UMR GUZRI HAI BUT - PARASTI MEIN ....................... HASAN

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Zindagi   jeena   tang - dasti   meiN
Hai  safar  sagaroN  ka  Kashti  meiN

Eik   chingaari  ka   tamaasha   thha
Lag  gai   Aag   saari   basti   meiN

Rukh  pe   Gesu   gira   liye   usnay
Chhup   gaya   Maahtab   Badli   meiN

Unko   dekha , Nazar  se   choom  liya
Aur  kya  karte   jaldi - jaldee  meiN

PhooloN - PhooloN  pe   Mandlaa'ee  thee
Aa   gaye   rang   saare   Titlee   meiN

Kal  thha  ZulfoN  meiN  ek  Gulaab  uski
Ek   Angoothhi    hai    aaj   Ungli  meiN

Chal  pade  haiN  'Hasan'  bhi  Soo - e - Haram
Umr   guzri   hai    But - parasti    meiN

( Note : Is Ghazal mein Qafia - bandi ke rawayati
sharayet ki pabandi naheeN  kee  gai hai )[/color}
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2014, 01:41:01 PM »
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Eik   chingaari  ka   tamaasha   thha
Lag  gai   Aag   saari   basti   meiN

Kal  thha  ZulfoN  meiN  ek  Gulaab  uski
Ek   Angoothhi    hai    aaj   Ungli  meiN

waah waah Hasan saahab lajawaab llikha hai apne
umda ghazal
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2014, 02:47:57 PM »
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Zindagi   jeena   tang - dasti   meiN
Hai  safar  sagaroN  ka  Kashti  meiN

Eik   chingaari  ka   tamaasha   thha
Lag  gai   Aag   saari   basti   meiN

Rukh  pe   Gesu   gira   liye   usnay
Chhup   gaya   Maahtab   Badli   meiN

Unko   dekha , Nazar  se   choom  liya
Aur  kya  karte   jaldi - jaldee  meiN

PhooloN - PhooloN  pe   Mandlaa'ee  thee
Aa   gaye   rang   saare   Titlee   meiN

Kal  thha  ZulfoN  meiN  ek  Gulaab  uski
Ek   Angoothhi    hai    aaj   Ungli  meiN

Chal  pade  haiN  'Hasan'  bhi  Soo - e - Haram
Umr   guzri   hai    But - parasti    meiN

bahut hee khoobsoorat ghazal zindabad
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2014, 04:26:21 PM »
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Bohat Khub!

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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2014, 04:29:31 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 22, 2014, 01:32:09 PM

Zindagi   jeena   tang - dasti   meiN
Hai  safar  sagaroN  ka  Kashti  meiN

Eik   chingaari  ka   tamaasha   thha
Lag  gai   Aag   saari   basti   meiN

Rukh  pe   Gesu   gira   liye   usnay
Chhup   gaya   Maahtab   Badli   meiN

Unko   dekha , Nazar  se   choom  liya
Aur  kya  karte   jaldi - jaldee  meiN

PhooloN - PhooloN  pe   Mandlaa'ee  thee
Aa   gaye   rang   saare   Titlee   meiN

Kal  thha  ZulfoN  meiN  ek  Gulaab  uski
Ek   Angoothhi    hai    aaj   Ungli  meiN

Chal  pade  haiN  'Hasan'  bhi  Soo - e - Haram
Umr   guzri   hai    But - parasti    meiN

( Note : Is Ghazal mein Qafia - bandi ke rawayati
sharayet ki pabandi naheeN  kee  gai hai )[/color}
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boss!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2014, 04:39:42 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2014, 05:24:39 PM »
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bahut khoooob likha hai Hasan ji aapne
sabhi ashhar bahut achhe hain as usual
khaskar ye bahut pasand aaya

PhooloN - PhooloN  pe   Mandlaa'ee  thee
Aa   gaye   rang   saare   Titlee   meiN


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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2014, 05:47:35 PM »
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bahut bahut khub hasan sahab
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2014, 07:23:33 PM »
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bahut khoob Hasan sahab bahut umdaah peshkash.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2014, 08:42:48 PM »
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वाह....वाह....बहुत ही उम्दा पेशकश....

वैसे तो सारे ही आशार एक से बढ़ कर एक हैं, पर मुझे ये कुछ ज्यादा ही अच्छे लगे...

Kal  thha  ZulfoN  meiN  ek  Gulaab  uski
Ek   Angoothhi    hai    aaj   Ungli  meiN

Chal  pade  haiN  'Hasan'  bhi  Soo - e - Haram
Umr   guzri   hai    But - parasti    meiN

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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2014, 12:25:48 AM »
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Aadaab Sir
umda peshkash
Chal  pade  haiN  'Hasan'  bhi  Soo - e - Haram
Umr   guzri   hai    But - parasti    meiN
bahut badhiya.
accha kiya aapne note likh diya hai.
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«Reply #11 on: April 23, 2014, 04:57:55 PM »
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Sahel saheb , Housman afzai k liye bahut shukrguzar hoon
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«Reply #12 on: April 23, 2014, 06:15:45 PM »
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Mahutram Hasan Sahab Salam ,,

Apki ghazal parhi mustafeed o mahezooz hua ..Bala sher nikale hain aapne ….Ek ek sher Apki shayarana salahiyatun ka pata deta hai ..zindabad ..hazaron dad

Bhai ETA se to iqbal aur ghalib jaise shair bhi na bach sake phir apki aur hamari bisaat hi kya hai …


Saare jahan se acha hindusitan hamara
Hum bulbule hain iske ye gulsitan hamara
----Eqbal

Deegar Qawafi aap bahetar jaante hain jahan wagairah

Bus mushkil hai har ik kaam ka asaan hona
Aadmi ko bhi muyassar nahi insaan hona

Mirza ghalib

Deegar qawafi aap bahetar jaante hain

Dua go

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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2014, 07:55:54 PM »
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Saini saheb shukrguzar hoon
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2014, 08:14:31 PM »
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Bahot shandar khubsurat ghazal kahi hai Siddiqui sahib. Daad pesh karta hun. Ye sher bahot achha laga:

Unko   dekha , Nazar  se   choom  liya
Aur  kya  karte   jaldi - jaldee  meiN
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