Umra baaqee hai, 'abd', roothney-manaaney ko!!

by abdbundeli on July 11, 2009, 08:58:58 AM
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Sochtaa huun, ki, tumhain khat likhoon bulaaney ko!
Yaad aatee hai tumhaaree tabhee rulaaney ko!!

Jaagtey khwaab deykhtey huye so jaataa huun:
Jaag, paataa huun, par, ujaarh aashyaaney ko!

Tamaam kaayinaat sey nahin haasil kuchh bhee;
Arsh haazir hai, go ki, taan shaamiyaaney ko!

Bagair teyrey, shama'a koun jalaayegaa aa?
Barq hai, go ki, muqarrar mujhey jalaaney ko!

Waaydah thaa, ki, lout aaougey maheeney mein!
Dahar chukey hain: kyaa bachaa hai aazmaaney ko?

Azal sey sabra kar rahaa hun, ki, tum aaougey!
Faraar ho na jaaye rooh, khud hi jaaney ko?

Khoob hai aakhiree andaaz-e-mustahaq, mahboob!
Daawar-e-hashra muntazir hai phir milaaney ko?

Hashra ka din to abhi noor-e-toor hai: aaou!
Umra baaqee hai, 'abd', roothney-manaaney ko!!

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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2009, 09:30:36 AM »
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Suna tha bhool bhaitha hain woh mujhko

Lo hazir hain banda phir zakhm khane ko....
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2009, 09:32:32 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 11, 2009, 08:58:58 AM

Sochtaa huun, ki, tumhain khat likhoon bulaaney ko!
Yaad aatee hai tumhaaree tabhee rulaaney ko!!

Jaagtey khwaab deykhtey huye so jaataa huun:
Jaag, paataa huun, par, ujaarh aashyaaney ko!

Tamaam kaayinaat sey nahin haasil kuchh bhee;
Arsh haazir hai, go ki, taan shaamiyaaney ko!

Bagair teyrey, shama'a koun jalaayegaa aa?
Barq hai, go ki, muqarrar mujhey jalaaney ko!

Waaydah thaa, ki, lout aaougey maheeney mein!
Dahar chukey hain: kyaa bachaa hai aazmaaney ko?

Azal sey sabra kar rahaa hun, ki, tum aaougey!
Faraar ho na jaaye rooh, khud hi jaaney ko?

Khoob hai aakhiree andaaz-e-mustahaq, mahboob!
Daawar-e-hashra muntazir hai phir milaaney ko?

Hashra ka din to abhi noor-e-toor hai: aaou!
Umra baaqee hai, 'abd', roothney-manaaney ko!!

                                    - abd bundeli


Waah ABD ji kya Ghazal pesh ki hai. Bahoot hi Shandhaar , Bahoot Umda likha hai .. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2009, 02:16:30 PM »
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Quote from: Dastbardaar on July 11, 2009, 09:30:36 AM
Suna tha bhool bhaitha hain woh mujhko

Lo hazir hain banda phir zakhm khane ko....

Shukriyah! Deyr ho rahee hai bahut aaney mein:
Har lamhah, beyqaraar hai unhain jagaaney ko!
Nisf shab hai: guzar na jaaye, ab to aa jaaou;
Bahee hai baad-e-nisf-shab hamain sulaaney ko!!

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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2009, 02:19:47 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 11, 2009, 09:32:32 AM
Waah ABD ji kya Ghazal pesh ki hai. Bahoot hi Shandhaar , Bahoot Umda likha hai .. Bahoot Khoob!
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Sophi ji!
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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2009, 02:35:38 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 11, 2009, 12:27:22 PM
Applause Applause  Applause bahot hi sundar ghazal likhi hai
aapne Abd ji aur hamesha ki tarah behatareen ashaar

bahot khoob

ek koshish

ye mohabbat hai hi aisi ki jaam machal uthhe
ki mohabbat ki khushi se hi mohabbat hai muskuraane ko


aisi dilnashi mahfil saja daali hai aapne in ashaaron se
kashish tham na saki,dil ki dhadkane kah uthi kuch likh jane ko

Bahut-bahut shukriyah @kaash ji!

