dil se qabool
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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2015, 09:36:49 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2015, 07:52:47 AM »
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Bohat shukriya prabha ji dil se daaadd qabool
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