Un-kahe un-chuey se alfaaz suno........................PWFS

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Sun sako to dil ki aawaaz suno,
Unkahe un-chuey se alfaaz suno.

Jin ko sikhaya tha chalna kabhi,
Karne lage hai wo parwaaz suno.

Hayaa ka koi naam-o-nisaa nahee,
Badal gaye ab unke andaaz suno.

Bojh hone lage waalid bachoN pe,
aaya ye kaisa naya riwaaz suno.

Kuch armaaN haiN mere bhi jee me,
Ek jaam ho jae to ye raaz suno.

Unki fitrat hai dil dukhaane ki,
Apne fun pe hai unko naaz suno.

Bad jae gar marz hadd se 'pankaj',
Aap hee ban jata wo ilaaz suno.

(PWFS 10/08/2012)
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2012, 01:03:15 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Pankaj ji... bahut achcha likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2012, 04:28:45 PM »
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bahut khub bahut hi lljawab superb qalamm hai  pankaj ji.....

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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2012, 05:07:24 PM »
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bahut sahi pharmaya hai pankaj ji aapne
sochta main bhi yahee hoon jo likha hai aapne

 Bojh hone lage waalid bachoN pe,
 aaya ye kaisa naya riwaaz suno.

Iska ek hi karan nazar aata hai mujhe
Din ba din girte ja rahe hain sanskaar hamare
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2012, 05:14:13 PM »
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Bahut hi damdaar ghajal pesh kee hai aapne..
kya kahne..
har ashaar..behatreen khayaalo se saja.
jabardast peshkash pankaj jee.
wah wah wah
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2012, 07:02:47 PM »
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waah waah sir ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2012, 01:25:28 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2012, 06:19:15 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 10, 2012, 01:03:15 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Pankaj ji... bahut achcha likha hai aapne....!!!
Hriday ji bahut bahut sukriya..........
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«Reply #8 on: August 11, 2012, 10:21:59 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on August 10, 2012, 04:28:45 PM
bahut khub bahut hi lljawab superb qalamm hai  pankaj ji.....

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Soudagar ji bahut bahut sukriya ..............
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«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2012, 09:32:05 AM »
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bahut hee umdaa  laajwaab
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«Reply #10 on: August 14, 2012, 12:38:56 AM »
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Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on August 10, 2012, 05:07:24 PM
bahut sahi pharmaya hai pankaj ji aapne
sochta main bhi yahee hoon jo likha hai aapne

 Bojh hone lage waalid bachoN pe,
 aaya ye kaisa naya riwaaz suno.

Iska ek hi karan nazar aata hai mujhe
Din ba din girte ja rahe hain sanskaar hamare

BAnsi ji bahut bahut sukriya qalaam ko waqt dene aur pasand karne ke liye........
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«Reply #11 on: August 14, 2012, 04:59:46 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on August 10, 2012, 05:14:13 PM
Bahut hi damdaar ghajal pesh kee hai aapne..
kya kahne..
har ashaar..behatreen khayaalo se saja.
jabardast peshkash pankaj jee.
wah wah wah
Mukesh ji bahut bahut sukriya,.............
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2012, 01:22:02 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on August 10, 2012, 07:02:47 PM
waah waah sir ji bahut khoob
LBD ji sukriya......
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Quote from: nandbahu on August 11, 2012, 01:25:28 AM
wah wah
Nand bahu ji sukriya ............
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 12, 2012, 09:32:05 AM
bahut hee umdaa  laajwaab
Bahut bahut sukriya Sir .....
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