Jigar kee baat, jigar sey sunaayi jaatee hai:
Khairmaqdam mein, khuley dil ko kharhaa paatee hai!
Dil kaa dar khol key rakhtey hain jahaan dilwaaley;
Sadaa-e-dil wahaan beyrok chalee aatee hai!!
                                                           

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«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2009, 02:50:31 PM »
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kya baat hai abd ji........

mehfil sazaa bahetha hun ,tere  intezaar mein,
kab tak roothi rahogi,aur aazmaaogi mujhe pyaar mein.
dharkane badti jaa rahi hai,tujse milne ko,
chod de zidd apni,ki aajaa sanam,
umr baaqee hai,roothney-manaaney ko.
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«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2009, 03:13:00 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 11, 2009, 02:50:31 PM
kya baat hai abd ji........

mehfil sazaa bahetha hun ,tere  intezaar mein,
kab tak roothi rahogi,aur aazmaaogi mujhe pyaar mein.
dharkane badti jaa rahi hai,tujse milne ko,
chod de zidd apni,ki aajaa sanam,
umr baaqee hai,roothney-manaaney ko.


Dhanyawaad cara ji! Kyaa hi tasawwur hai!

Teyraa, meyrey hrudaya mein,
Hai madhu-poorit sthaan!
Too meyraa bhagwaan hai,
Mein teyraa anugaan!!

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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2009, 02:26:05 AM »
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Wow lovely gazal Uncle ji....  Applause

@Kaash ji, Dastbardar ji, and Cara ji.... aap sab ne b bahut accha saat diya hai.  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2009, 03:38:22 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 11, 2009, 08:58:58 AM

Sochtaa huun, ki, tumhain khat likhoon bulaaney ko!
Yaad aatee hai tumhaaree tabhee rulaaney ko!!

Jaagtey khwaab deykhtey huye so jaataa huun:
Jaag, paataa huun, par, ujaarh aashyaaney ko!

Tamaam kaayinaat sey nahin haasil kuchh bhee;
Arsh haazir hai, go ki, taan shaamiyaaney ko!

Bagair teyrey, shama'a koun jalaayegaa aa?
Barq hai, go ki, muqarrar mujhey jalaaney ko!

Waaydah thaa, ki, lout aaougey maheeney mein!
Dahar chukey hain: kyaa bachaa hai aazmaaney ko?

Azal sey sabra kar rahaa hun, ki, tum aaougey!
Faraar ho na jaaye rooh, khud hi jaaney ko?

Khoob hai aakhiree andaaz-e-mustahaq, mahboob!
Daawar-e-hashra muntazir hai phir milaaney ko?

Hashra ka din to abhi noor-e-toor hai: aaou!
Umra baaqee hai, 'abd', roothney-manaaney ko!!

                                    - abd bundeli


Abd Ji... Bahut he sundar Ghazal hai!  Daad qabool karein! Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2009, 03:41:27 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 11, 2009, 12:27:22 PM
Applause Applause  Applause bahot hi sundar ghazal likhi hai
aapne Abd ji aur hamesha ki tarah behatareen ashaar

bahot khoob

ek koshish

ye mohabbat hai hi aisi ki jaam machal uthhe
ki mohabbat ki khushi se hi mohabbat hai muskuraane ko


aisi dilnashi mahfil saja daali hai aapne in ashaaron se
kashish tham na saki,dil ki dhadkane kah uthi kuch likh jane ko

Bahut khoobsurat ashaar hain, Kaash Ji! Applause


Quote from: cara on July 11, 2009, 02:50:31 PM
kya baat hai abd ji........

mehfil sazaa bahetha hun ,tere  intezaar mein,
kab tak roothi rahogi,aur aazmaaogi mujhe pyaar mein.
dharkane badti jaa rahi hai,tujse milne ko,
chod de zidd apni,ki aajaa sanam,
umr baaqee hai,roothney-manaaney ko.


Bahut khoob, Cara Ji! Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 13, 2009, 07:33:29 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 13, 2009, 02:26:05 AM
Wow lovely gazal Uncle ji....  Applause

@Kaash ji, Dastbardar ji, and Cara ji.... aap sab ne b bahut accha saat diya hai.  Thumbs UP

Thanks a lot Roja!
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«Reply #12 on: July 13, 2009, 07:35:04 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on July 13, 2009, 03:38:22 AM
Abd Ji... Bahut he sundar Ghazal hai!  Daad qabool karein! Applause Applause

Thanks a lot Deepati!
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«Reply #13 on: July 13, 2009, 07:41:08 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,excellent,kamaal ka likha aapne,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause :clap:beautiful lines by Kaash ji and Cara ji.
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«Reply #14 on: July 13, 2009, 08:06:22 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 13, 2009, 07:41:08 AM
Wah wah Abd ji,excellent,kamaal ka likha aapne,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause :clap:beautiful lines by Kaash ji and Cara ji.
Thanks a lot Madhu!
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