UMR GUZRI HAI BUT - PARASTI MEIN ....................... HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: April 24, 2014, 01:18:46 AM »
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Zindagi   jeena   tang - dasti   meiN
Hai  safar  sagaroN  ka  Kashti  meiN

Eik   chingaari  ka   tamaasha   thha
Lag  gai   Aag   saari   basti   meiN

Rukh  pe   Gesu   gira   liye   usnay
Chhup   gaya   Maahtab   Badli   meiN

Waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Hasan sir, dheroN daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #16 on: April 25, 2014, 01:40:52 PM »
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Shukria Shireen Hakkani saheba.Khush rahye.
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«Reply #17 on: April 25, 2014, 10:05:41 PM »
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Shukria Qalb saheb
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«Reply #18 on: April 26, 2014, 12:07:10 PM »
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Thanksssss,Ravinderji.God bless you.
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«Reply #19 on: May 01, 2014, 11:53:38 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 22, 2014, 05:24:39 PM
bahut khoooob likha hai Hasan ji aapne
sabhi ashhar bahut achhe hain as usual
khaskar ye bahut pasand aaya

PhooloN - PhooloN  pe   Mandlaa'ee  thee
Aa   gaye   rang   saare   Titlee   meiN


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Shukriya Suresh Sangwan ji . Salamat rahein
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«Reply #20 on: May 04, 2014, 06:10:58 PM »
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Quote from: mann.mann on April 22, 2014, 05:47:35 PM
bahut bahut khub hasan sahab
Thanks Mann ji .
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«Reply #21 on: May 05, 2014, 10:07:55 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on April 22, 2014, 07:23:33 PM
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bahut khoob Hasan sahab bahut umdaah peshkash.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

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Thanks Touhid ji . bahut bahut duaaein.
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«Reply #22 on: May 06, 2014, 03:57:09 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 22, 2014, 01:32:09 PM

Zindagi   jeena   tang - dasti   meiN
Hai  safar  sagaroN  ka  Kashti  meiN

Eik   chingaari  ka   tamaasha   thha
Lag  gai   Aag   saari   basti   meiN

Rukh  pe   Gesu   gira   liye   usnay
Chhup   gaya   Maahtab   Badli   meiN

Unko   dekha , Nazar  se   choom  liya
Aur  kya  karte   jaldi - jaldee  meiN

PhooloN - PhooloN  pe   Mandlaa'ee  thee
Aa   gaye   rang   saare   Titlee   meiN

Kal  thha  ZulfoN  meiN  ek  Gulaab  uski
Ek   Angoothhi    hai    aaj   Ungli  meiN

Chal  pade  haiN  'Hasan'  bhi  Soo - e - Haram
Umr   guzri   hai    But - parasti    meiN

( Note : Is Ghazal mein Qafia - bandi ke rawayati
sharayet ki pabandi naheeN  kee  gai hai )[/color}


Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Saheb...

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«Reply #23 on: July 24, 2014, 03:18:27 PM »
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THANKS AMIT JI . SALAMAT RAHYE.
Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on April 22, 2014, 08:42:48 PM
वाह....वाह....बहुत ही उम्दा पेशकश....

वैसे तो सारे ही आशार एक से बढ़ कर एक हैं, पर मुझे ये कुछ ज्यादा ही अच्छे लगे...

Kal  thha  ZulfoN  meiN  ek  Gulaab  uski
Ek   Angoothhi    hai    aaj   Ungli  meiN

Chal  pade  haiN  'Hasan'  bhi  Soo - e - Haram
Umr   guzri   hai    But - parasti    meiN

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«Reply #24 on: July 26, 2014, 10:54:38 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab...!

Mashaa Allaah janab kia kahne waaH behad pyaari pur asar pur lutf kalaam kahi hai janab...

Behad khoobsurat ashaar haiN sabhi bus dil shaad ho gaya is murrasa kalaam ko paa kar...

Is laa jawaab kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Bazm ko roshan O aabaad karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 22, 2014, 01:32:09 PM

Zindagi   jeena   tang - dasti   meiN
Hai  safar  sagaroN  ka  Kashti  meiN

Eik   chingaari  ka   tamaasha   thha
Lag  gai   Aag   saari   basti   meiN

Rukh  pe   Gesu   gira   liye   usnay
Chhup   gaya   Maahtab   Badli   meiN

Unko   dekha , Nazar  se   choom  liya
Aur  kya  karte   jaldi - jaldee  meiN

PhooloN - PhooloN  pe   Mandlaa'ee  thee
Aa   gaye   rang   saare   Titlee   meiN

Kal  thha  ZulfoN  meiN  ek  Gulaab  uski
Ek   Angoothhi    hai    aaj   Ungli  meiN

Chal  pade  haiN  'Hasan'  bhi  Soo - e - Haram
Umr   guzri   hai    But - parasti    meiN

( Note : Is Ghazal mein Qafia - bandi ke rawayati
sharayet ki pabandi naheeN  kee  gai hai )[/color}
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«Reply #25 on: July 30, 2014, 03:06:39 PM »
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waah waah, bahut khoob
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«Reply #26 on: August 06, 2014, 02:32:00 AM »
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Quote from: ~Chiragh~ on April 23, 2014, 12:25:48 AM
Aadaab Sir
umda peshkash
Chal  pade  haiN  'Hasan'  bhi  Soo - e - Haram
Umr   guzri   hai    But - parasti    meiN
bahut badhiya.
accha kiya aapne note likh diya hai.
Mukeshji , Bahut shukrguzar hoon aapka .Khush rahye .
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«Reply #27 on: August 07, 2014, 02:40:16 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 23, 2014, 06:15:45 PM
Mahutram Hasan Sahab Salam ,,

Apki ghazal parhi mustafeed o mahezooz hua ..Bala sher nikale hain aapne ….Ek ek sher Apki shayarana salahiyatun ka pata deta hai ..zindabad ..hazaron dad

Bhai ETA se to iqbal aur ghalib jaise shair bhi na bach sake phir apki aur hamari bisaat hi kya hai …


Saare jahan se acha hindusitan hamara
Hum bulbule hain iske ye gulsitan hamara
----Eqbal

Deegar Qawafi aap bahetar jaante hain jahan wagairah

Bus mushkil hai har ik kaam ka asaan hona
Aadmi ko bhi muyassar nahi insaan hona

Mirza ghalib

Deegar qawafi aap bahetar jaante hain

Dua go

Qadeertoopchi
Shukria Qadeer Junaid saheb Ghazal ki pazeerai ka aur 2 achhi misaalon se mustafeed karne k liye . Khush rahye .
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«Reply #28 on: August 13, 2014, 04:13:15 AM »
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Pazeerai ke liye bahut bahut shukria Riaz Ashna saheb . Salamat rahye .
Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on April 23, 2014, 08:14:31 PM
Bahot shandar khubsurat ghazal kahi hai Siddiqui sahib. Daad pesh karta hun. Ye sher bahot achha laga:

Unko   dekha , Nazar  se   choom  liya
Aur  kya  karte   jaldi - jaldee  meiN
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«Reply #29 on: August 13, 2014, 09:12:59 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on April 24, 2014, 01:18:46 AM
Zindagi   jeena   tang - dasti   meiN
Hai  safar  sagaroN  ka  Kashti  meiN

Eik   chingaari  ka   tamaasha   thha
Lag  gai   Aag   saari   basti   meiN

Rukh  pe   Gesu   gira   liye   usnay
Chhup   gaya   Maahtab   Badli   meiN

Waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Hasan sir, dheroN daad aur ek Rau.
Shukria , duaaein janab Iftakhar Ahmad saheb
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