Un key aaney ki ab umeed naheen!

by abdbundeli on May 17, 2009, 07:45:18 AM
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Apney hissey mein aaj deed naheen!
Un key aaney ki ab umeed naheen!

Chal rahaa huun: to, jee rahaa, samjho!
Go ki, raah-e-talab akeed# naheen!!

Dharhkanoun kaa nisaab## hai teyraa:
Qarzkhwaahee hai, kuchh jadeed* naheen!

Kyaa huaa hai? Mujhey naheen maalum!
Un kaa, aayaa abhee jareed** naheen!!

Aashiyaan ab kahaan banaauun mein?
Haath mein, do-gazee kadeed@ naheen!

Aur bhi dar hain, jahaan par tum ho!
Eik dar hee wahaan majeed@@ naheen!!

Talaash mein huun, go ki, maalum hai:
Tu nihaan hai; kaheen padeed$ naheen!!

Yahaan to, kaam kaa naheen kuchh bhee!
Kyaa wahaan hai, ki, jo mufeed naheen?

Mukhaad’at$$ hai yahaan kee fitrat;
Par wahaan par koyi mukeed+ naheen!

Too naheen gar, to, pukaaroon kis ko?
Koun meyraa hai, jo faqeed++ naheen?

Paak hai teyree aastaan, mahboob!
Rind huun us kaa mein, hameed^ naheen!

Rah hai pur-khaar teyree, andhiyaaree!
Mein anaasir^^ huun, pur-hadeed> naheen!

Aur bhee, hijra mein muqayyad>> hain!
Eik too hee, ‘abd’, fareed< naheen!!

#    Non-changably strong;  
## The capital;
*    New;
** The informer, The messenger;
@   Barren/waste land;
@@Worshipable; Respectfully established;
$   Numaayaan; Perceivable;
$$ Deception; The act of deceiving;
+  Some one who deceives;
++Some one who is not easily found or not found at all;
^  Praised, Sacred;
^^Basic elements;
>  Made wholly of iron;  
>>Imprisoned;
<  Alone, Jis kaa koyi saanee na ho.
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2009, 07:50:17 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob,abd ji,bahut acha likha aapne,
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2009, 07:53:59 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 17, 2009, 07:50:17 AM
bahut bahut khoob,abd ji,bahut acha likha aapne,
Thanks madhuwesh!
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2009, 01:53:16 PM »
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Nahi unko koi haq, kare shikwa mere amal ka

Jo khamosh rahe har dum, ki hame taqeed* nahi....

-SG-

* Suggest Something or Warn about something
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2009, 01:56:53 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 17, 2009, 07:45:18 AM
Apney hissey mein aaj deed naheen!
Un key aaney ki ab umeed naheen!

Chal rahaa huun: to, jee rahaa, samjho!
Go ki, raah-e-talab akeed# naheen!!

Dharhkanoun kaa nisaab## hai teyraa:
Qarzkhwaahee hai, kuchh jadeed* naheen!

Kyaa huaa hai? Mujhey naheen maalum!
Un kaa, aayaa abhee jareed** naheen!!

Aashiyaan ab kahaan banaauun mein?
Haath mein, do-gazee kadeed@ naheen!

Aur bhi dar hain, jahaan par tum ho!
Eik dar hee wahaan majeed@@ naheen!!

Talaash mein huun, go ki, maalum hai:
Tu nihaan hai; kaheen padeed$ naheen!!

Yahaan to, kaam kaa naheen kuchh bhee!
Kyaa wahaan hai, ki, jo mufeed naheen?

Mukhaad’at$$ hai yahaan kee fitrat;
Par wahaan par koyi mukeed+ naheen!

Too naheen gar, to, pukaaroon kis ko?
Koun meyraa hai, jo faqeed++ naheen?

Paak hai teyree aastaan, mahboob!
Rind huun us kaa mein, hameed^ naheen!

