Umr Kaat Di Maine

by suman59 on February 11, 2013, 02:57:27 AM
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Umr kaat di maine, dosti nibane mein
Fir bhi hai kahan koyi, mera is zamane mein

Jisko maine samjha tha, zindgee badal dega 
Aag vo laga baita, mere aashiyane mein

Intejaar karte hai  saath unke chalne ka 
Vaqt thahra  thahra hai, unka aane jaane mein

Jo sada hi laati thi unke aane ki aahat 
Rukh unheeN  hawaoN ka ab hai aajmane mein

Kisne ye badal daale, mayine hi chahat ke
Khushbuwon ka aalam hai, dil ke is thikaane mein

Jaaye nah koi maula khaali haath is dar se
Rehmete ata kar de, is gareeb-khane mein

Ae hawa bata do jaake aaj unse dil ka haal
Baad muddadon ke bhi chah is diwaane mein..
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2013, 03:00:45 AM »
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bohut khoob ma"m bohut umda daad qubool kareN
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2013, 03:07:31 AM »
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bhut khub ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2013, 03:42:52 AM »
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Beautiful!!!!!!Umda.
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2013, 03:52:15 AM »
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waah waah bdee khoobsoorat ghazal se nawaazaa hai bazm ko dheron daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2013, 04:35:58 AM »
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bahut sunder sumanjee
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2013, 04:57:18 AM »
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bahut  khubsurat  ghazal  hai , Suman ji . dheron  mubarakbad .
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2013, 05:32:27 AM »
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Behatreen ghazal..
wah wah wah
khayaal o ehsaas par khaas daad deta hun..
keep it up.
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2013, 06:26:29 AM »
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Umr kaat di maine, dosti nibane mein
Fir bhi hai kahan koyi, mera is zamane mein

Jisko maine samjha tha, zindgee badal dega 
Aag vo laga baita, mere aashiyane mein

Intejaar karte hai  saath unke chalne ka 
Vaqt thahra  thahra hai, unka aane jaane mein

Jo sada hi laati thi unke aane ki aahat 
Rukh unheeN  hawaoN ka ab hai aajmane mein

Kisne ye badal daale, mayine hi chahat ke
Khushbuwon ka aalam hai, dil ke is thikaane mein

Jaaye nah koi maula khaali haath is dar se
Rehmete ata kar de, is gareeb-khane mein

Ae hawa bata do jaake aaj unse dil ka haal
Baad muddadon ke bhi chah is diwaane mein..


naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice
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shubham goyal
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2013, 06:55:18 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2013, 06:58:03 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai suman jee. so beautiful lines. bahut khoob aapne likha hai. dheron daad
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2013, 07:22:45 AM »
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bht khoob ghazal
daad daad
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2013, 07:23:17 AM »
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bht khoob ghazal
daad daad
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«Reply #13 on: February 11, 2013, 11:00:13 AM »
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Suman Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne badi hi khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai jee...
Gazab ke gehre aur umdaa ashaar kahe hai... Usual Smile

Matle se lekar maqte tak bade hi khoobsurat khayaaloN ka muzahera
kiya hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhti rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye...


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: February 11, 2013, 11:10:03 AM »
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Umr kaat di maine, dosti nibane mein
Fir bhi hai kahan koyi, mera is zamane mein
yahi to ghalti ki aap ne.thoda khudgarz hona padta hai. take the world in your stride Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Jisko maine samjha tha, zindgee badal dega 
Aag vo laga baita, mere aashiyane mein
itna bhi bharosar acha nahin icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Intejaar karte hai  saath unke chalne ka 
Vaqt thahra  thahra hai, unka aane jaane mein
time is money and vice versa . why we only keep on waiting someone Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Jo sada hi laati thi unke aane ki aahat 
Rukh unheeN  hawaoN ka ab hai aajmane mein
bahut khoob .............! Applause Applause Applause
Kisne ye badal daale, mayine hi chahat ke
Khushbuwon ka aalam hai, dil ke is thikaane mein
zor mohabbat ka ek sa nahin rahta her waqt.
Jaaye nah koi maula khaali haath is dar se
Rehmete ata kar de, is gareeb-khane mein
wah bahut khoob amin ............! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Ae hawa bata do jaake aaj unse dil ka haal
Baad muddadon ke bhi chah is diwaane mein..

sharaab ye rindon ki diwaani kab se hui icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

khushboodaar kalaam suman ji.............!
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