Umr Kaat Di Maine

by suman59 on February 11, 2013, 02:57:27 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 11, 2013, 12:47:24 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut khoooooooooooooooob suman ji.......
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«Reply #16 on: February 11, 2013, 01:26:37 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut khoob
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«Reply #17 on: February 11, 2013, 06:36:35 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Suman ji.....!!!
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«Reply #18 on: February 12, 2013, 10:20:07 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #19 on: February 14, 2013, 03:47:55 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on February 11, 2013, 02:57:27 AM
Umr kaat di maine, dosti nibane mein
Fir bhi hai kahan koyi, mera is zamane mein

Jisko maine samjha tha, zindgee badal dega 
Aag vo laga baita, mere aashiyane mein

Intejaar karte hai  saath unke chalne ka 
Vaqt thahra  thahra hai, unka aane jaane mein

Jo sada hi laati thi unke aane ki aahat 
Rukh unheeN  hawaoN ka ab hai aajmane mein

Kisne ye badal daale, mayine hi chahat ke
Khushbuwon ka aalam hai, dil ke is thikaane mein

Jaaye nah koi maula khaali haath is dar se
Rehmete ata kar de, is gareeb-khane mein

Ae hawa bata do jaake aaj unse dil ka haal
Baad muddadon ke bhi chah is diwaane mein..

WaaH ! Kyaa Kahne ... Purwaqaar Kalaam

Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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«Reply #20 on: February 16, 2013, 09:56:56 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on February 11, 2013, 03:00:45 AM
bohut khoob ma"m bohut umda daad qubool kareN

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Aarish jee. is baar behr mein rehkar likhne ki koshish ki thi.

Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on February 11, 2013, 03:07:31 AM
bhut khub ji

thank lyou Rajan jee

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on February 11, 2013, 03:42:52 AM
Beautiful!!!!!!Umda.

shukriya Ravi jee
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«Reply #21 on: February 16, 2013, 09:57:53 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 11, 2013, 03:52:15 AM
waah waah bdee khoobsoorat ghazal se nawaazaa hai bazm ko dheron daad aur mubarakbaad

shukriya saini sb.
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«Reply #22 on: February 16, 2013, 09:59:26 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 11, 2013, 04:57:18 AM
bahut  khubsurat  ghazal  hai , Suman ji . dheron  mubarakbad .

aapka bahut bahut shukriya sir. seekh rahi hu aap jaison ko padkar. galatiyon mein hame zarur sudariyega
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«Reply #23 on: February 16, 2013, 10:00:05 AM »
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Quote from: poonamA on February 11, 2013, 04:35:58 AM
bahut sunder sumanjee
thanks Poonama jee
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«Reply #24 on: February 16, 2013, 10:02:18 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on February 11, 2013, 05:32:27 AM
Behatreen ghazal..
wah wah wah
khayaal o ehsaas par khaas daad deta hun..
keep it up.
aap ka bahut bahut shukriya mkv jee. ghazal khoobsurat karne ka sab se bada yogdaan aap jaison se seekhne se hi huyi hai. ek aur baar aapka shukriyada karna chahungi mkv jee.
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«Reply #25 on: February 16, 2013, 10:03:47 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on February 11, 2013, 06:26:29 AM

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice

thank you K_A jee

Quote from: shubham goyal on February 11, 2013, 06:55:18 AM
beautiful

Thank you Goyal jee
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«Reply #26 on: February 16, 2013, 10:05:15 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on February 11, 2013, 06:58:03 AM
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kya baat hai suman jee. so beautiful lines. bahut khoob aapne likha hai. dheron daad

thank you very much aqsh

Quote from: sarfira on February 11, 2013, 07:22:45 AM
bht khoob ghazal
daad daad

shukriya subhash jee
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«Reply #27 on: February 16, 2013, 10:07:47 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 11, 2013, 11:00:13 AM
Suman Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne badi hi khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai jee...
Gazab ke gehre aur umdaa ashaar kahe hai... Usual Smile

Matle se lekar maqte tak bade hi khoobsurat khayaaloN ka muzahera
kiya hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhti rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye...


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Yeh to aap jaison ke sahayata se likha gaya hai. bahr ka dyaan rakhte huye likha hai. aap ne tarif ki yahi mere liye bahut hai. thank you very much parwaaz jee

Quote from: Sheba on February 11, 2013, 11:10:03 AM
khushboodaar kalaam suman ji.............!
aap ka pyara comments k liye thank you Sheba
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«Reply #28 on: February 16, 2013, 10:08:42 AM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on February 11, 2013, 12:47:24 PM
bahut bahut bahut khoooooooooooooooob suman ji.......
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thank u vimmi jee
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«Reply #29 on: February 16, 2013, 10:09:19 AM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on February 11, 2013, 01:26:37 PM
bahut khoob bahut khoob
shukriya anmolarora jee
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