Uneendey-uneendey nazar aa rahey ho!

by abdbundeli on March 21, 2009, 09:21:57 AM
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Kahaan husn-e-ifraat barpaa rahey ho?
Musalsal shab-o-roz yaad aa rahey ho!!

Abhee khwaab mein aa mukhaatib huye ho!
Chhitak kar abhee, fir kahan jaa rahey ho?

Naye koh par kis, ho matmah: bataaou?
Binaa toor hee noor chhalkaa rahey ho?

Kabhee roz khwaaboun mein aatey they jiddan:
Hameyshaa samajhtaa thaa, bas, aa rahey ho!

Jisey deykh khush, tum ko milteen theen khushiyaan:
Usey hee shab-o-roz tarhpaa rahey ho?

Jhijhakatey ho kyoun, meyrey aagosh sey tum?
Suno, mein wahee huun, jisey gaa rahey ho!

Naheen neend aatee hai tum ko akeyley:
Uneendey-uneendey nazar aa rahey ho!!

Chaley aaou, ab bhi hai kuchh raat baaqee;
Pareyshaan, ‘abd’, khud huye jaa rahey ho?

- abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2009, 10:43:02 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 21, 2009, 10:37:55 AM
wah wah Abs Sahab Kya Kehna
Puri Tarha Khumar Mein Dooba Hua Hai
Bohat Hi Badiya Hai Keep It Up....
Thanks Shihab ji!
         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2009, 11:52:50 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 21, 2009, 11:09:37 AM
Hasraton Ke Phool Khilne Lage Hain
Aaja Ki Armaan Machalne Lage Hain

Kabse Hai Aankhein Muntazir Teri
Aur Umeedon Ke Diye Jalne Lage Hain


Shihab ji! Kisee widesh mein jaa basey ho kyaa? Language ki grammar sey to aisaa hi lagtaa hai!

Deepak jalney do; unhain
Bujhaa na deynaa phook!
Andhiyaarey mein, mohinee,
Panth na jaaye chook!

          - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli   
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2009, 01:21:45 PM »
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wah wah wah. bahoot khoob Abd ji.

Nice addition Shihab!
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2009, 03:09:18 PM »
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Suno, main wahee hu, jisey gaa rahe ho..
Kya baat hain bhaiyaa is ek line ko padhkar to maza aa gaya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Duao me GHAYEL hain ek muddat se tumhari
Q yeh baat ABD ko kehne se sharma rahey ho
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2009, 04:01:35 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 21, 2009, 01:21:45 PM
wah wah wah. bahoot khoob Abd ji.

Thanks Sophi ji!
        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2009, 04:17:05 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 21, 2009, 03:09:18 PM
Suno, main wahee hu, jisey gaa rahe ho..
Kya baat hain bhaiyaa is ek line ko padhkar to maza aa gaya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Duao me GHAYEL hain ek muddat se tumhari
Q yeh baat ABD ko kehne se sharma rahey ho
Thanks Sajid! I'm happy to note that the poem has delighted you!

Aaou, ham sab saath hee,
Chaleyn pyaar ki leek!
Ho har mukulit kokanad#,
Apnaa punya prateek*!!

# Flowering red lotus
* Secred symbol
         
         - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2009, 06:09:34 PM »
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Bohat khoob Abd ji..

Bohat khoob Shihab ji..
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«Reply #8 on: March 22, 2009, 02:47:55 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on March 21, 2009, 06:09:34 PM
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Bohat khoob Abd ji..

Thanks honeyrose ji!
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«Reply #9 on: March 22, 2009, 04:09:34 AM »
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Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne ABD ji...

Good lines Majid brother... Good going. Keep up.
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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2009, 04:29:56 AM »
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very nice one abd,pareshaan mat hona mai hoon na,

good work dost,madhu
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«Reply #11 on: March 22, 2009, 04:53:54 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 22, 2009, 04:09:34 AM
Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne ABD ji...


Thanks you Roja!
           - abd bundeli 
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«Reply #12 on: March 22, 2009, 04:57:35 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 22, 2009, 04:29:56 AM
very nice one abd,pareshaan mat hona mai hoon na,
good work dost,madhu

Thanks a lot madhuwesh! It's because of the lovely friends like you, that HE always keeps me happy!
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«Reply #13 on: March 22, 2009, 05:54:34 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on March 21, 2009, 09:21:57 AM
Kahaan husn-e-ifraat barpaa rahey ho?
Musalsal shab-o-roz yaad aa rahey ho!!

Abhee khwaab mein aa mukhaatib huye ho!
Chhitak kar abhee, fir kahan jaa rahey ho?

Naye koh par kis, ho matmah: bataaou?
Binaa toor hee noor chhalkaa rahey ho?

Kabhee roz khwaaboun mein aatey they jiddan:
Hameyshaa samajhtaa thaa, bas, aa rahey ho!

Jisey deykh khush, tum ko milteen theen khushiyaan:
Usey hee shab-o-roz tarhpaa rahey ho?

Jhijhakatey ho kyoun, meyrey aagosh sey tum?
Suno, mein wahee huun, jisey gaa rahey ho!

Naheen neend aatee hai tum ko akeyley:
Uneendey-uneendey nazar aa rahey ho!!

Chaley aaou, ab bhi hai kuchh raat baaqee;
Pareyshaan, ‘abd’, khud huye jaa rahey ho?

- abd bundeli


Bahut hi khoob, Abd Ji, Hamesha ki tarah  Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 22, 2009, 07:30:05 AM »
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Nice one Abd Ji
N Good response Shihab Ji
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