Rah hai pur-khaar teyree, andhiyaaree!
Mein anaasir^^ huun, pur-hadeed> naheen!

Aur bhee, hijra mein muqayyad>> hain!
Eik too hee, ‘abd’, fareed< naheen!!

#    Non-changably strong;  
## The capital;
*    New;
** The informer, The messenger;
@   Barren/waste land;
@@Worshipable; Respectfully established;
$   Numaayaan; Perceivable;
$$ Deception; The act of deceiving;
+  Some one who deceives;
++Some one who is not easily found or not found at all;
^  Praised, Sacred;
^^Basic elements;
>  Made wholly of iron;  
>>Imprisoned;
<  Alone, Jis kaa koyi saanee na ho.
                                         - abd bundeli


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Bahut khoob... Uncle ji. Master piece Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2009, 02:01:26 PM »
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Wonderful creation...
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2009, 03:04:46 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 17, 2009, 01:53:16 PM
Nahi unko koi haq, kare shikwa mere amal ka

Jo khamosh rahe har dum, ki hame taqeed* nahi....

-SG-

* Suggest Something or Warn about something

Ham apney dil ki bataayen, to bataayen kaisey?
Sadaa suney na jo sun kar bhi, sunaayen kaisey?
Ham to haazir hain zamaaney sey un ky koochey mein;
Naqaab tarq, baam-e-a'am pai aayen kaisey?

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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2009, 03:12:04 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 17, 2009, 01:56:53 PM
Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob... Uncle ji. Master piece Thumbs UP
Thanks a lot Roja, 'The Poetess'! Bachchan ki 'MADHUSHALA' sey nayee 'aashiqqee' nayoun ko puraanoun ki taraf to morheygee hee!
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2009, 03:14:00 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 17, 2009, 02:01:26 PM
Wonderful creation...

Thanks a lot, {Angel} ji!
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2009, 03:15:14 PM »
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Thanks a lot Roja, 'The Poetess'! Bachchan ki 'MADHUSHALA' sey nayee 'aashiqqee' nayoun ko puraanoun ki taraf to morheygee hee!
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«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2009, 03:15:45 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha h aapne abdul bhaijaan....padhne me thodi si taklif hui...bahut umda Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: poppoetry on May 17, 2009, 03:15:45 PM
bahut bahut khoob likha h aapne abdul bhaijaan....padhne me thodi si taklif hui...bahut umda Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot, aapney takleef gawaarah kee! Aap ko gazal achchhee lagee, jaan kar khushee huyee!
Mein abdul naheen, 'abd' hoon!  Meyraa naam hai Ram Prakash Garg! Waisey 'naam' sey kyaa farq parhtaa hai? Shukriyah!
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«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2009, 03:42:56 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 17, 2009, 03:15:14 PM
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Rukh sey pardah uthhaa rahey hain woh!
Deykhiye muskuraa rahey hain woh!!
Mein hun mashriq mein, woh hain magrib mein;
Kyaa patah, kyaa bataa rahey hain woh?
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«Reply #13 on: May 18, 2009, 06:02:04 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob, Abd Ji, Shuruaat ki kuch lines to dimaag se hatt hi nahi rahi iss kadar chaa gayi hai, Bahut Hi Umda aur lajawaab lines hai sabhi, Aur bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne meanings bhi bata diye, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

God bless u.

Shally.
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Quote from: k.shael on May 18, 2009, 06:02:04 AM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob, Abd Ji, Shuruaat ki kuch lines to dimaag se hatt hi nahi rahi iss kadar chaa gayi hai, Bahut Hi Umda aur lajawaab lines hai sabhi, Aur bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne meanings bhi bata diye, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

God bless u.

Shally.
Shally ji!
Daad key liye shukriyah! Aap kaa 'aagrah' thaa, aap meyrey 'kalaam' mein 'ruchi' leyteen hain, fir kaisey na kartaa! You're welcome!WTBOMW!
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